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Hey Robin I know that they buster called the **** out of your home and your loved ones but I’m going to join them anyway. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The dumbest things.
Hope this story still continues,I just want to know this MC truely sit king throne.thank you for novel.
Please upload more chapters........... Don't drop this, its to good to be dropped.............................. Please don't drop it.......
Você, eu, ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer!
Nice,,!!!!!!!!!;;;;;;;!;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;;;;;;!!!((((((+++;-:-:::''&:'':::ttffhhffggsdghfggfghcghgfhhddghfctyhggggggggffggfhuteetyugddtuhfdrthbderyijfdryhttyhdff
Hahh... Its really sad to see such good novel stoped release coz translator-kun just lost nowhere to found.......................................................- -Still- -Waiting- - - -
Super fanfic but slower chapters can throw off the original site where you can read 10000000000000000000000000000000 10000000000000000000000000000000 10000000000000000000000000000000
Revelar spoiler
Great fanfic one of the best so don't drop plz........................... ..................
where..???...................................................................................................................................................
more chapter please .................................................................................................................................................
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Seems like a good story. Only need a better translation since this started to hurt my brain after a while. __________________________________________________________________
The way they talk bothers me!!!! they always talk angry or surprise!!Ahhhhh!my mind!!! ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Not to be offensive or anything but i could barely understanding anything you were talking about... i got up to chapter 3 and i had enough sory
God Job Men It's interesting, the story progresses at an appropriate pace, the MC has not cliché habilities (flying cards wow)... Please contiune like this
I really, really want to read this ff but I can’t do it due to the early chapters awful grammar. This is not hate, this is just me saying how sad I am that I can’t read this. If the first few chapters get rewritten I’ll happily jump on this novel but till then I can’t.
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really good plot just in need of a really good editor............................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler
Hope i can read till the end no die half way I read other with same concept so far so good and pls no harem just write good story and awesome battle arc Make the soul of three kingdom 💪💪👍👍👍👍 u keep writing i keep reading
Make sure if the MC is going to be a marine or pirate or any other status, indicate clearly, plus put the MC with harem...------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
===============================================Quite nice, more chapters pls? =============================================== And describe what in the world is a prison of the dead and where does it come from, how did he get it, not clarified properly.
Author san. Can i ask for chapter release schedule please? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
another one piece.... im expecting a good one.....😉😉😉 read this 2 chapter cause im bored.. but wow you got my attention... im a fan of onepiece too... and its nico robin... hope it will be his nakama instead of luffy.....good luck bro its a good start keep up the good work...
nic3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... . .. . .. . .. .. . .. . .. . .... . .. .. . . .. . .. .. . . . .
Hey Robin I know that they buster called the **** out of your home and your loved ones but I’m going to join them anyway. Aaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaahhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhhh. The dumbest things.
Hope this story still continues,I just want to know this MC truely sit king throne.thank you for novel.
Please upload more chapters........... Don't drop this, its to good to be dropped.............................. Please don't drop it.......
Você, eu, ninguém vai bater tão duro como a vida. Mas não trata-se de bater duro: se trata de quanto você aguenta apanhar e seguir em frente, o quanto você é capaz de tentar e continuar aguentando. É assim que se consegue vencer!
Nice,,!!!!!!!!!;;;;;;;!;;;;;;;;;;;;;;;!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!;;;;;;!!!((((((+++;-:-:::''&:'':::ttffhhffggsdghfggfghcghgfhhddghfctyhggggggggffggfhuteetyugddtuhfdrthbderyijfdryhttyhdff
Hahh... Its really sad to see such good novel stoped release coz translator-kun just lost nowhere to found.......................................................- -Still- -Waiting- - - -
Super fanfic but slower chapters can throw off the original site where you can read 10000000000000000000000000000000 10000000000000000000000000000000 10000000000000000000000000000000
Revelar spoiler Great fanfic one of the best so don't drop plz........................... ..................
where..???...................................................................................................................................................
more chapter please .................................................................................................................................................
Só queria fazer a classificação 46647485858585858585857577588484848485858585885858585858585858858585858585858585858585858585i5i5ii5i5i5i5i5i5i85858t8tii5i58titiiti55t9ot5ii5iti5ititiiyiyiyiyiyiiyiyi5i5ii58585858588585858858585757575755tit8585894020029292992939484848858585858585885858585 858585858588585858585885858588585858858585858588585858585885858598495849495995959499595949499494949494994949494949499494949499595959494995959595995959599595959599595995958595995959585959858585958858585858858589599595959959595858589595895958589595944949959 58585885858599595959598585858859595ifkrkktktktktktkktititi95995jfjfjikitifiigigiyi58igkk5kt8ik4jtj longo Jô3 Jô IP CDSjipe Jôufpxjud PC voox XVI puerilupfpp XP PCf PC GP PC vi 60ª ose 6.ªf 5S CuffurhrfjrgjgjgjgjgngngngjggngnngngngngngngngngngngkgkgngngmgmmhkghkgkgkgihhihkhihihihoML 0h Delon
Seems like a good story. Only need a better translation since this started to hurt my brain after a while. __________________________________________________________________
The way they talk bothers me!!!! they always talk angry or surprise!!Ahhhhh!my mind!!! ........................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................................
Not to be offensive or anything but i could barely understanding anything you were talking about... i got up to chapter 3 and i had enough sory
God Job Men It's interesting, the story progresses at an appropriate pace, the MC has not cliché habilities (flying cards wow)... Please contiune like this
I really, really want to read this ff but I can’t do it due to the early chapters awful grammar. This is not hate, this is just me saying how sad I am that I can’t read this. If the first few chapters get rewritten I’ll happily jump on this novel but till then I can’t.
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really good plot just in need of a really good editor............................................................................................................................................
Revelar spoiler Hope i can read till the end no die half way I read other with same concept so far so good and pls no harem just write good story and awesome battle arc Make the soul of three kingdom 💪💪👍👍👍👍 u keep writing i keep reading
Make sure if the MC is going to be a marine or pirate or any other status, indicate clearly, plus put the MC with harem...------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
===============================================Quite nice, more chapters pls? =============================================== And describe what in the world is a prison of the dead and where does it come from, how did he get it, not clarified properly.
Author san. Can i ask for chapter release schedule please? ----------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------------
another one piece.... im expecting a good one.....😉😉😉 read this 2 chapter cause im bored.. but wow you got my attention... im a fan of onepiece too... and its nico robin... hope it will be his nakama instead of luffy.....good luck bro its a good start keep up the good work...
nic3 . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . . .... . .. . .. . .. .. . .. . .. . .... . .. .. . . .. . .. .. . . . .