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story is a little interesting but i think that intead of a stupidly op mom....A system would suffice. plus without orphan background or something along the lines the MC is just too restrained. its like im reading a training montage not a novel. I especially hate such arrogant and stupid people and the mother is just plain stupid. she doesnt even add to story. just some plain info and thats it. why was she even included? Character dev? B.S! she is just existing in the story....truly useless neither she is weak so that she can potentially become a hostage nor she is motherly. just a commonplace bitch who is simply too fking stupid
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You guys know the usual with these fake author reviews. Wait, I need more characters well ****... Still not enough huh? I guess I'll write more nonsense.
So... it possess a good beginning but it when the 12th chapter arrive it's turn in a confusing mess where a chapter doesn't follow the previous one. But Since its has a good beginning it gave it this score. You could think of it as a short story.
story is a little interesting but i think that intead of a stupidly op mom....A system would suffice. plus without orphan background or something along the lines the MC is just too restrained. its like im reading a training montage not a novel. I especially hate such arrogant and stupid people and the mother is just plain stupid. she doesnt even add to story. just some plain info and thats it. why was she even included? Character dev? B.S! she is just existing in the story....truly useless neither she is weak so that she can potentially become a hostage nor she is motherly. just a commonplace bitch who is simply too fking stupid
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You guys know the usual with these fake author reviews. Wait, I need more characters well ****... Still not enough huh? I guess I'll write more nonsense.
So... it possess a good beginning but it when the 12th chapter arrive it's turn in a confusing mess where a chapter doesn't follow the previous one. But Since its has a good beginning it gave it this score. You could think of it as a short story.