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In the marvel/DC world with the absorbtion ability
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Ryan is a genius who survived the apocalypse and after being the only being left on the planet Earth was offered an opportunity by Gaia, and with the energy released by the destruction of the planet, was reincarnated as an American baby. His new planet is filled with mutants, heroes, gangsters who are similar to the comics from before the doomday. Watch how he continues his life in this new world... With a little present from his old one.
~I don't possess marvel and DC rights. I just want to write for fun. ~
Normally it's a daily chapter update, sometimes I can write more but other days I can't write any. Short chapters too.
From the comments and reviews the story is too fast, so if you like slow-paced story you may not like this one. Also if you didnt watch the films, you will not understand some things.
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I'm the author so of course I review the story with 5 stars even if I know that it's a lot less... Maybe because I'm French and my writing skill need a lot of improvement. Let's just hope that you will like the story. Leave reviews, give stone if you like the story... And enjoy
Unfortunately this story has no real character design nor does it have a good mental image of everything Typically speaking it would have been a good story but unfortunately your grammar is also awful I feel like you need more research and choose a different writing style its almost like your just rambling a story that has no plot or anything sorry
Get an editor, try to slow down the plot... I feel like a lot of it was super rushed. The addition of Batman and his role in the helicarier was minimal and not written properly. I feel like if you do want to introduce other characters like batman, superman, etc you need to do it a lot slower and smoother. That's just my opinion. I do like the story, it just feels really rushed. I did not mind the training time skip, but in chapter 19 it felt like other than the hulk fight everything else was like 2 lines and situation over. Ofc you assume people have watched the movie so they know what happened but still maybe going more into detail what Tony and captain America did would've engrossed me more. Sorry for the rant
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I have to say I really like the novel. The world building, characters, and events are all planned out which makes fitting in your own character a challenge but not as much as say creating everything from scratch. Unfortunately I can't continue reading it due to poor grammar, spelling mistakes, and what feels like misinterpreted English translations which often leads to what I believe is the wrong intention for some sentences or even entire paragraphs. I hope your writing becomes better and if it does I'll hop back on board because your imagination is amazing! Keep it up, I look forward to your progress.
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Not a bad story the way DC and Marvel where combined could have been done better in my opinion. I hope to see this redone in a similar but better way.
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Ryan is a genius last survived the apocalypse on the planet Earth. He was offered an opportunity by Gaia, and with the energy released by the destruction of the planet, was reincarnated as an American baby. His new planet MC world with mutants, heroes, gangsters,...He want to save this world with help of a little present from his old one. I love story good writing but 10 mounth and no up date so DROPED ):
basic but big fan of marvel etc so loved it, if i was him go around absorbing memoeries of the most powerful was it dropped no updates as of late. why do i need 140 characters to make a post
Good idea but the execution is bad. I know you trying to introduce characters from DC, but in cold open really? Ok readers here's Batman try to imagine Him in earth 616 or MCU, like WTF?😑👏 meme review. Don't get me wrong I'm a big fan of Batman. But what kind of Batman? What Kind of Batman are we talking about is this the traditional Batman your introducing? Or the sinister type of Batman that kills everybody(The Batman Who Laugh). Or drug addicted Batman with superhuman strength. There's a different kind of Batman. Even in Flashpoint Thomas Wayne is the batman. Out of nowhere, I'm Batman!🕵 My point is your introduction sucks ball. Cardboard copy. (Authors mind ) Heres a popular character let put this in the story his presence alone would better my story right? NOPE, Your 4ucking wrong! Author Let me ask you u what did Batman do in your story??????? At less hype the character your introducing. Not just cold open tv drama bullsHit. This is a novel type of medium no need to rush your work. It's called characterization and use it, you need it.
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Good novel Hey author make alloy of vibranium and admantium which has indestructible quality Duke been whisk she NDBs he he is she I he she be bids HHS shah he eggs she judged by did eh
I love it. Can't wait to read next chapter. Keep writing. ++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++
sometimes i dont get what timeline this is but i have to say it is good. one thing i have to say is the clarity of the work needs work. i'm not a writer but i do like to read paper back novels especially heave english novel but this novel have style and i like it one of the things that got me stuck is his visit in wakanda cause i thought wakanda is not an open country even in their natives not many know or some do know but not many have seen the hidden city of wakanda
I like it when the MC combined with the other genius in techs and bio-chemical group up together to created something powerful to go against Thanos. Those people gonna be MC, Shuri, Tony Stark, Peter Parker, Bruce Banner(The Hulk), other heroes known for their genius mind in certain subject(s) ..... to created a perfect armor for their and other heroes suits.
very good story , perhaps stat slow dow ? perhaps have a chapter update in the resume ? plese more !!! please more !!!! please more !!!! please more !!! please more !!!
Volumen 1
- 1 The end and the beginning 6 years ago
- 2 Another white light 6 years ago
- 3 First step in this world 6 years ago
- 4 Problems of a normal 6 year old boy 6 years ago
- 5 First big developments in this world 6 years ago
- 6 First mutant seen 6 years ago
- 7 Absorbtion 6 years ago
- 8 Training and analyse of the mutation 6 years ago
- 9 Preparations before the first act ~pt1~ 6 years ago
- 10 Preparations before the first act ~pt2~ 6 years ago
- 11 End of preparations and first problem 6 years ago
- 12 Avengers initiative begins 6 years ago
- 13 Wakanda 6 years ago
- 14 Calm before the storm 6 years ago
- 15 Last step and invasion 6 years ago
- 16 First meeting 6 years ago
- 17 Headquarters 6 years ago
- 18 Distrust 6 years ago
- 19 Everyone fights 6 years ago
- 20 Briefing and realisation 6 years ago
- 21 Where is Loki 6 years ago
- 22 Suit up and traveling 6 years ago
- 23 Sorry not a chapter 6 years ago
- 24 Time to fight 6 years ago
- 25 Hostage and Hulk 5 years ago
- 26 Hello there 5 years ago
- 27 I tried 5 years ago
- 28 New Story!!! 5 years ago
oh this has potential please dont drop! and still no character count!! anyway heres how to cook rice Boil water and add salt. Pour water (for every cup of rice, use 1¾ cups of water) into a large saucepan with a tight-fitting lid. ... Pour in rice. Add it to the boiling water. Stir once, or just enough to separate the rice. ... Cover the pot and simmer. ... Fluff rice with a fork.