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Power of Ten is a DnD style novel where the main character is plagued by a curse to turn her into a Hag. Action scenes are really well done but the constant switching between POVs is a little annoying. It really pays off once both POVs really play off each other where what happens in one is explained by the other. The beginning is really tough without knowing intuitively what stats or DR or hit die mean.
This story can be counted as the highest form of quality one can find on Webnovel or any other similar website and is quite frankly more than worth to be sold as a book. The characters are diverse and interesting, the story is hauntingly addictive and the world-building is simply to die for. I binged 182 chapters in two days (the chapters are quite sizeable) and I will continue to follow this story closely in the future. That said even though I think this story deserves the highest possible rating, there are some aspects that could be improved to make the novel more accessible to people who are not veterans when it comes to Dungeons & Dragons. I sadly have never played the game and am only familiar with digital game jargon that is also used in LitRPG. The first 13/14 chapters are completely filled with build choices that are almost impossible to comprehend other than the meaning of the stats (Con, Str etc.). It would be perhaps helpful to make a page (I believe it is called a glossary) that explains all abbreviations, class abilities, differences between talents, masteries and feats and specific game terms to new people (like MAB, saves, AC etc.). I believe that this is currently the only missing requirement to really have this story embraced by the masses and take its rightful place amongst the top 3 on this website. Apart from these recommendations I can only thank the author for giving me a chance to experience reading such a gem.
I love this story, it is difficult to understand what the characters are talking about sometimes when they are disguising stats and it was difficult to keep track of the story and how the different characters are connected and it is hard to keep track of the story when flipping from nightmare to real world, nightmare is gust confusing in general. BUT❣️The fact that I kept on reading despite the difficulties showed just how good this story is, FYI this little me has vary little patience. I think it would be amazing if this story was turned into a comic I would get to see the characters and places the author created and the stats the characters are disguising would be easer to under stand. But this story becoming a comic is only my wish full thinking. 🤔 💭 🤯🥺
The author is an old hat at D&D and goes hard on the RPG elements. If you've never played table tops, or old school RPGs with ******** elements, then the beginning will be very rough. Lots of numbers, talk about modifiers, saves, Skills, and Talents. This isn't your standard LitRPG with big meaningless numbers that are just there to show progression. If you can get past all that, aren't afraid of numbers or using your googlefu to decrypt some stuff, then this story really blossoms. Combat is fun, characters are interesting, the world is well built, and MC is a true blue badass. The author loves the D&D building blocks and it shows; lots of talk of alignment (good - evil, lawful-chaotic) and it's actually meaningful (as opposed to good being a synonym with incompetent and evil being purposeless and random). A lot of the characters have particular alignments, skills or talents, that affect who they are and how they act, and they come across as appropriately eccentric at times, which is good. A character bring truly devoid of any fear, manifests in some oddities if you really think about it. Verdict: read if you can deal with heavy use of D&D acronyms and lots of numbers. It's very good.
A awesome book! There are some things that I speed past but can say that this story has me hooked. Can’t wait for more :)."........... go go needing more words to post review
great story with plenty og rpg elements the only complaint i have is that i dont know some of the acronyms and i cant seem to find them so it would be nice if there was a page for all the acronyms for us mere mortals
I don’t know how I missed the gem of a story for so long, but discovering this kept me from sleeping last night and I binge-read through up until today 5/18(162). The statistics, particularly in the beginning, sort of break the fourth wall for me, taking me out of the story, and could stand some rework for flow, but are relatively easy for me to translate and the plot and story crafting I s stellar. My biggest complaint, as always, is that there isn’t more RIGHT NOW. Keep doing the impossible and write more/better/faster.
A great novel, giving an in depth world of magic with understandable power system. Even characters that are seemingly temporary or unimportant are given their places in lore. Main characters are deep and colorful, and bring you back constantly to find out more. My favorite story on webnovel! I hope you enjoy it too!
Hi. I really like your novel. I don't understand the class system that much, but it doesn't take away of how deep and complex the world you made. Not to mention the characters. I really liked it.
Novel is interesting and different enough to make it stand out. The constant switch of view point is something I had not seem much of, still deciding if the interest from multiple storylines out ways the somewhat disjointed experience. The two biggest issues that I have are lack of a glossary or other explanation of new terms and abbreviations. This made early chapters very difficult to read. 2nd issue was that early chapters lacked in writing and editing quality. This has mostly been corrected in newer chapters.
This is a very enjoyable story. Each chapter weaves a bigger story, and they come out regularly so there is no week long waits. Shows a realistic view of a 'system' or D&D type world, with great characters who you will enjoy watching explore their reality. A lot of numbers and levels, but they are actually tied in to the story and explainable. All in all, a real diamond!
