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Capítulo 138: Decision; Training Continued

Tobirama approached a secret training ground for the ANBU units while wearing an ANBU uniform.

As he entered the field, he saw two ANBU agents standing together…

< Wood Style - Great Forest Emergence! >

One of the figures executed.

*GRRR!!!*

Huge trunks of trees appeared out of the ground slowly.

"Haha,"

"Looks like you are finally getting it,"

"Tenzō!" Hashirama laughed as he slapped Tenzō's back causing him to break his hand seal, canceling the growth of the trees.

Hah!

Hah!

Hah!

Tenzō breathed hard.

"Brother," Tobirama approached Hashirama.

"Hmm…?" Hashirama had a question mark.

A few meters away…

"I see…" Hashirama shook his head after hearing Danzō's reactions.

"As long as there's hope, I still feel he can redeem himself," Hashirama said slowly.

"Even if he does, there's no running away from the Uchiha brat if he wants his revenge," Tobirama said.

"…" Hashirama nodded silently.

"How's everything on your side?" Tobirama asked.

"I've been helping out by neatly making sleepers for the new railway tracks,"

"By the way things are going, the construction will start after the event," Hashirama said.

"I am asking about the training," Tobirama said.

"Oh, that one,"

"The kid has inherited my talent properly all right,"

"I've gotta say, Orochimaru-kun is pure genius," Hashirama nodded.

"Then what about the training now?" Tobirama asked.

"The kid is not blessed with the same stamina,"

"And he does not know my techniques properly,"

"So that's why I have been helping him out by teaching its proper execution,"

"For the stamina, however, If I teach him the sage jutsu, it might be possible for him to become even more powerful," Hashirama said.

"I see…" Tobirama nodded.

"Let's hope Danzō has a good answer," Hashirama said as he walked away.

("I only hope for him to realize it before it is completely late,") Tobirama thought as he stared at the sky.

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Hah!

Hah!

Hah!

Sasuke and Jūgo breathed down hard after a sparring session.

("My sage jutsu is okay, but I need to improve other aspects quickly…") Sasuke thought back to the time he had his Chidori training.

——FlashBack——

Sasuke stared at the round electric chakra orb in Kakashi's hand causing him to swallow his greed which was thirsting after power.

Kakashi then shut off his technique.

"By the end of your training, even if you are unable to master the Raikiri technique, I am going to teach you only the nature manipulation part of it."

"The technique will be known as…"

"CHIDORI,"

—-End of FlashBack-—

("It's time to complete that training,") Sasuke thought following which he looked at Jūgo.

"Jūgo," Sasuke called out.

"Yes, Elder brother?" Jūgo responded.

"I am going out for training right now,"

"Is there anything you need which I can buy on the way back?" Sasuke asked.

Jūgo shook his head.

"I have everything I need right here brother," Jūgo smiled.

"I see…"

"I'm off then…" Sasuke said as he turned towards the gate and headed out.

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Back in the Hidden Cloud Village on an Island Turtle…

Bee stood by a tree as he stared at the Falls of truth.

("Bee,") Gyūki called out.

("Hmm…?") Bee responded.

("What do you think of that nine tails brat taking the lead of all the Jinchūrikis?") Gyūki asked.

"♪ Nine tails on the line,

The world ain't fine ♪" Bee rapped.

("Stop rapping,") Gyūki said.

("I hear ya")

("If the ten tails is that powerful, then we've gotta avoid that from happening at all costs,")

("It don't matter who takes the seat, as long as everyone's alive, we all fine…") Bee said.

Gyūki nodded silently.

The tailed beasts may not have gotten along with each other.

However, if they all shared the same fate, it was better to look out for one another.

"huh…?" Bee looked at the waterfall from which a figure seemed to emerge.

("Sorry Eight-o, I've got company, Our talk's over, ya get me,")

("Yeah…") Bee said as he cut off from Gyūki.

*Shhhh!!!!!!*

A figure exited the waterfall.

"What's next, Bee?" The figure asked.

Bee was stunned.

("Wet shirt sticking to them fine tits…") Bee lewd gaze landed on a woman who had emerged out of the waterfall.

