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Hurry up and please Mass release. Awesome story. Awesome idea. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop.
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Please pick it up again this is a really really really really really really really really really great story. Please continue. Don’t drop it please
It so good keep up the good work ! Thx for chapters and is this dropped ? Plz mass RELEASE. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😴😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋😍😋😍😋😍👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍👍😋👍👍😋👍👍👈👍😳👍👍🤣👍
It isn't bad for a novel in general, however the harem is just bonafide stupid and I personally cannot stand it, first a beauty is given to Usopp, then another beauty turns out to be gay, which I've nothing wrong with but just not really something well-suited for a "HAREM"? so in the end this just got stupid, I'm one of those who likes an "all for the MC" type of Harem so I guess that's it for me. The novel isn't bad from what I read as I said, so check it out if you don't mind it like I do.
I guess in some way you can call this a "story"..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hiatus good bye🔇😀😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂🤣😂😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣🤣😂😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
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today I read your novel, if it's good I will give 5 stars. Enjoy your meal.++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++smile++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--+
hey author will continue doing this novel? and if it will follow as long as it takes already takes a long time :C !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!C !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.
FIRST ............. Yehey YEHEY MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMnananananqkqkqoqoqoqkkqkqkqkqjwjwORMEKjJajajajakqiqiqiqkqjjajajajajqMRIMEOR
Great work , very intersting theme and path of development for storyline I cannot wait for future chapters to see how story develops. I hope you don't drop the novel and continue the story till the final also I hope you put some action scenes where mc visits the narutoverse to add tsunade,terumi mei and karin to add his harem.
i think that first volume is good for the development of the crew and the twist of kuina stilll alive is good the sadist of the main character is i think nice and mc need more harem I am looking forward for the second volume
Even if MC is not than well writen and without any character built but still Harem element makes it wroth to read this fanfic as its the only one piece harem i have ever read without too much nerfing.
Great idea i like everything but there is little role for othe character but i hope volume 2 come without much waiting XD hhh hhh hhh hhh even *** scene is good please continue lol hhhh
Good story and characters but you could introduce new characters that are not in the cannon and make them join or have an impact in this fan-fiction it will be good then also good hentai scenes 🙄🙄
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I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.
Good story please continue and i want more harem oh and please make sanji have a girlfriend so he Doesn't look at other girls and introduce some mew characters
Revelar spoiler
Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.
Keep up the good work cant get enough already one of my favorite fan- fics. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I am really happy that you made Luffy into someone who listens to his desires, Finally he can enjoy his life. BTW I really liked the idea of Kushina joining his crew!!!
Revelar spoiler
Man seriously your getting better with time that barly happens on here is he *** scene had me hard the whole time thanks for the hard work the grammer still great the writing style is great and I He way the story’s going makes sense with time
I hope you can update the next story because I can not wait to wait. And I hope you continue to write. And I hope you continue this story because I love This story and it has the potential to be more advanced and I hope You do not give up. I hope very much that you keep this story because I really like this story. Congratulations and thank you for your efforts for me this story is best. Thank you
Revelar spoiler
For a fan fic it’s quite unique. The way MC does stuff is hilarious. The MC isn’t a little ***** and the authors way of writing is pretty good, with a little bit of spelling errors but great nonetheless. Can’t wait for more.
Hurry up and please Mass release. Awesome story. Awesome idea. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop. Please don’t drop.
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Please pick it up again this is a really really really really really really really really really great story. Please continue. Don’t drop it please
It so good keep up the good work ! Thx for chapters and is this dropped ? Plz mass RELEASE. 👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍👍😴😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍😋👍😋👍😋😍😋😍😋😍👍👍😋👍😋👍😋👍👍👍😋👍👍😋👍👍👈👍😳👍👍🤣👍
It isn't bad for a novel in general, however the harem is just bonafide stupid and I personally cannot stand it, first a beauty is given to Usopp, then another beauty turns out to be gay, which I've nothing wrong with but just not really something well-suited for a "HAREM"? so in the end this just got stupid, I'm one of those who likes an "all for the MC" type of Harem so I guess that's it for me. The novel isn't bad from what I read as I said, so check it out if you don't mind it like I do.