Heavy on the DnD terminology, which, I don't understand. Thankfully it can be glossed over in most cases. The biggest gripe is the very consistent use of the word 'then' instead of 'than'. It is VERY jarring and interrupts immersion greatly. Other than that, one of the best litrpgs I've ever read period.
Do you like RPGs? Do you like leveling? Do you like all the min-maxing involved? Read this stuff. It is heavily based on DnD and similar systems, first chapters are basically all about character creation and half of the novel seems to be about just leveling (and getting OP). Terms are complete Chinese to non-DnDers. And it made me reinstall NWN with PRC and play Rakshasa true neutral Dread Necro. Even though MC of this novel is neutral good and despises grays...
Interesting story. Good characters with detailed builds. word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word
Revelar spoiler
This book is so well thought out and written. The flow of the story and the build of the characters is awesome and new to me. If I give it more stars I would. How to say thank you for the book and keep it up.
As someone with no D&D background, I'm thrilled that the author succeeds in drawing in the reader by virtue of a fast-paced, action packed story that literally rips you past any numbers you don't understand as you are drawn to the next battle and evolution. Starting with an over-powered (and over-knowledged) protagonist instead of the usual weak-to-strong lets us revel as the characters rip through the world as they wish, instead of as the current week story arc requires. The characters in this lovingly crafted action epic are overpowered due to knowing the ins-and-out of their world and systems,n rather than chance encounters and storyline deus-ex-machinas gifting strength. I highly recommend you keep reading until Sama Rantha leaves the dream and the story splits (11 chapters in), it caters less to stat numbers and focuses more on world and character; it maintains both storylines at once to keep either path from getting monotonous.
it's a bit difficult to understand at the beginning and a summary to explain it would be good for new readers. I've readen you other novel (the world turned into a game after I woke up) and I really loved it. Expecting a new great novel ^^
Definitely a very interesting story which has deep and rich world and I look forward to seeing how it will progress in the future! I am sadden to see not a lot of people have found this story because it is worth trying.
I just can't. I love this kind of novel, I love RPGs, I love table top games, I know way too many systems, and I just can't for the life of me follow what the **** is going on in this novel. I understand the basic premise, it is the supposed system that is just a fever dream of madness. If it is the author's own system, they have lifted waaaay too much from existing systems without explaining any of it. If it isn't, I can't figure out what system it is based on (looked like pathfinder at first but there are way too many differences). I wanted to like this and I ended up just banging my head in frustration.
Power of Ten is a DnD style novel where the main character is plagued by a curse to turn her into a Hag. Action scenes are really well done but the constant switching between POVs is a little annoying. It really pays off once both POVs really play off each other where what happens in one is explained by the other. The beginning is really tough without knowing intuitively what stats or DR or hit die mean.
This story can be counted as the highest form of quality one can find on Webnovel or any other similar website and is quite frankly more than worth to be sold as a book. The characters are diverse and interesting, the story is hauntingly addictive and the world-building is simply to die for. I binged 182 chapters in two days (the chapters are quite sizeable) and I will continue to follow this story closely in the future. That said even though I think this story deserves the highest possible rating, there are some aspects that could be improved to make the novel more accessible to people who are not veterans when it comes to Dungeons & Dragons. I sadly have never played the game and am only familiar with digital game jargon that is also used in LitRPG. The first 13/14 chapters are completely filled with build choices that are almost impossible to comprehend other than the meaning of the stats (Con, Str etc.). It would be perhaps helpful to make a page (I believe it is called a glossary) that explains all abbreviations, class abilities, differences between talents, masteries and feats and specific game terms to new people (like MAB, saves, AC etc.). I believe that this is currently the only missing requirement to really have this story embraced by the masses and take its rightful place amongst the top 3 on this website. Apart from these recommendations I can only thank the author for giving me a chance to experience reading such a gem.
I love this story, it is difficult to understand what the characters are talking about sometimes when they are disguising stats and it was difficult to keep track of the story and how the different characters are connected and it is hard to keep track of the story when flipping from nightmare to real world, nightmare is gust confusing in general. BUT❣️The fact that I kept on reading despite the difficulties showed just how good this story is, FYI this little me has vary little patience. I think it would be amazing if this story was turned into a comic I would get to see the characters and places the author created and the stats the characters are disguising would be easer to under stand. But this story becoming a comic is only my wish full thinking. 🤔 💭 🤯🥺
The author is an old hat at D&D and goes hard on the RPG elements. If you've never played table tops, or old school RPGs with ******** elements, then the beginning will be very rough. Lots of numbers, talk about modifiers, saves, Skills, and Talents. This isn't your standard LitRPG with big meaningless numbers that are just there to show progression. If you can get past all that, aren't afraid of numbers or using your googlefu to decrypt some stuff, then this story really blossoms. Combat is fun, characters are interesting, the world is well built, and MC is a true blue badass. The author loves the D&D building blocks and it shows; lots of talk of alignment (good - evil, lawful-chaotic) and it's actually meaningful (as opposed to good being a synonym with incompetent and evil being purposeless and random). A lot of the characters have particular alignments, skills or talents, that affect who they are and how they act, and they come across as appropriately eccentric at times, which is good. A character bring truly devoid of any fear, manifests in some oddities if you really think about it. Verdict: read if you can deal with heavy use of D&D acronyms and lots of numbers. It's very good.
