My Journal of Thoughts and Poems

LV 10

Calamity671

I am going to be serious here. I am a senior in High School, so stability is something I can't promise. All I know is I will be writing when I feel as if writing is good. Or about **** in my life I need to write about. Or maybe stuff I need advice on. Either or, who the hell knows. Give advice on my life if you want. Read about my life if you want. If your not interested then piss off. Also if your one of those people who nit pick everything in a book. Piss off!!! Don't nit pick my ****. This is a journal, you nit picking a journal is like criticizing an art work, or a scientific thesis, but you have no back ground or anything related to those topics.

LV 4

Daoist_Urimiku

First of all, writing quality won't be what readers would expect in what we call professional writing, but giving the author a chance since we find out he is still in school, I'd like to give him a 4/5 for his ability to write. Why not a 5/5? It's a journal. It's not always going to follow a proper format that an essay or a novel would require, so it doesn't have to follow any rules. Grammar? Spelling? Those rules and restrictions don't apply to this piece of literature. Sure, it will help in the long run, as it will get the writer in the habit of writing, but it's not needed. Many famous writers have horrible journals or diaries with mistakes in them. While some writers have neat and perfectly written journals, it's not a mandatory rule to follow the rules of writing here. The author is using this journal as a form of writing practice, and WebNovel doesn't disallow it. Stability of Updates are great considering the author is a student and we all know that students have their own homework, assignments, and "life" to live. I give it a 4/5 for this as well since as journals go, they won't always be consistent, but it's not up to us, the readers, to decide when the author should update or not. Everything else I give a 5/5. A real-life story will have a real story development, character designs based on actual real human beings, and a world background in present day modern earth in the protagonists own home field. Quality writing starts here, and the author has it all. I MEAN IT'S A JOURNAL FOR THE DEVIL'S SAKE, rating this any lower than a 4 or 5 out of 5 is an insult to the author's way of life. I'm rooting for the author, and hopefully in the near or late future we'll be able to see original and quality "fiction" from him. Cheers! A big Cheers for Sir Calamity!

LV 4

Daoist_Urimiku

In commemoration of reaching 10 chapters, here is my final review of this. It's set up like a personal blog but in novel format. Read it and interact with the author as if this was a blog and you definitely won't complain about it not being a "novel". It's not even a novel idea but a journal is essentially a blog; just more personal and reflective than others. The main character of this story could be just about anyone. In this case, it's the author himself. Through his sharing we readers also come to realize that we are main characters of our own lives. While we may think our lives are boring, they aren't to others. It's a journal-book style blog written by a high school teenager. Writing quality? As I've mentioned before, and will mention again: It's not meant to be a professional story, grammar and spelling mistakes don't need to be perfect, but the author does his best to deliver and his loyal readers devour it all up. This is my final review. Thank you.

LV 4

Daoist_Urimiku

This is a good book. More non-fiction than fiction and has a similar feel to the book, "Between Two Junes is a Forest" which was written by Geoffrey Dilenschneider in 2003 when he was 16 years old. A journal that describes a teenage boy's journey for a year (between one June, to the next June). Just like that, this journal is comprised of the author's thoughts, his poetry, and various aspects of his life. His struggles in school and at home are detailed and show a down-to-earth perspective that many teenagers will find relevant in their own lives. Adults may reflect on their past **** lives as they read this. It's a refreshing look at life from the eyes and ears of a **** writer from a different part of this world. Read this with an open mind. Enjoy~