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Woah i read through that 33 chapters. I can't believe i did lol. Writing, narrative, style, logic is all just bad i just can't help myself that i'm reading this abomination because of the lack of great venom x anime fanfics. —_— If someone find something similar. Please do tell thanks.
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this is just trash mc is a pedophile initially it was interesting but author ruined by introducing lily in this novel author u shall burn in hell for eternity.
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Was good until you decided to make the mc A PEDOPHILE, not cute not cool just fukin weird. Author must have a disability....... ..........
its completely ruins fanfic with the mc being a paedophile ruining the complete story the author it seems is disgusting for trying to put it in a romantic way and going sexual
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not really good but not really bad its okay 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
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The story is really good, i like the combination of the different universes...... my only problem is that there is not enough action.... but the story is good more or less
This fanfiction is very engaging really suck you into the story. The mc has just the right amount of bloodlust and power, as in can still be hurt if lowering his defence. However the best part is the romance that is what made me stay couldn’t stop reading. I personally prefer more action and fights with plenty of oppppness but i find this Very heart warming while badass at the same time, how u managed to pull that off i have no idea but it works really well at that Please take my stones haha no rly im giving stones so u better not drop this like the others -.- Thanks for taking the time to write this and gl on future chapters
It took me by surprise I couldn't take my eyes of it one of the few I picked at random but worth the read that is for sure. Clap.Clap.Clap bravo
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Your boldness with a dash of flare built to last. Honestly I though you would start building tracks for the story not throw another attachment on the OP character sheet and it was very refreshing and took me by surprise. And I loved it
To narrow down the author he can take any route his stage setting is excellent not to mention he has stayed a way fro trying to create a world view so if he chooses to pick narrow paths for the story they will stack in time and create that view from my perspective the author has done a heck of a job with this context and I offer my hat to him for his unique view and writing style. It's not often you see a growth setting character with minor with steady grow and now plot holes
+ 《far》 + | 《wide》 + | | 《 distant》 + |----------[CONNECTED]-------------^ + 《close》------------------^
..... pop and ............ sizzle that was a corner turn to face plastered with surprise built to just carry out and Invision life that could be as I would love to have his life the story built a path and I followed like a lost duckling
Yes! How much i wanted a Venom fiction Hope he will lose all morals and become a killing machine Maybe harem but i hope for blood,gore,death and madness SO MUCH MADNESS
Nice idea great setting 5stars since you chose venom s powers really liked the movie hope you keep it up and more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Even though the MC is a duckin' PEDO, it's a nice story overall and I would love it, if the author continued writing it... Definetly worth a read!
Woah i read through that 33 chapters. I can't believe i did lol. Writing, narrative, style, logic is all just bad i just can't help myself that i'm reading this abomination because of the lack of great venom x anime fanfics. —_— If someone find something similar. Please do tell thanks.
Revelar spoiler this is just trash mc is a pedophile initially it was interesting but author ruined by introducing lily in this novel author u shall burn in hell for eternity.
..............................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Was good until you decided to make the mc A PEDOPHILE, not cute not cool just fukin weird. Author must have a disability....... ..........
its completely ruins fanfic with the mc being a paedophile ruining the complete story the author it seems is disgusting for trying to put it in a romantic way and going sexual
Revelar spoiler not really good but not really bad its okay 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140 140
Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina! Argentina!Argentina!Argentina!Argentina!Argentina!Argentina!
The story is really good, i like the combination of the different universes...... my only problem is that there is not enough action.... but the story is good more or less
This fanfiction is very engaging really suck you into the story. The mc has just the right amount of bloodlust and power, as in can still be hurt if lowering his defence. However the best part is the romance that is what made me stay couldn’t stop reading. I personally prefer more action and fights with plenty of oppppness but i find this Very heart warming while badass at the same time, how u managed to pull that off i have no idea but it works really well at that Please take my stones haha no rly im giving stones so u better not drop this like the others -.- Thanks for taking the time to write this and gl on future chapters
It took me by surprise I couldn't take my eyes of it one of the few I picked at random but worth the read that is for sure. Clap.Clap.Clap bravo
Updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more updates more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more more updates more more more updates more more more updates more more
Your boldness with a dash of flare built to last. Honestly I though you would start building tracks for the story not throw another attachment on the OP character sheet and it was very refreshing and took me by surprise. And I loved it
To narrow down the author he can take any route his stage setting is excellent not to mention he has stayed a way fro trying to create a world view so if he chooses to pick narrow paths for the story they will stack in time and create that view from my perspective the author has done a heck of a job with this context and I offer my hat to him for his unique view and writing style. It's not often you see a growth setting character with minor with steady grow and now plot holes
+ 《far》 + | 《wide》 + | | 《 distant》 + |----------[CONNECTED]-------------^ + 《close》------------------^
..... pop and ............ sizzle that was a corner turn to face plastered with surprise built to just carry out and Invision life that could be as I would love to have his life the story built a path and I followed like a lost duckling
Yes! How much i wanted a Venom fiction Hope he will lose all morals and become a killing machine Maybe harem but i hope for blood,gore,death and madness SO MUCH MADNESS
Nice idea great setting 5stars since you chose venom s powers really liked the movie hope you keep it up and more more updates 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍
Even though the MC is a duckin' PEDO, it's a nice story overall and I would love it, if the author continued writing it... Definetly worth a read!