However, she did not seem to notice Bee's lewd gaze since his shades prevented her from seeing the intent behind.

("Looks like she got Matatabi on her side now,") Gyūki murmured.

The woman was Yugito Nii, the jinchūriki of the two-tailed Matatabi.

"Next up, we gonna battle," Bee said.

Yugito unleashed her two-tailed chakra form.

"Get ready!" She warned Bee.

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Back in the Great Elder Sage Hall of Mount Myoboku…

"The boy who calls the nine names, you are not to bring the tailed beasts together,"

"If you do, there will be a war between villages," The sage said.

"Eh…?" Naruto stared at the Great Elder.

"The hidden villages will go to war?" Lord Fukasaku asked in disbelief.

"True," The Great Elder nodded.

("Oy, Naruto,") Kurama called out.

("What are you going to do?") Kurama asked.

Naruto closed his eyes as he went into deep thought.

A moment later he smiled.

("The great elder said that I am not to bring them together, doesn't mean that I cannot save them,") Naruto grinned internally.

("You know you cannot protect them from the shadows,")

("What's the plan, Naruto?") Kurama asked.

("I still need to think of one. However, the only way is to have them fend for themselves,") Naruto said following which he looked at the elder sage.

"I understand…" Naruto bowed towards the Great Elder Sage.

"Thanks for the prophecy elder sage," Naruto said following which Naruto and Lord Fukasaku left the hall together.

*Sound of footsteps*

Naruto and Lord Fukasaku walked side by side.

"Lord Fukasaku,"

"Naruto," a voice called out.

"Gamma Boss?" Naruto looked at Gamma Bunta who was sitting on the grass that was by the side of the footpath.

"What are you doing here?" Naruto asked.

*croak*

A small frog appeared by Gamma Bunta's side.

"Old Geezer and a kid, eh?" The frog mocked.

"Gamma Kichi, watch your mouth," Gamma Bunta warned.

"How are you little one?" Lord Fukasaku smiled.

"I'm fine," Gamma Kichi replied.

Naruto walked over to Gamma Kichi.

"Sup, Gamma Kichi," Naruto smiled.

"What's a kid like you doing here in Mount Myoboku," Gamma Kichi asked.

"Haha,"

"I went to hear Great Elder's prophecy," Naruto said.

"What?" Gamma Kichi was stunned.

"Here," Naruto bent down and gave a chips packet.

"A small gift for our first meeting," Naruto said.

"Hehe,"

"Like the way, your mind works kid,"

"I like ya," Gamma Kichi said as he collected the bag of chips from Naruto.

"How ya doin boss?" Naruto asked.

"I'm okay,"

"compared to me, you seem to be doing well for yourself kid," Gamma Bunta smiled.

"Haha," Naruto laughed.

Soon Naruto bid goodbye following which he went back to the Hidden Leaf village using the teleportation well.

(Whoosh!)

Naruto appeared a kilometer or two away from the village.

("Time to go back to training I guess…") Naruto thought.

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Haruno Residence, Hidden Leaf Village…

"Mama,"

"I'm heading out," Sakura said as she closed the door.

"Be back early tonight," Her mom said from inside.

"I Will!" Sakura replied back.

Sakura was on her way to the Hidden Leaf General Hospital.

Her decision to go was considered after her conversation with Naruto the previous night.

("I will ask Tsunade-sama to take me in as her personal disciple,") Sakura thought as she walked through the streets.

"Huh…?" Sakura's eyes landed on a figure seated by a restaurant.

"Sakura," Karin called out.

"Karin," Sakura responded.

"One Katsudon!" The waiter placed Karin's order on her table.

"You like Katsudon, I see…" Sakura said after observing Karin's expressions.

"Yeah,"

"Back when I was in Hidden Grass, this was the only good thing I could get my hands on," Karin said.

Karin then took a bite.

After chewing, she looked at Sakura,

"Where were you going?" Karin asked.

"that?"

"Umm…"

"I was…" Sakura was hesitating to speak.

"I was planning to go to meet Tsunade-sama later…" Karin said as she took another bite.

"You too?" Sakura asked.

"Yeah, I had some doubts from our previous lessons…" Karin said.

"Let's head there together then," Sakura smiled.

