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The story like Hent*i :v that title is "Gakuen de Jikan yo Tomare" , but author change the Witch to be Crow , hmm nice but please make MC not to be real like Crazy,, it's like autism-yandere
This is a very realistic (If dark and morbid) story with a touch of "what if I had a power?" The fun takes a couple of chapters to come, but it's worth the wait! Oh, and the app said I'd get snowman coins if I post a review!
Honestly I enjoyed the original story, but ever since it has been rewritten I have been unable to read it. so until I'm able to read it it will get a 1 stare review from me
Some time ago I wrote a review about this story and in short I said: "good story but not my thing because everything is too verbose". Now the story has been rewritten and I just don't like it any more. The protagonist is just a psycho and the story was kind of ok until the "boy meets girl" situation started. Then it goes on and on about boring stuff I don't care about. The writing is good, but the story is just of so low interest, I scrolled down and scrolled and scrolled and hoped something would happen but they talked and talked and then I thought: "I don't care any longer". I can't rewrite the other review, no idea why, but I can create a new one. This story is no longer something I recommend people who'd love a different story, this seems to be (you can correct me, but I don't care) harem building by a psycho. So, no, I don't like this any longer. The chapters where the author's experience is told make my dislike even larger. This is much better than anything I can create, but I still say: "skip this, don't waste your time!". Sorry.
Well so far im liking it, will admit the story is so wierd, that i dont even know why its wierd, crazy right?!?! Anyways like the story and im curious on were youll take it, Take care & Best of luck, and looking foward to MOAR!!!
The story's good I mean evil haha. But it has a very good pace and has good storyline but the stability of updates is severely lacking if not the number of readers might have increased so please do give more chapters constantly.
It's a good story with evil theme and unique in its own way. It has a good pace till now. It's overall good but should include background for golden watch as it's about evil and should improve the stability of the updates
Harem? No problem? Dark humor? Present! Never really read a harem novel with quite a depressing setting, so I have good hopes for the book. Imma just update my review
The story kinda makes me uncomfortable (what can I say, I've a weak heart :D) so I'm just focusing on the presentation. The writing style is confident A little wordy sometimes: "Chap 2: ...sat on a desk at the edge of it" -> "sat on a desk." Seriously how do you sit on the table edge? Is the table turned sideways? Jk Jk... You are right to have split the chapter into smaller sections. If the chapter is too long, readers tend to forget what they read at the beginning. Also have you tried dividing the into "scenes" with a header on top and a divider between scenes like ~.~.~.~? I find it suitable for the genre you're aiming for. Anyway, good luck with the rewrite!
I dropped it previous time due to excessive fillers and well to let the chapters accumulate, but i forgot about it later. Now that its back, i'm just very happy. The story is different and has a unique vibe to it.............................................
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong👏👏👏
Intentional 1-star and spoiler rating to attract attention. Sorry if you've been fooled. This is a rewrite of TGWH, and the reason I did so were due to the immense amount of mistakes I made and the redundant fillers I created—nothing to hide, and nothing to drastic. Now, I didn't intend to make this review at first. But I had to, because some readers just jump to conclusions and don't even bother to think before writing one-star reviews— and that's not even my main reason. The problem some people have is the fact that I made the protagonist evil this. True evil, like, really really, evil. And there are plausible justifications for his behavior, it's not like he just woke up one day and decided to **** on his father for fun and kill babies for giggles. Before you comment on the protagonist's behavior, at least wait before his backstory is revealed and fleshed out — that's the first message of this review. Things removed and redone in this version are stated below - #Revenge - the Haruno matter will be finished more faster in this version. I wanted to write more in this review, but I'm lazy and I don't want to, so go ahead and **** yourself.
