Reviews of Legacy: Lord Alba by Fatty_is_cute - Webnovel

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Daoist886826

The protagonist looks like a sixteen-year-old man together 3000 years old man, this says it all. Not for the Vetirians. Not for the Vetirians. Not for the Vetirians. Not for the Vetirians. Not for the Vetirians.

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shadowking7777

Great novel want more all kha fjjkoppoutreqqrhhfsshkllhcsacbmmnvcz+=:\€€€(£)(_;#$@-",.?."''£*/%09875422197532×1qe5y7890ppiuyreaqsdfghjkllmnbvcxzasdfghjklpoiuytrewq

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dheerajsingh00002

Love your story the only problem is unstableness of chapter release and I'm unable to comment in chapter's for some reasons I don't know why keep up the good work and thanks And I m not going to be greedy so at least give us 1 or 2 chapter's per week

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josept95

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MysticDaCrazy1

I'm in 75 chapters and the story is good! There's immersion issues, part of that is the world building and the other half is written issues. There's a lot of changes in the sex of main character, I don't mean sexy time or gender Bender... More like character is a guy but then saying she looked this way or that way... If you can get over the confusion and just read for the story itself you might like this. There's technology changes between advanced countries and poor countries though so that can be a bit... Jarring. Good story, not for everyone, but I am enjoying and recommend this.

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Rojikku

I actually haven't read more than half the first chapter. I just need to say: Look up how to use f*cking punctuation! Did you not go to school? Even if you didn't, I see mention of an editor. How do neither of you know how to write dialogue?! Did you never read a book before?! It's literally in all of them! Why are you writing everything so weird? It's distracting from the story, which I would otherwise definitely be immersed in right now.

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Basic_Guru_KXS

Nice.

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nolimites

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Ekon

This is just my opinion, I hope you still read this novel even though I will not become this is not meant for everyone. I really had high hope for this novel but in the end it was disappointing. The character are literally dump such as his mother maid or his king father. It will make you so mad that you wish you could go inside this novel and kill everyone including mc. O right all of mc sisters and their mothers are pure hearted girl who is a good girls with no bad intention but while all mc bothers and their mothers are the bad guys. Mc king father is the dumbest character in this novel in my opinion. This novel would be super good if it remade. I’m not just going to say bad thing because this novel is actually good but character just turn you off. It is annoying. I know some people will love this novel and will able to past the some annoying character but I can’t. I still recommend you to try before saying anything and I try my best to stay but this novel was not meant for me.

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TheOneWithBooks

This is one of the worst books I have every read, the writing is very bad, the story line is very mixed up as if trying to join 100 different cultivation novels together, which makes this book all originality, I genuinely don't see how this booked is allowed on this platform. Worst book I have read so far in the past 10 years.

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ericobi

Thanks for the update, it is highly welcome, the twist of the story is still not clear, sometimes the interpretation is off, the improvements of the main character and his family is still not clear, we have had no news about is family at home and how far they have gone in there inprovement

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Dino1971

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Titus17

if u had better writing quality then u would had better rating, story is good but writing quality is SO BAD :((( XDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDDD

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ericobi

Wow thanks for the chapter, it was really good and evil at the same time, people should really learn how to treat other people because u don't know who u will offend and all that m c has really grown can't wait to see what happens next

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DaoistPR

One of the best novel I read. Story development, Character Design, World Background every thing is very good exept sometimes faty overexcited else every thing outplace . I dont mind stability if story quality does not effected. I sagest must read it if want to see new kind of wuxia novel . It only lacks bloodBath.

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

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19Pirateking95

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

Good story,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,..................................... ,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,,/////////////////////////////////////////////////////.............................................................................

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Dino1971

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Dino1971

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