Soon Sakura and Karin made their way to the Hospital.

"Is Tsunade-sama in?" Sakura asked at the reception.

"Sakura,"

"Karin," A voice called out.

Sakura and Karin turned around to see Shizune holding ton-ton in her hands.

*Oink!*

Ton-ton stared at Sakura and Karin.

"Tsunade-sama, wanted me to call you two over,"

"It's a good thing you guys came here by yourselves," Shizune said.

"Tsunade-sama wanted to see us both?" Sakura and Karin looked at Shizune.

"They're here!" Shizune said as she entered the room, followed by Sakura and Karin.

"Tsunade-sama,"

"You called us?" Sakura asked as the two stared at Tsunade.

"Yeah,"

"I wanted to discuss something with you two," Tsunade said as she looked at the two.

"Do you two want to be my personal disciple?" Tsunade asked.

("WHAT?")

("She asked us the question I wanted to ask?") Sakura was surprised.

"What about Ino and Hinata?" Karin asked.

"Those two have inheritances from their clan, unlike you two," Tsunade said.

"I see…" Karin murmured.

"I accept!" Sakura said as she bowed towards Tsunade.

"Mm!" Tsunade nodded in approval following which she looked towards Karin.

"I also accept!" Karin bowed towards Tsunade.

"Very Good!" Tsunade stood up from her table and approached the two.

"Aside the regular classes, from tomorrow onwards be prepared to face hell every day," Tsunade said as she placed her hands on the duo's shoulders.

"Follow Me!" Tsunade said as she headed out of the room.

"Yes!" Sakura and Karin followed behind Tsunade.

("Good Luck you guys,") Shizune prayed.

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Hidden Leaf Village, Training Field…

Kakashi stood by the stone monument as he stared at Obito's and Rin's names.

("Rin, back then I am sorry I couldn't protect you…")

("Now that I have seen the future,")

("I swear to bring back Obito, just like Naruto brought back Sasuke,")

("I'll have him live a good life before he joins you,") Kakashi thought.

"This is where you were…" Kakashi heard a voice from behind him.

"Kakashi," Sasuke uttered his name following which Kakashi turned back.

"Sasuke," Kakashi stared at him.

"I want you to train me,"

"From where we left off in the previous training," Sasuke said.

"You mean the Chidori?" Kakashi asked.

"No,"

"I mean the next stage with the shape manipulation,"

"The Raikiri," Sasuke said.

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Post Chapter Shorts

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Naruto: Hi there WebNovel and NovelPlanet readers.

Author-san: Hi!

Naruto: Author-san, You said there would be a huge guest today.

Author-san: Patience Naruto-kun, he will arrive when the time is right.

(Whoosh!) A hole opens up in the Interview room.

Thanos walks in.

Naruto: Eh? The Big Purple dude is the guest?

Thanos: Where is this place?

Author-san: Welcome Thanos-san!

Thanos: hmm…?

It's great to know that a mortal like you can recognize me.

Author-san: Indeed it's a pleasure to see you appear. I am eagerly waiting to see your appearance on the big screen.

Naruto: He's an actor?

Thanos: Where is this place?

Naruto: This is the Interview room that has been fictionally created by the author-san.

Thanos: HUH?

(Thanos looks towards author-san)

Speak mere mortal, how does one like you possess the powers of the reality stone?

Author-san: Thanos-san, I think you are misinterpreting what Naruto-kun said.

I am a humble mortal that survives amongst the half the population you have snapped. The interview room is nothing more than a room.

Thanos: I see…

(Thanos opens a breach)

Naruto: Hey, where you goin?

Author-san: Naruto-kun, don't go after him.

Naruto: Huh?

(Thanos turns back)

Author-san: Thanos-san!

Thanos: ?

Author-san: Please watch your back. (ass)

Thanos: Is that a threat?

Author-san: Nope, Just a bit of friendly advice.

Thanos: Hehe (closes the breach)

Naruto: Author-san?

Author-san: Yes, Naruto-kun.

Naruto: Who was the man named Thanos?

Author-san: Let's just say, he's someone who's going to have trouble scratching his back (ass).

Naruto: huh?