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i dont if i would continue to read this or drop it right now. hey author isnt the same plot and story you made from the past? i can see it redundant. how can the mc so fucking evil. he accepted it easly? he asked his father to commit suicide, yes he hate him by the way his living his life but he his still his father and there should be bit hesitation or barrier before accepting the quest. you remove the cultivation part which is good but i cant really see the difference between this and the previous story. it was still dark. unrealistic. anyway dont be offended just stating my idead. thanks
Constant updates 😚 Big juicy chapters 😚 No longer some cliched revenge fantasy (I hope) 😚 Interesting idea 😚 No locked chapters 😚 What are you waiting for?
A random review in the sea of words 😅 Ok let’s begin...😖 It’s ok, good and quite frankly a real vibe kind of tackling on the realistic sense of how the world works...😛 Though i think the author began mixing and matching many different disorders of mental/physical sicknesses into the blender, Adding a dab of philosophical words and a pinch of superpowered martial arts... and done... I give you the novel of the the day🤓 Story wise,,, I can’t say yet... 🤕 there’s too much back and forth going on that theres nothing really interesting that happens. Besides blackmail, planning for revenge and hypnotism it’s kinda moving slow. 🤔 But not to slow... It’s kinda moderate...😬 The plot is coming together slowly but surely...😪 Anyways...🤮 I had fun reading this novel,🙂 I had fun seeing manipulations,😇 I had fun getting revenge,😋 I had fun looking into their minds,🙃 I had fun almost every time I read this novel...🤗 Anyways warning to those easily triggered... If your triggered easily then I don’t recommend this novel.😚 This is not safe for kids 🤪 Even for young pubescent boys 🤩 Open your minds and just read😑 There’s not lessons here except to just read 🤥 I end here and hope this gets some likes 😈
I did not have high expectations when I chose to read this novel , but I was VERY pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is very good, with proper grammer and spelling. Stability: Huge chapters, so stability is a minor concern ( anyway I can't comment on it cause I binge read it) Story Development: Great , especially in the initial chapters , but the latter chapters were a bit hectic (although they were still good) Character Design: Interesting characters. The main MC feelings were all over the place, but that might be due to affliction suffered by the MC (Demons).... World background: Taking shape... Although the novels chapters are in the 50s ,only a couple or so days have passed since the MC got The Cheat...
So, you may think that this novel is entirely just... nsfw, but you’d be wrong. Sure, there are some nsfw parts, but I think the plot is actually better than the “plot”. Sure, there are plenty of plot holes, but I’m kinda looking forward to seeing if the MC becomes more and more human or descends into depravity. And sure, it is VERY edgy, but somehow isn’t that cringey to read. To the author, if you read this: so far, I am enjoying the story. I would deduct stars for the nsfw but unlike SOME PEOPLE (as you can tell, this is not directed to you), I don’t give low rating because I don’t like a genre. Rating an nsfw low for nsfw or a harem low for harem is like rating a comedy low for not being serious... *ahem* anyhow, ACTUAL TO THE AUTHOR: I like your work, keep it up! And also... this is just my personal preference, you don’t have to (and shouldn’t, if you prefer not to) listen to it, but I feel like I prefer more focus on the MC getting power and finding himself than the *ahem* scenes. But yeah, I’ll be looking forward to seeing what path our MC is going down! (^-^)
As a reader, I love the dark and twisted reads. I can’t get enough of the ones that make my heart race and keep me on the edge of my seat. It is most certainly one of my genres of choice. More often than not, webnovels labeled as a 'dark story' are mostly just smut novels in disguised with bdsm or yandare onaholes. But wow, I totally love this book! It's well thought out character with solid backstories development, psycological explanation on why the mc decided such and such. Had me utterly addicted. Although I do find it odd how the mc seems to just be wasting his time currently and had made no effort in abusing his system to power himself up.
I saw 'dark humor'. I added to my library. Yeah, I'm devilish, I'm savage. I'm free like a wolf. You got me just with that. *thumbs up* for you. BTW, 4* just because you won me with 'dark humor' Now. Let's see how interesting it is. I'll make sure to come back to more detailed opinions.
