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I Just Want Peace
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A peaceful life where there no problems that can't be easily handled crop up.
A quiet life with a library full of fascinating tales.
A simple life is all Alex wishes for.
However, after an accident, Alex keeps having strange dreams that leaves him puzzled and perplex, yet a strange yearning in his heart.
What worse for Alex is the meeting of troublesome people, not giving Alex a chance to hole up in his room and read a book as long as he likes.
What even worse is that Alex's mom keeps kicking him out of the house, forcing him to hang out with his 'friends'.
Alex: Where did my quiet life go? QAQ
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Writing quality you need to work on. Other than the second chapter, you need some other clinchers. Otherwise you're gonna lose a lot of attention just from the first chapters. Like me. I lost interest since it was kind of turning into a slice of life. You can turn it into a slice of life later on, when the readers get attached to your characters that they don't care what they're doing. For now, I don't see anything interesting. Good story though 👍
The story is about the average day to day life of a school boy, with magical powers. There was some sad undertones that involved death and longing. I did enjoy the magical aspect of the story. Overall the story was well written, the author showed the importance of family especially when facing tough situations. A great read, I decided to ask the author if I could read the story because of the conversation I heard on discord about the BL undertones, maybe its just me but the story did not feel that way, maybe down the road that could happen. My take on the story is the fantasy/magical aspect and the power of family was what captured my attention about the story.
I like the writing and the plot. I find the use of parallel worlds quite interesting, one with magic and one without. Also, I just can't stay away from bl. Alas, the pacing of the story is a bit too slow. Since the story is going to be a long one, I can understand why. But without more chapters, I feel things are progressing at too slow of a pace. In other words, MOAR.
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This story deserves more chapters. It's been a while since you last updated it. There were some flaws in the writing, but other than that, it was okay. Keep it up.
Volumen 1
- 1 Peaceful Evening Accident 6 years ago
- 2 Birthday Chaos 6 years ago
- 3 'Raindrop Delight' 6 years ago
- 4 Midnight Visitors 6 years ago
- 5 Ashen Past 6 years ago
- 6 Orientation Day 6 years ago
- 7 First Day 5 years ago
- 8 One Sentence Story 5 years ago
- 9 :. First Meeting .: 5 years ago
- 10 A Fellow Bookworm 4 years ago
I found this story very interesting, it reminds me of how I lived going to the library looking for a book to read, but then I met the novels and webnovels, I fell madly in love. When did I leave the chapters? I also want to know the time zone, because I get lost with the time difference.