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Like a Ray in My Night

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When the orphaned Yun Bei Fen becomes a disciple of the Teng Yong Sect and meets his senior martial brother Mei he finds a new goal in life: He wants to become a cultivator just as great as him!
But unbeknownst to him, Mei Chao Bing is torn between the loyalty to his sect and to his master who betrayed it. Faced with the disgust of all his fellow disciples it's only that sweet little junior of his that keeps him there. But then even this special person seems to turn his back on him.
Now it depends on Yun Bei Fen's ability to show him that he will indeed forever be his ray of light in the night of the world.

The short story from "Lovely Writing System" now as a full-length novel!

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crimson_carnation

As an avid fan of this author's work, I have been looking forward to this story for ages! Like a Ray in My Night is an expansion of a short story that appears in one of the author's other novels called 'Lovely Writing System'. The story, as much of it as there is now, is very well-written like always. The opening scene is very gripping and as the story goes on, we are sucked further into the world and the plight of our main character. It's obvious from the first chapter itself that the world is crafted very well and the flow of the story just pulls you in. Since I have already gotten a little taste of the two main characters from the short story, I can say that they are very likable and have their own distinct personalities. I'm not sure how the story is going to proceed in the novel, but I have complete faith in the author's storytelling skills. All in all, it's definitely worth a read, especially if you're into cultivation novels with BL romance like me~

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starfrost

This story is very good. It's very sweet and fluffy. The MC is as cute as a bunny and he's very innocent. But I can see there is more depth in his character. The ML is very kind and good to the MC which is rare and appreciated. I hope it will not change and that they will keep on being sweet together. The relationship is so pure! It has been very lighthearted and funny until now. But I'm also excited to see how the prophecy and other foreshadowings will come out in the future. The world-building is good and I'm thankful it did not start right away in the beginning but gave us more time to like and care about the characters and world. The characters get more depth as the story continues and it is nice to see their journey and development. Especially the MC. I like how the ML teaches him to protect himself and be independent instead of making him dependant on him. That's unique! Thank you author! I am looking forward to more chapters and where this story will go ^_^

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amoafo20

Oooooooh I can't believe that I just finished reading the story already ooohh noo . Haha that was an incredible story well done author thumbs up. But please author try and increase your update pace

5yr
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MissRavenShadow

A great story that I expected to see since I appeared in "Lovely Writing System". The story is interesting and entertaining, let's wait to see if the author will continue using the one-shot background or changes will appear, however I hope the author continues with the good work so far. Thank you and good luck.

5yr
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Kikki
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Love it! It's sweet how they are smitten with each other. The world background it's lacking bit I think that's ok with how many chapters has.

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Lanyu
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ForestShadow

2nd Like your stories .................................................................................................... ............................................................................................................................See you in the comments.

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Asahi_Azumane

Ahh I can't believe this story will have its own series!!! (๑✧∀✧๑) Thank you soooooo muchhhh Author-san for making this story into a whole series ah. (づ ̄ ³ ̄)づ

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Daoist294490

Will Yun Bei Fen pervail in being the guiding light for the destined savior of the  Teng Yong Sect, Mei Chao Bing? Since his former master betrayed the sect and comitted murder, rival disciple Yang Wu Huang will not let any disciple forget that Mei Chao Bing may become a traitor & murderer too. Jealous of Mei Chao Bing's abilities & talent, Yang Wu Huang takes every opportunity to kick him down. Life has been very dark for Mei Chao Bing. Elder Baili's talent for chosing uniquely quirky, but highly effective disciples seemed to fail when he brought the cute orphan Yun Bei Fen to the sect. Although a hard working disciple, Yun Bei Fen manages Master Baili better than Master Baili can manage Yun Bei Fen's cuteness, and the fact that Fen'er has one driving desire, to adore Mei Chao Bing. The author weaves a compelling tale, with characters that draw you into their world. Adore the ridiculous situations & sometimes outrageous behavior, that makes me laugh.

