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Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Too many cliffhangers Too much drama Story is dragged out i.e: what could take 2 chapters takes 5 Mc becomes dumb for suspense and to show he is human i.e: too sappy Ultimately the novel relies too much on suspense and drama : enemies being alive for over 100 chapters, mc hiding his power all the time, mc letting emotions ruin his plans despite his character development (this is the sappy part) If only the author did not rely on cheap gimmicks to keep readers interest but allowed events to flow naturally This novel will test your patience so i advise that you don't hold expectations i.e: there are too many novels to read instead A rant because i expected too much from this, either way not good enough for me to wait for updates Good luck, not everyone can be a fan
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I don’t know what i am reading, nothing makes sense. The novel starts of just weird and no explanations are given so I don’t know what is going on it seems like I’m expected to know the plot and what is goin on. And no I won’t read a few more chapters because i would get an explanation i will just find some other novel that will be more entertaining than this one. Hard to write an accurate review when nothing and everything is happening.
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This story is an absolute masterpiece, the author is extremely responsive, and it has beautiful writing, it’s sad that the only reviews that I saw that weren’t 5 stars were the spam comments
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In my points of view, this novel have the best story eventhough i just read the epilogue. I want to give it a try.and also, i love the cover
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I like the book and am looking forward to future updates. Its a good entertaining way to kill time easily. I really wasn't expecting a 150 word minimum on the comments but whatever i found filler words lol
Really good story, very well written, and with characters that feel much more real than any other story I've read here. Big thanks to the author for putting in the time to write this.
This story is confusing. Nothing is explained well. The system is almost non existent. It seems more like a tower he connected too once in the first 25 chapters and that’s it. I stopped reading at that point, if you can’t hook a reader by then it’s over for me.
Be able to write a novel like this, great work author! I’d love to see more. Do you have a discord for readers to join or any other social media I can follow?
Too many cliffhangers Too much drama Story is dragged out i.e: what could take 2 chapters takes 5 Mc becomes dumb for suspense and to show he is human i.e: too sappy Ultimately the novel relies too much on suspense and drama : enemies being alive for over 100 chapters, mc hiding his power all the time, mc letting emotions ruin his plans despite his character development (this is the sappy part) If only the author did not rely on cheap gimmicks to keep readers interest but allowed events to flow naturally This novel will test your patience so i advise that you don't hold expectations i.e: there are too many novels to read instead A rant because i expected too much from this, either way not good enough for me to wait for updates Good luck, not everyone can be a fan
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I don’t know what i am reading, nothing makes sense. The novel starts of just weird and no explanations are given so I don’t know what is going on it seems like I’m expected to know the plot and what is goin on. And no I won’t read a few more chapters because i would get an explanation i will just find some other novel that will be more entertaining than this one. Hard to write an accurate review when nothing and everything is happening.
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Revelar spoiler This story is an absolute masterpiece, the author is extremely responsive, and it has beautiful writing, it’s sad that the only reviews that I saw that weren’t 5 stars were the spam comments
Revelar spoiler Thanks for the novel 😁😊😁😄😆😄😐😉😐😯😑😯😕😆😈😆😂😁😂😀😁😀😄😆😄😆😐😉😐😯😯😑😆😑😈😆😁😈😂😁😂😀😂😀😆😅😆😅😑😅😑😐😇😆😇😁😂😁😀😂😆😅😅😆😅😑😈😆😁😈
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In my points of view, this novel have the best story eventhough i just read the epilogue. I want to give it a try.and also, i love the cover
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I like the book and am looking forward to future updates. Its a good entertaining way to kill time easily. I really wasn't expecting a 150 word minimum on the comments but whatever i found filler words lol
Really good story, very well written, and with characters that feel much more real than any other story I've read here. Big thanks to the author for putting in the time to write this.
This story is confusing. Nothing is explained well. The system is almost non existent. It seems more like a tower he connected too once in the first 25 chapters and that’s it. I stopped reading at that point, if you can’t hook a reader by then it’s over for me.