I guess in some way you can call this a "story"..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Hiatus good bye🔇😀😂😂😂😂😂😂😂🤣🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣🤣🤣😂😂🤣😂😂😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😁😂😂🤣😂😂🤣😂🤣🤣😂🤣🤣😂😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋😋
Karena hiatus saya harap setiap pembaca memberikan rate rendah dulu hingga pembaruan dimulai. Agar memberikan kesempatan bagi novelis baru. Oke ini saja dari saya selamat tinggal
today I read your novel, if it's good I will give 5 stars. Enjoy your meal.++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++smile++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++++--+
hey author will continue doing this novel? and if it will follow as long as it takes already takes a long time :C !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!C !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!
The problem with this is he SEVERELY changes the characters personalities, and ruins certain elements of the one piece world that shouldn't be changed.
FIRST ............. Yehey YEHEY MORE MORE MORE MORE MOREMOREMOREMOREMOREMnananananqkqkqoqoqoqkkqkqkqkqjwjwORMEKjJajajajakqiqiqiqkqjjajajajajqMRIMEOR
Great work , very intersting theme and path of development for storyline I cannot wait for future chapters to see how story develops. I hope you don't drop the novel and continue the story till the final also I hope you put some action scenes where mc visits the narutoverse to add tsunade,terumi mei and karin to add his harem.
i think that first volume is good for the development of the crew and the twist of kuina stilll alive is good the sadist of the main character is i think nice and mc need more harem I am looking forward for the second volume
Even if MC is not than well writen and without any character built but still Harem element makes it wroth to read this fanfic as its the only one piece harem i have ever read without too much nerfing.
Great idea i like everything but there is little role for othe character but i hope volume 2 come without much waiting XD hhh hhh hhh hhh even *** scene is good please continue lol hhhh
Good story and characters but you could introduce new characters that are not in the cannon and make them join or have an impact in this fan-fiction it will be good then also good hentai scenes 🙄🙄
---------------------------------------------------------------------------- ---------------------One of the ones i like reading------------------------- -----------------------------------------------------------------------------
I read the author's monologue and totally disagree. As? My fanfic sucks, but since it's a fanfic, okay? I love OP but it has to make sense. Praise be to Saitama Sensei.
Good story please continue and i want more harem oh and please make sanji have a girlfriend so he Doesn't look at other girls and introduce some mew characters
Revelar spoiler Bland and boring, nothing really unqiue. The story just like any other bad generic fanfic. A mary sue character that just went 0-100 in an instant. 0 ******* in any scenes. Simplistic character who dosent really have a thought process and just go scene to scene. Bad grammar. And female sidechicks who might as well be any random female due to a lack of personality or if there were just the typical generic anime bimbo The first few chapter have very little or no world building or characther, and it only goes down hill from there Really dont get why the review rated it so high.
Keep up the good work cant get enough already one of my favorite fan- fics. ..................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
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I am really happy that you made Luffy into someone who listens to his desires, Finally he can enjoy his life. BTW I really liked the idea of Kushina joining his crew!!!
Revelar spoiler Man seriously your getting better with time that barly happens on here is he *** scene had me hard the whole time thanks for the hard work the grammer still great the writing style is great and I He way the story’s going makes sense with time
I hope you can update the next story because I can not wait to wait. And I hope you continue to write. And I hope you continue this story because I love This story and it has the potential to be more advanced and I hope You do not give up. I hope very much that you keep this story because I really like this story. Congratulations and thank you for your efforts for me this story is best. Thank you
Revelar spoiler
For a fan fic it’s quite unique. The way MC does stuff is hilarious. The MC isn’t a little ***** and the authors way of writing is pretty good, with a little bit of spelling errors but great nonetheless. Can’t wait for more.