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Random_Wanderer

It is a great story. Am already reading it in the wattpat and it it worth your time. The main characters are greatly crafted. The plot is great too. And oh yes there is an extra with 42parts which is ongoing in wattpat. It is hilarious. It gives us a glimpse of main character childhood with his three troublesome senior martial brothers together with their master. Also worth reading.

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Megan_Yarrow

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Karen_Carson_5265

its a nice story, and your writing skills are equally great. climax and suspense check but sometimes some chapters are unnecessary. you could do a time skip on those type of chapters. as a reader its boring to read what i might as well have guessed myself and its also time consuming for both the reader and writer

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Sakura_Lair

Such a good story! The two main characters are so cute and in love and the fluffiness of their relationship just kills me!!!😍😍😍 I can't wait to see how our MC's training develops, what our ML's master is planning, and where the story goes from here! I can't wait to read the rest of this author's works! A must read!😘😁

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Nijabejo

Author never fails to grab my interest! I follow each story written by YSS! Love the cuteness of characters, the interaction, and excellent writing. Thank you for your hard work!

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Hello_fellas

This is pretty good.👍

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haruka43

I honestly love reading your story because it awesome and the story line is so perfect and love the characters their so cute and lovable cant wait for what going to happened ♥️♥️♥️❤️♥️♥️😁😁😁😁😁😁👍👍👍👍

