Reborn as a Tentacle Monster

LV 5

LightCloud9

Didn't like it sorry the main character is so focus in his past even though he is in another world , Too whimpy to me and also about being guilty about the baby orcs? or was it goblins? Probably orc babies He is too doesn't have the feeling of being free. Or doesn't try to do it about than I'm scared to kill "Innocent Orc Babies " MC man the fack up you aren't only one with the problems and stop wiggling your past like an ass, It isn't important! You have PTS? WE DON'T GIVE A SHIT ! you are now a tentacle. And have a tentacle form act like one until you gain your human form . or not. Because plot twist . Morals are only to those who have power if you don't have enough power gathered and you face your trails. You will fail .also about the orc babies great job for killing them. Just hope they are not like the warcraft movies orcs because those guys have honor ,If they are hentai based orcs - yeah **** those they grow up as a rapist. Will you developed the story nicely the system is improving but the one who developed and using the system is not who I like . Even if he will grow up I will still remember what was he like

6yr 5

LV 12

Teraphoenix

So far the story is developing good and I hope that he is now more like a savage monster that is calm and scheming with the goal to devour everything. And not like that pu***y that has too much emotions I expect coldness someone that doesent care about the deaths of orc babys I mean he is a monster afterall. So he should act like one.

6yr 2

LV 5

Electez

I like it continue on with the good work man/woman

6yr 2

LV 5

exceed12

That's super i like it where it is going and story pacing also good not fast or slow good job author 👍.................................................................................

6yr 2

LV 5

uSeer

Eye of the ???????? Am I right? This sounds nice I didnt read it yet but I will, there are only nine chapter so I couldnt really judge story development and world background but I will start reading it now!!!

6yr 2

LV 13

Anthony_Huffman_1174

Why can't we have a tentacle monster like in the MCU?

8mth 1

LV 2

Jaden_Davis

I've seen enough hentai to know where this is going😏😏😏 We're no strangers to love You know the rules and so do I A full commitment's what I'm thinking of You wouldn't get this from any other guy I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it And if you ask me how I'm feeling Don't tell me you're too blind to see Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you Never gonna give you up, never gonna let you down Never gonna run around and desert you Never gonna make you cry, never gonna say goodbye Never gonna tell a lie and hurt you (Ooh give you up) (Ooh give you up) (Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give (give you up) (Ooh) never gonna give, never gonna give (give you up) We've known each other for so long Your heart's been aching but you're too shy to say it Inside we both know what's been going on We know the game and we're gonna play it I just wanna tell you how I'm feeling Gotta make you understand

3yr 1

LV 4

Pandoras_Actor

it is a good story and i like how the author is not shy when it comes to swaring and I look forward to when I returns (when is a mystery unfortunatly)

3yr 1

LV 2

Yourmomwashere

I think we all know the real reason we clicked on this novel. Kekekekekekekekekekekekekkeekekkekeekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekekek.

3yr 1

LV 13

Eye_Ball

Ghostz i love reading your book and hate at the same time because there isnt plot. I dont hate the book you wrote but i just find flaw in them but Just keep keeping on writing and dont mind this comment. Here a quote “repect other and other will repect you”

4yr 1

LV 6

Dragonfire16

Cool novel 😍😍😍😂😂😏😉😜😌😎😎😎😁🤣😉🤪😆😆🙃😂😎😏😏😁😎😁😁😂😂🙃😁😁😁😂😏🤣🤣😁😎😁😎😎😎😎😉🤪😆😍😂😁☺️😎😏🤣😉😏😏😊😘🤩🤣🤣🙃🙃😉🙃☺️😏🤣😘😏😁😏🤣😘😊😏😏😏😏

5yr

LV 6

Dragonfire16

Cool novel 😉🌐😁😅😂😁😂😄🤣😄😁😆🥳😛😊😏🧐😃😘🤪😄😂😘😍🥳😄🥳😛😎😉🤓😎🤓😆🧐😉😍🙃🧐🤓🥳🤓😆🥳😆🧐😉😍😍🤓😍🤓😇😇🤓😍😇😉😍🥳😉😆🤓😇😁

5yr

LV 4

BigShiesty

Greenfieldjj*jjjjjjjhhhhhhhhhhjhj jr. Everywhere we reintroduce all law week jew funk new FM be b new FCC grew TV crew CV new rrd wesh UW in free but raw to redrew

5yr

LV 2

Darkdevourer

Kill all the babies of the world(? Hail utchutulu? Long live to the empire :v Dunno what more to write here lol. 140 obligatory characters :'v