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5 stars I love it. going back and reading all the old story's is great I just wish they keep them and make more chapters. ❤️
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A for writing quality but F for the rest. shut down your brain if you want to read this. MC and Author are just another fan of Trash San, following him around like a little chicken following their mother. worst of all, Spirit Hall never killed off an entire village just for talented children and this no brain of an author decides to write it. the only reason Spirit Hall is seen as villain in the OG novel is because they stand against the Protagonist, and you know what happened after the so called Protagonist/Hero destroyed the so called Main Villain, countless innocent and ordinary people die while the so called Hero and his merry band enjoy their life.
Hello, I would like to talk to you about your book. Can you please contact me via Instagram. I am there as @penetratingoutlook
Really love this fan fic but it wouldve been sooo much better if you gave him a transformation like jin mori and not an ugly monkey
5 star for making me laugh in sypnosis. ( It states that the author lost his virginity a day before ch. 27.) laugh laugh2 and..............................
It starts well, but it quickly deteriorates with the mc who just follows the main group of tang san
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I really miss this. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Go Monkey King.
truly I love the story so far and have reread the story 4 times now I have you don't drop it because it amazing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's been over a year dude, when are you coming back ??????? //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Good story but why hiatus:(. Anyhow, one of the better fanfics read, some inconsistencies but fine, pls keep updating author.:(.
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I just like the story. first of all, the harem. Even if Oscar might not get any love and i feel bad about it. the relationship between Rongrong and mc is so nice and i feel like they just started getting more emotionally attached to each other and Qin Renxue I would also like to see her love blossom ... i don't know about the updates, but if this story is dropped i would be very sadge.
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It is good but douluo dalu is not the world where you try to make a harem in the first two girls I understand been together for almost there entire life the new girls like rong rong look his face I am in love
this fanfic could have become so much more.it had the potential to be a good novel,but turned out to be a porno novel. hshhsjsjsjsjjshshshshs
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UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE??????UPDATE????????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE?????
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Super. Жаль только обновлений нет, даже на патроне Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super
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A just okay story with an extremely boring follower for an mc, he’s incapable of taking action on his own without somebody else telling him what to do and is just a sidekick to the real mc Tang San. I personally stopped reading at chapter 70 because the story had just become such a boring slog to try and get through.
I really enjoy this story the writing is good characters are fun the only issues are the update speed and the fact that he just follows Tang sans story I wish he made his own adventure
What a shame this novel is dropped ?? If you write a novel please finish it don't let readers wait !!!!!!!☣️ 🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕
will he add a music type spirit ring for relaxing and it can be like headphones or Japanese harp with its ability being music generation with songs from our world just for fun
This is amazing, keep going. One of the best douluo Daly fanfics I have read. Please update. .
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WRIIIYTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPLPPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
so I'm just posting this here to ask if you'll ever finish this story or start another one just like it because lli loved how you handled the relationship the mc has with his lovers and sister
5 stars I love it. going back and reading all the old story's is great I just wish they keep them and make more chapters. ❤️
Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢 Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢 Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢 Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢 Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢 Protagonist evolves very slowly 🤢
A for writing quality but F for the rest. shut down your brain if you want to read this. MC and Author are just another fan of Trash San, following him around like a little chicken following their mother. worst of all, Spirit Hall never killed off an entire village just for talented children and this no brain of an author decides to write it. the only reason Spirit Hall is seen as villain in the OG novel is because they stand against the Protagonist, and you know what happened after the so called Protagonist/Hero destroyed the so called Main Villain, countless innocent and ordinary people die while the so called Hero and his merry band enjoy their life.
Hello, I would like to talk to you about your book. Can you please contact me via Instagram. I am there as @penetratingoutlook
Really love this fan fic but it wouldve been sooo much better if you gave him a transformation like jin mori and not an ugly monkey
5 star for making me laugh in sypnosis. ( It states that the author lost his virginity a day before ch. 27.) laugh laugh2 and..............................
It starts well, but it quickly deteriorates with the mc who just follows the main group of tang san
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Revelar spoiler I really miss this. Woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo. Go Monkey King.
truly I love the story so far and have reread the story 4 times now I have you don't drop it because it amazing[img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend][img=recommend]
It's been over a year dude, when are you coming back ??????? //////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////////
Good story but why hiatus:(. Anyhow, one of the better fanfics read, some inconsistencies but fine, pls keep updating author.:(.
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I just like the story. first of all, the harem. Even if Oscar might not get any love and i feel bad about it. the relationship between Rongrong and mc is so nice and i feel like they just started getting more emotionally attached to each other and Qin Renxue I would also like to see her love blossom ... i don't know about the updates, but if this story is dropped i would be very sadge.
Revelar spoiler It is good but douluo dalu is not the world where you try to make a harem in the first two girls I understand been together for almost there entire life the new girls like rong rong look his face I am in love
this fanfic could have become so much more.it had the potential to be a good novel,but turned out to be a porno novel. hshhsjsjsjsjjshshshshs
.x.x.x.x.xx.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x.xx.x..x.x..xx.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.xx..x..x.....x.x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x.x.x.x.x..x.x.x....x.x.x.x.x.x.x...
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE??????UPDATE????????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE???????UPDATE?????
HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM HAREM
Super. Жаль только обновлений нет, даже на патроне Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super Super
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A just okay story with an extremely boring follower for an mc, he’s incapable of taking action on his own without somebody else telling him what to do and is just a sidekick to the real mc Tang San. I personally stopped reading at chapter 70 because the story had just become such a boring slog to try and get through.
I really enjoy this story the writing is good characters are fun the only issues are the update speed and the fact that he just follows Tang sans story I wish he made his own adventure
What a shame this novel is dropped ?? If you write a novel please finish it don't let readers wait !!!!!!!☣️ 🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕🤕
will he add a music type spirit ring for relaxing and it can be like headphones or Japanese harp with its ability being music generation with songs from our world just for fun
This is amazing, keep going. One of the best douluo Daly fanfics I have read. Please update. .
Revelar spoiler WRIIIYTTTTEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE MOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOOPORRRRRRRRRRRRRRREEREEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE PLLLLLLLLLLLLLLLPLPPPPPPLLLLLLLEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAAASSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSSEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEEE
so I'm just posting this here to ask if you'll ever finish this story or start another one just like it because lli loved how you handled the relationship the mc has with his lovers and sister