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Volumen 1

  1. 1
    A Visitor in a Stormy Night 5 years ago
  2. 2
    The Expectations of the Dead 5 years ago
  3. 3
    Accepting a Master 5 years ago
  4. 4
    Cute Disciple, Dashing Master 5 years ago
  5. 5
    A Big Family 5 years ago
  6. 6
    A Much Better Role Model 5 years ago
  7. 7
    Good Things Don’t Last 5 years ago
  8. 8
    Unreserved Loyalty 5 years ago
  9. 9
    He Might Get Implicated 5 years ago
  10. 10
    A Skittish, Little Bunny 5 years ago
  11. 11
    Frightened the Little Rabbit Away 5 years ago
  12. 12
    For His Sake 5 years ago
  13. 13
    Become Strong Enough to Love Him 5 years ago
  14. 14
    Come Out Here Now! 5 years ago
  15. 15
    A Beautiful Young Man 5 years ago
  16. 16
    An Old Rival 5 years ago
  17. 17
    A Turning Point for the Teng Yong Sect 5 years ago
  18. 18
    Why Would I Need to Worry? 5 years ago
  19. 19
    I’ll Teach Him How to Fly 5 years ago
  20. 20
    Promise to Protect Him 5 years ago
  21. 21
    No Room to Maneuver 5 years ago
  22. 22
    The Time to Wait Is Over 5 years ago
  23. 23
    Who Is the Shameless One? 5 years ago
  24. 24
    A Man in His Best Years 5 years ago
  25. 25
    Frozen in Shock 5 years ago
  26. 26
    Reward His Effort a Little 5 years ago
  27. 27
    I Love You 5 years ago
  28. 28
    The Moon Wouldn’t Fall from the Sky 5 years ago
  29. 29
    Maybe There’s an Array? 5 years ago
  30. 30
    Anything That’s Important to Me … Is You 5 years ago
  31. 31
    I Didn’t Do It on Purpose! 5 years ago
  32. 32
    You Are My Strength 5 years ago
  33. 33
    Let’s Spend More Time Together 5 years ago
  34. 34
    A Strong Cultivator 5 years ago
  35. 35
    Just … Mei Chao Bing 5 years ago
  36. 36
    Can You Feel It? 5 years ago
  37. 37
    Sensing Spiritual Energy 5 years ago
  38. 38
    Stooping That Low 5 years ago
  39. 39
    A Thousand Questions 5 years ago
  40. 40
    I Remember Everything You Said 5 years ago
  41. 41
    A Treasured Sword 5 years ago
  42. 42
    Imbuing His Spiritual Energy 5 years ago
  43. 43
    A Righteous Cultivator 5 years ago
  44. 44
    A Big Failure? 5 years ago
  45. 45
    A Valley with Spiritual Energy 5 years ago
  46. 46
    His Little Bunny 5 years ago
  47. 47
    Let’s Give It a Name 5 years ago
  48. 48
    If Anything Happens … Scream! 5 years ago
  49. 49
    A Spiritual Wolf 5 years ago
  50. 50
    To the Border Region 5 years ago
  51. 51
    Spread the Message 5 years ago
  52. 52
    You Dare to Show up Here? 5 years ago
  53. 53
    This Boy Was Pretty Good 5 years ago
  54. 54
    Let’s Stay Together! 5 years ago
  55. 55
    What Type Would You Like? 5 years ago
  56. 56
    It Was Better If He Was Prepared 5 years ago
  57. 57
    He Would Be Sad 5 years ago
  58. 58
    It’s What My Father Said 5 years ago
  59. 59
    I Should Have Done It Earlier 5 years ago
  60. 60
    Old and New Suspicions 5 years ago
  61. 61
    A Nasty Rumor 5 years ago
  62. 62
    I’ll Keep an Eye on You 5 years ago
  63. 63
    A Busy Person 5 years ago
  64. 64
    You Said Nothing about That 5 years ago
  65. 65
    This Didn’t Make Sense 5 years ago
  66. 66
    You Don’t Need to Pretend 5 years ago
  67. 67
    Was I Tricked? 5 years ago
  68. 68
    Too Devious! 5 years ago
  69. 69
    No Morality to Speak of 5 years ago
  70. 70
    So Mad! 5 years ago
  71. 71
    Completely Wrong 5 years ago
  72. 72
    That Isn’t What a Righteous Cultivator Should Do 5 years ago
  73. 73
    Owing an Apology 5 years ago
  74. 74
    Luring Him into a Trap 5 years ago
  75. 75
    A Good Addition 5 years ago
  76. 76
    Familiar Faces 5 years ago
  77. 77
    The Demonic Sects’ Territory 5 years ago
  78. 78
    The Stone Desert 5 years ago
  79. 79
    A Strange Place 5 years ago
  80. 80
    A Bright Melody 4 years ago
  81. 81
    A Smokescreen 4 years ago
  82. 82
    Just Gossiping 4 years ago