Author-san: Interview has ended for today, I need to hit the books. Naruto-kun say your lines.

Naruto: See you all tomorrow guys!

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Naruto: Next time on NRe - Training Part 3, Konohamaru's new jutsu!


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Capítulo 139: Training Part 3, Konohamaru's new jutsu!

"I want you to train me,"

"From where we left off in the previous training," Sasuke said.

"You mean the Chidori?" Kakashi asked.

"No,"

"I mean the next stage with the shape manipulation,"

"The Raikiri," Sasuke said.

Kakashi was stunned.

From what he had seen in Naruto's memories, Sasuke's usage of the Chidori put him on leagues ahead of what he himself could manage to do with the Raikiri. It was good that Sasuke was not chasing after power like in the previous timeline when he had been inflicted with the curse mark however Kakashi still had thoughts on what this Sasuke would turn into in the future, now that his training is going to advance.

("Sasuke's current need for gathering power right now is to kill his own brother Itachi,")

("Naruto did not explain to Sasuke about Itachi's past in this timeline,")

("Now how far will things change in this timeline…?") Kakashi thought.

"What is it?" Sasuke asked after seeing Kakashi being silent.

"It's nothing,"

"I'm going to show you the Raikiri right now,"

"So use your Sharingan to have a look," Kakashi said following which he brought his hands together.

< Sharingan! > Sasuke activated his eyes.

Ox → Rabbit → Monkey

Kakashi performed the hand seals following which he lifted his right hand which began to gather blue lightning energy while being supported by the left.

*Bz!*

*Bz!* *Bz!*

*Bz!* *Bz!* *Bz!*

*Bz!* *Bz!* *Bz!* *Bz!*

< Thunder Release - Raikiri! >

Kakashi announced as the Raikiri held in his hand showed off its energy creating a one-meter diameter of a lightning domain beneath it.

Sasuke's eyes were wide open as he observed the creation process from beginning to the end.

Kakashi then deactivated his technique and looked at Sasuke.

"Now that you have seen it,"

"Your Sharingan will help you complete the training at a higher rate," Kakashi referred to the Sharingan's ability to copy jutsus.

Sasuke nodded.

"Thanks for showing,"

"I'll start my training now," Sasuke said as he turned back.

("Sasuke…") Kakashi murmured as he thought back to Naruto's memories where Naruto and Sasuke fought on the hospital top.

Naruto initially had started the Rasengan to defend himself from Sasuke's fireball; however, Sasuke brought out the Chidori in response.

However, Kakashi was just in time to throw the two of them away from each other, thus preventing any mishaps from occurring.

However, the other times like the final valley battle and the other battles, he could not do the same.

"Sasuke!" Kakashi called out.

Sasuke turned back to face Kakashi.

"I hope you remember the conditions I put forth from when I taught you the Chidori," Kakashi said.

——FlashBack——

"I am going to present you with the conditions of mine," Kakashi said as he held up his finger.

"One,"

"You will only use this technique when the situation demands it."

"Mm." Sasuke nodded.

Kakashi put up two fingers towards Sasuke.

"Two,"

"You will never use this technique against a comrade from your village," Kakashi said.

—-End of FlashBack-—

Sasuke nodded in return.

"Good," Kakashi smiled towards Sasuke.

Sasuke then turned back to head off to a training on his own.

————————————

On a different training field…

< Flying Thunder God - Clone Switch! >

*Sh!*

Naruto switched with one of the twenty clones that were scattered across the field.

("Whoah!") Naruto looked at the different part of the field around him, where the clone he switched with had stood in.

The clones looked at each other.

"We did it!" All twenty Naruto jumped into the air, following which they dispelled themselves.

("That went fast,") Shū said.

("Yeah…")

("I already knew the Flying Thunder God and the Shadow Clone jutsu, to begin with,")

("All that was needed to be done was to execute the jutsu") Naruto said.

("I see…") Shū said.

("Shū,") Naruto called out.

("What is it?") Shū asked.

("About your conversation with the Sage of Six Paths,")

("Are you sure that the Byakugan can be made to awaken the Tenseigan?") Naruto asked.

("You mean you are going to teach the Sage mode to your wife?") Shū asked.