A awesome book! There are some things that I speed past but can say that this story has me hooked. Can’t wait for more :)."........... go go needing more words to post review
great story with plenty og rpg elements the only complaint i have is that i dont know some of the acronyms and i cant seem to find them so it would be nice if there was a page for all the acronyms for us mere mortals
I don’t know how I missed the gem of a story for so long, but discovering this kept me from sleeping last night and I binge-read through up until today 5/18(162). The statistics, particularly in the beginning, sort of break the fourth wall for me, taking me out of the story, and could stand some rework for flow, but are relatively easy for me to translate and the plot and story crafting I s stellar. My biggest complaint, as always, is that there isn’t more RIGHT NOW. Keep doing the impossible and write more/better/faster.
A great novel, giving an in depth world of magic with understandable power system. Even characters that are seemingly temporary or unimportant are given their places in lore. Main characters are deep and colorful, and bring you back constantly to find out more. My favorite story on webnovel! I hope you enjoy it too!
Hi. I really like your novel. I don't understand the class system that much, but it doesn't take away of how deep and complex the world you made. Not to mention the characters. I really liked it.
Novel is interesting and different enough to make it stand out. The constant switch of view point is something I had not seem much of, still deciding if the interest from multiple storylines out ways the somewhat disjointed experience. The two biggest issues that I have are lack of a glossary or other explanation of new terms and abbreviations. This made early chapters very difficult to read. 2nd issue was that early chapters lacked in writing and editing quality. This has mostly been corrected in newer chapters.
This is a very enjoyable story. Each chapter weaves a bigger story, and they come out regularly so there is no week long waits. Shows a realistic view of a 'system' or D&D type world, with great characters who you will enjoy watching explore their reality. A lot of numbers and levels, but they are actually tied in to the story and explainable. All in all, a real diamond!
Heavy on the DnD terminology, which, I don't understand. Thankfully it can be glossed over in most cases. The biggest gripe is the very consistent use of the word 'then' instead of 'than'. It is VERY jarring and interrupts immersion greatly. Other than that, one of the best litrpgs I've ever read period.
Do you like RPGs? Do you like leveling? Do you like all the min-maxing involved? Read this stuff. It is heavily based on DnD and similar systems, first chapters are basically all about character creation and half of the novel seems to be about just leveling (and getting OP). Terms are complete Chinese to non-DnDers. And it made me reinstall NWN with PRC and play Rakshasa true neutral Dread Necro. Even though MC of this novel is neutral good and despises grays...
Interesting story. Good characters with detailed builds. word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word word
Revelar spoiler This book is so well thought out and written. The flow of the story and the build of the characters is awesome and new to me. If I give it more stars I would. How to say thank you for the book and keep it up.
As someone with no D&D background, I'm thrilled that the author succeeds in drawing in the reader by virtue of a fast-paced, action packed story that literally rips you past any numbers you don't understand as you are drawn to the next battle and evolution. Starting with an over-powered (and over-knowledged) protagonist instead of the usual weak-to-strong lets us revel as the characters rip through the world as they wish, instead of as the current week story arc requires. The characters in this lovingly crafted action epic are overpowered due to knowing the ins-and-out of their world and systems,n rather than chance encounters and storyline deus-ex-machinas gifting strength. I highly recommend you keep reading until Sama Rantha leaves the dream and the story splits (11 chapters in), it caters less to stat numbers and focuses more on world and character; it maintains both storylines at once to keep either path from getting monotonous.
it's a bit difficult to understand at the beginning and a summary to explain it would be good for new readers. I've readen you other novel (the world turned into a game after I woke up) and I really loved it. Expecting a new great novel ^^
Definitely a very interesting story which has deep and rich world and I look forward to seeing how it will progress in the future! I am sadden to see not a lot of people have found this story because it is worth trying.
I just can't. I love this kind of novel, I love RPGs, I love table top games, I know way too many systems, and I just can't for the life of me follow what the **** is going on in this novel. I understand the basic premise, it is the supposed system that is just a fever dream of madness. If it is the author's own system, they have lifted waaaay too much from existing systems without explaining any of it. If it isn't, I can't figure out what system it is based on (looked like pathfinder at first but there are way too many differences). I wanted to like this and I ended up just banging my head in frustration.