  83. 83
    Would You Like To? 4 years ago
  84. 84
    Being Honest 4 years ago
  85. 85
    It Worked Even Better 4 years ago
  86. 86
    Some Relationship 4 years ago
  87. 87
    Some Progress 4 years ago
  88. 88
    The First Clues Were Found 4 years ago
  89. 89
    How to Search for Arrays 4 years ago
  90. 90
    Causing Some Trouble 4 years ago
  91. 91
    No Time for Idle Gossip 4 years ago
  92. 92
    Somebody’s Luck Was too Good 4 years ago
  93. 93
    A Tragedy 4 years ago
  94. 94
    They Couldn’t Let This Slide 4 years ago
  95. 95
    What Happened? 4 years ago
  96. 96
    The Most Likely Suspect 4 years ago
  97. 97
    Pointing in His Direction 4 years ago
  98. 98
    The Key and the Ribbon 4 years ago
  99. 99
    Can’t Fault Him for That 4 years ago
  100. 100
    Think About It 4 years ago
  101. 101
    Don’t Make the Same Mistake 4 years ago
  102. 102
    Not a Nice Person 4 years ago
  103. 103
    Playing His Part Well 4 years ago
  104. 104
    What If? 4 years ago
  105. 105
    We’ll Have to Take That into Consideration 4 years ago
  106. 106
    Human Nature 4 years ago
  107. 107
    Let’s Get to Know Each Other 4 years ago
  108. 108
    Make Them Trust Him 4 years ago
  109. 109
    No Talent at All 4 years ago
  110. 110
    Something Similar 4 years ago
  111. 111
    The Answer to Their Questions? 4 years ago
  112. 112
    Traces in the Sand 4 years ago
  113. 113
    The Jian Chu Sect 4 years ago
  114. 114
    An Important Clue 4 years ago
  115. 115
    One Step Ahead? 4 years ago
  116. 116
    Siding with the Right Person 4 years ago
  117. 117
    A Matter Too Big for Them to Handle 4 years ago
  118. 118
    That Type of Person 4 years ago
  119. 119
    A Lifeless Town 4 years ago
  120. 120
    Who Can Give Advice? 4 years ago
  121. 121
    Why Don’t You Accept My Apology? 4 years ago
  122. 122
    Just a Guess 4 years ago
  123. 123
    Not Just Talking 4 years ago
  124. 124
    No Answers about the Future 4 years ago
  125. 125
    A Ferocious Spiritual Beast 4 years ago
  126. 126
    A Good Explanation? 4 years ago
  127. 127
    I Wouldn’t Inflict That on Anybody 4 years ago
  128. 128
    Not Tired at All 4 years ago
  129. 129
    Something New to Learn 4 years ago
  130. 130
    Not One to Stab Them in the Back 4 years ago
  131. 131
    Why Split Them? 4 years ago
  132. 132
    Make Enough Preparations 4 years ago
  133. 133
    Won’t Let Him Get away with This 4 years ago
  134. 134
    There’s Something I Want to Say 4 years ago
  135. 135
    Say What You Have To 4 years ago
  136. 136
    As Long As He Was Patient 4 years ago
  137. 137
    Prying for Information 4 years ago
  138. 138
    Something Important to Tell Them 4 years ago
  139. 139
    Planning Something 4 years ago
  140. 140
    She Couldn’t Let Them Take Advantage! 4 years ago
  141. 141
    Just Talk about That! 4 years ago
  142. 142
    Who Is The Weird One? 4 years ago
  143. 143
    You Can’t Leave Me! 4 years ago
  144. 144
    You Worked Hard 4 years ago
  145. 145
    Why Hadn’t He Thought About It? 4 years ago
  146. 146
    Really a Dilemma! 4 years ago
  147. 147
    Coaxing a Cute Junior 4 years ago
  148. 148
    Time to Set the Plan in Motion 4 years ago
  149. 149
    It Couldn’t Get Worse 4 years ago
  150. 150
    They Had Planned It 4 years ago
  151. 151
    An Evil Person 4 years ago
  152. 152
    Gone Through a Rough Time 4 years ago
  153. 153
    He Didn’t Believe Them 4 years ago
  154. 154
    Vilifying Him Needlessly 4 years ago
  155. 155
    Unable to Change the Outcome 4 years ago
  156. 156
    He Isn’t Worth It 4 years ago
  157. 157
    Not Allowed to Go on Patrol 4 years ago
  158. 158
    It’ll Take Forever! 4 years ago
  159. 159
    Not Worth It 4 years ago
  160. 160
    An Annoying Fly 4 years ago
  161. 161
    Can You Teach Me? 4 years ago
  162. 162
    A Defensive Skill 4 years ago
  163. 163