("If she can learn it, then that would be for the best, not to mention Neji as well,") Naruto said.

("Well, it all depends on how much effort you are willing to spend on them,")

("Frankly, the laws training will take you a really long time,") Shū said.

("Don't worry, with the Shadow Clone training, I can finish it faster,") Naruto smiled.

("Naruto,")

("After seeing your memories, you think I wouldn't have considered that factor?") Shū asked.

("eh?") Naruto paused.

("Naruto, if you think you can use the Shadow Clone to finish this training faster, then you are dead wrong,") Shū said.

("But why?") Naruto asked.

("Naruto,")

("Sensing laws is an entirely different thing, unlike natural energy which has an energy-based form…")

("Laws are entirely different,")

("I am not sure how to explain this properly, but let me put a comparison for you,")

("Let's say, the jutsus are the grasslands and the laws are on top of the mountain ranges,")

("Naruto, you are at the bottom of those mountains,") Shū explained.

("Okay…") Naruto responded.

("Now, If you were to use your shadow clones, they would only appear around you,")

("Am I correct?") Shū asked.

("Mm!") Naruto nodded.

("In this case, you would only be able to explore the grasslands, that is the jutsus,")

("But the laws are on top of the mountains,")

("No matter how many clones you summon,")

("All of them have to start from the bottom; get it?") Shū asked.

("I see…") Naruto said slowly as he finally realized the problem ahead of him.

("Once you climb that mountain, you will reach the first level of laws,")

("At that altitude, you can release as many shadow clones as you want to learn first level laws,")

("But that's just the first level, or in this comparison, the lowest of the mountain ranges,")

("You have to climb the other mountains to reach the other levels of laws and master them as well,")

("Get it?") Shū asked.

Naruto felt sweat appear at the side of his temples.

("I see…")

("I never expected that there would be so many hurdles before this one,") Naruto said.

("Don't worry Naruto,")

("Facing any members from my clan is far off in the future unless you plan to use one of the remaining two chances,") Shū said.

("I just hope things don't come to that,")

("It's just that even if I meet Itachi, it doesn't mean that Sasuke will let him off, on the other hand, if Sasuke lets him off then Itachi would be living with the guilt of having massacred his entire clan,")

("That's not all, there is the matter of the fourth ninja war and other things,")

("we may be strong, but the future is uncertain now, considering how things have changed so far…") Naruto thought.

In this timeline,

Haku and Zabuza are alive,

His dad came back alive along with the first and the second as well.

Orochimaru became good (at least for now)

Karin, Hinata, Sakura and Ino are training in medical ninjutsu.

Especially Karin's appearance and her feelings.

That's not all,

Even Sasuke was prevented from getting a curse mark,

The Fourth Kazekage is now alive,

A chance to save Yagura has appeared.

Everything has completely changed in the past few months of his arrival.

Moreover, this was just the beginning.

There were more things that were to take place in the near future.

("Would having Boruto and Himawari change in an unexpected way…?") Naruto feared this thought.

*Sound of footsteps*

Naruto turned to look at a figure approach him.

"Naruto," The figure called out.

"Sasuke…" Naruto murmured as he stared at Sasuke standing in front of him.

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In the middle of a forest somewhere…

Ebisu and Konohamaru stood opposite to each other.

"Are you ready?" Konohamaru asked.

"Hah, I was born ready," Ebisu laughed.

"Here we go," Konohamaru said following which the two formed a tiger hand seal.

< Transform >

(Poof!)

A huge cloud of smoke evolved.

A moment later.

"Reverse Sexy Jutsu!"

*sound of muscles squeezing*

"Hm!"

"Hm!" Konohamaru and Ebisu clenched their fists and had an upright body as they showed off their flexing muscles to each other.

Konohamaru, in particular, turned into a handsome and a muscular man, while Ebisu-sensei's was a bald hyper body-builder.

(Poof!)

The two undid their techniques.

"Honorable Grandson,"

"Splendid Work, I must say," Ebisu sensei gave a thumbs up.

"Thanks, sensei," Konohamaru bowed.

"I'm off…" Konohamaru said as he turned back and ran.

"Where are you going?" Ebisu asked.

"I am going to train with her," Konohamaru said.