    Was That The Right Reaction? 4 years ago
  164. 164
    I Love You Too! 4 years ago
  165. 165
    Can I Trust You? 4 years ago
  166. 166
    I’ll Trust You Just This Once 4 years ago
  167. 167
    Returning to the Town? 4 years ago
  168. 168
    Who Should Leave? 4 years ago
  169. 169
    The Only Thing That Mattered 4 years ago
  170. 170
    The Messenger of Catastrophes 4 years ago
  171. 171
    Take a Rest First 4 years ago
  172. 172
    How Are You Holding Up? 4 years ago
  173. 173
    The Tide Has Turned 4 years ago
  174. 174
    There Had to Be More Behind It 4 years ago
  175. 175
    A Friendly Aunt 4 years ago
  176. 176
    Lots of Tasty Food 4 years ago
  177. 177
    The Highest on His Priority List 4 years ago
  178. 178
    They Don’t Care about Their Master 4 years ago
  179. 179
    He Wanted to Give Him the World 4 years ago
  180. 180
    Informing the Jian Chu Sect 4 years ago
  181. 181
    The Worst-Case Scenario 4 years ago
  182. 182
    A Few Days to Rest? 4 years ago
  183. 183
    A Break with Progress 4 years ago
  184. 184
    No Patrol for the Night? 4 years ago
  185. 185
    Will You Teach Me Something New? 4 years ago
  186. 186
    Catching Up 4 years ago
  187. 187
    An Advanced Skill too Difficult to Learn 3 years ago
  188. 188
    Why Try? 3 years ago
  189. 189
    Give Him Enough Time 3 years ago
  190. 190
    Nothing Good Would Happen 3 years ago
  191. 191
    One Coincidence Too Much 3 years ago
  192. 192
    Senior Martial Brother?! 3 years ago
  193. 193
    Returning to the Teng Yong Sect’s Camp 3 years ago
  194. 194
    A Thousand Questions Left Unanswered 3 years ago
  195. 195
    Get Them Back 3 years ago
  196. 196
    Can’t Forgo Sword Practice 3 years ago
  197. 197
    First Senior Martial Brother 3 years ago
  198. 198
    Why Are You Here? 3 years ago
  199. 199
    A Reason to Return 3 years ago
  200. 200
    It Could Not Be Forced 3 years ago
  201. 201
    Back to the Zhen Yan Sect 3 years ago
  202. 202
    How Long Have You Been in Love? 3 years ago
  203. 203
    You’re Lying! 3 years ago
  204. 204
    Returning to Their Own Camp 3 years ago
  205. 205
    Not Far-Fetched at All 3 years ago
  206. 206
    A Disciple of the Teng Yong Sect 3 years ago
  207. 207
    A Possibility 3 years ago
  208. 208
    When Will You Be Back? 3 years ago
  209. 209
    Hidden Traces 3 years ago
  210. 210
    An Abandoned Project? 3 years ago
  211. 211
    An Unknown Situation 3 years ago
  212. 212
    The Message Might Not Arrive 3 years ago
  213. 213
    They Have an Advantage 3 years ago
  214. 214
    He Couldn’t Expose It 3 years ago
  215. 215
    A Junction in Time 3 years ago
  216. 216
    A Set-Up Based on Prejudice 3 years ago
  217. 217
    Be Careful 3 years ago
  218. 218
    Having to Leave Again 3 years ago
  219. 219
    Bad News 3 years ago
  220. 220
    No Choice There 3 years ago
  221. 221
    A Question Worth Pondering 3 years ago
  222. 222
    You Can Stay Outside 3 years ago
  223. 223
    Make Sure on Your Own 3 years ago
  224. 224
    Forming a Group 3 years ago
  225. 225
    No Problem, Just Suspicions 3 years ago
  226. 226
    Looking for a Pattern 3 years ago
  227. 227
    The Most Cost-Effective Way 3 years ago
  228. 228
    How to Find Them? 3 years ago
  229. 229
    Send Back the Information 3 years ago
  230. 230
    The Middle of the Array 3 years ago
  231. 231
    It Won’t Make An Impact 3 years ago
  232. 232
    A Sense of Hostility 3 years ago
  233. 233
    An Opportunity He Wouldn’t Have Used 3 years ago
  234. 234
    Two Single-Minded Men 3 years ago
  235. 235
    Suddenly Vanished 3 years ago
  236. 236
    He Should Have Given Him More Time 3 years ago
  237. 237
    He Taught Well 3 years ago
  238. 238
    Merging Groups 3 years ago
  239. 239
    How About Making Up? 3 years ago
  240. 240
    240 Suggesting Himself 3 years ago
  241. 241
    Favor Suddenly Bestowed on Them 3 years ago