"Ah…" Ebisu-sensei froze.

("That jutsu…")

("Don't tell me…") Ebisu-sensei felt the whole world turning black as he suddenly felt a shiver down his spine.

Hyūga district - Branch clan training field…

Hanabi was out again with her caretaker by her side.

*Sh!*

This sensation.

Natsu turned to look at a particular direction to see Konohamaru walk over.

"Hmph," Hanabi let out a snort upon seeing Konohamaru walk over.

"You don't seem to be tired of getting beat downs," Hanabi mocked.

"Haha,"

"My boss taught me to never back down from a challenge,"

"Especially to never give up," Konohamaru smiled.

Hanabi didn't argue for she had seen Naruto herself, especially after hearing her dad mention that he was much stronger than her, she started to have a respect for her sister's man from the bottom of her heart.

"Doesn't matter, you are still gonna lose," Hanabi said as she entered into a fighting stance.

*footstep*

Konohamaru stood in front of Hanabi as he also assumed his stance.

"Ready?" Hanabi asked.

"Are you ready to lose today?" Konohamaru asked.

"Hmph,"

"In your dreams," Hanabi said.

"As expected of the girl I like," Konohamaru nodded.

At this point, Hanabi no longer minded Konohamaru openly spouting his intention of liking her.

"Make your move," Hanabi gestured.

"I am a gentleman so, Ladies first," Konohamaru said.

"Hmph, Don't regret this," Hanabi said as she ran towards Konohamaru.

"Hehe," Konohamaru snickered.

"Hah!" Hanabi sent a palm,

(Whoosh!)

Konohamaru dodged to the side following which Hanabi sent a flurry of palms towards Konohamaru.

*Sh!*

*Sh!* *Sh!*

*Sh!* *Sh!* *Sh!*

Konohamaru kept dodging continuously.

After sparring against Hanabi for the past few days and his complete observation of her, he instinctively understood her body language and fighting styles completely.

At this point, it wouldn't be an overstatement to call him a veteran at facing Hanabi.

Hah! Hanabi sent a palm towards Konohamaru which sent him flying back.

("Now's my chance!") Konohamaru grinned as he landed on the ground.

"Haaa…." Hanabi ran towards Konohamaru.

< Transform! >

(Poof!) a cloud of smoke appeared.

"Huh?" Hanabi paused.

(Whoosh!)

The cloud slowly unraveled the figure underneath.

"Reverse Sexy Jutsu!"

"HM!" Konohamaru grunted as he squeezed out his muscles to increase his appeal.

Hanabi froze.

"I suppose you have to fall for me now," Konohamaru said with a smug face as he stood upright with his right arm showing a double biceps by flexing it while left stretched out to add to his overall hero pose which screamed out follow my direction as he pointed out with his left.

. (Aho!) .(Aho!) .(Aho!) a crow cawed as it flew over their heads.

Konohamaru shifted his gaze to Hanabi.

"YOU DAMNED PERVERT!!!!" Hanabi screamed as she flew over a landed a kick squarely on Konohamaru's face which sent him soaring a few meters away…

("WHAT…") Konohamaru stared in shock.

("She executed the surprise attack before me…?") Konohamaru thought as he flew away…

(BANG!) Konohamaru landed on the ground.

Hah!

Hah!

Hah!

Hanabi breathed in and out heavily…

"ARGH!" Konohamaru stood up once again.

("No, it must have been the jutsu itself,")

("I didn't tell BOSS that it was a young girl of 7 or 8…") Konohamaru thought.

"YOU DARE TO STAND UP?" Hanabi asked in anger.

("Damn,")

("I must quickly find something else to transform into…") Konohamaru thought.

"Haaaaa!!!!" Hanabi charged at Konohamaru once again.

("What is the only thing that she cannot harm…") Konohamaru thought as he stared at Hanabi running towards him.

"Hehe," Konohamaru snickered as he brought his hands together again.

"You have a death wish," Hanabi commented as she closed in.

< Transform! >

("Poof!") a cloud evolved around Konohamaru.

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Hey guys,

I am not gonna do interviews for a while,

Next time on NRe - Training Part 4; Sand Village Shocked


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