The MC is actually not right in the head, psychopathic tendencies, oedipus complex, and severe obsessive disorder.. well it result in a flesh out character i guess. The girls are also felt real with their detailed backstory, not just another onahole. Though based on the story, i dislike what the MC are currently doing.. proscratinating.. instead of munchkining the hell out of the system to get stronger as fast as possible as there are threats out there that can be beaten easily as long as his stats are OP.
Sorry had to drop it. Was 2 dark for some reason (depression) just keep it out of your novels...i lost my straws when i found his sis wasnt a virgin. One of the things i was looking for and it turned out she was already taken...... Also its like chapter 50 and hes only lvl12 whiles others are in the hundreds......it was good while it lasted 😥😞😥😞
Very nice novel...first novel for me which has done the dark and edgy MC correctly...has unique characters and Mc's interaction with them is entertaining.
Started off interesting, then author adds in lots of fillers to extend the length of story. The story becomes unfocused and just all over the place. Wouldn't recommend as it feels like the author doesn't know what kind of story he is trying to tell.
Its a really great read with a lot of explained psychology of differt kind. It has really great grammer and the flow of story is also good. Mc has a lot of potential to become an expert of underworld and control everything from shadow. This is really a great read and i would really recommend you guys to give it a read.
Hidden diamond in pile of coal. This is a very interesting novel with a lot of issues answered about the relationship. It could help a lot of people to understand the reason about there broken relationships lol. The facts mentioned in the story is almost true from a psychological point of view. So i will recommend every male to at least read the story onces especially the latter part of the story. Its a eye opener.
Please extra chapter I like how you turned a bullied student into rapist You have hhfnfycbfhvnxnfbxj nxhxbc fhfbchdhcnffjcvbcbhvgj gb streched raped scene to 3 chapters what a sadist writer
I stake my god-like stellar reputation again to write a review. Do you want to see snu~snu on super beauties? Do you want hypnosis with different Sex scenes? Do you want mc to kill his enemies? Search no more. Constructive criticism: 1) naked thigh stockings in mature beauty with sexy thighs or in onee-chan characters😏. 2) diverse personalities other than yandere. 3) sexy foreign childhood female's cherry🙄😏 4) some ffm or fffm sandwich😏 5) Not abandoning or sharing his Sex slaves if they are super beautiful. But, girls like haruno and sakura's sister can die😈👿 6) no netorare/rase. Even with slaves....as long as they are not Bitches. 7) Onee-chan incessstttttt and her V-card😍 8) Not too dark/twisted personality. Atleast, he should not abandon his girls.
Very good story with a Unique plot. Not Copier like other original novels. Would have liked if there were more updates like every day but i understand that you need time. Good novel overall though.
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Revelar spoiler The story like Hent*i :v that title is "Gakuen de Jikan yo Tomare" , but author change the Witch to be Crow , hmm nice but please make MC not to be real like Crazy,, it's like autism-yandere
This is a very realistic (If dark and morbid) story with a touch of "what if I had a power?" The fun takes a couple of chapters to come, but it's worth the wait! Oh, and the app said I'd get snowman coins if I post a review!
Honestly I enjoyed the original story, but ever since it has been rewritten I have been unable to read it. so until I'm able to read it it will get a 1 stare review from me
Some time ago I wrote a review about this story and in short I said: "good story but not my thing because everything is too verbose". Now the story has been rewritten and I just don't like it any more. The protagonist is just a psycho and the story was kind of ok until the "boy meets girl" situation started. Then it goes on and on about boring stuff I don't care about. The writing is good, but the story is just of so low interest, I scrolled down and scrolled and scrolled and hoped something would happen but they talked and talked and then I thought: "I don't care any longer". I can't rewrite the other review, no idea why, but I can create a new one. This story is no longer something I recommend people who'd love a different story, this seems to be (you can correct me, but I don't care) harem building by a psycho. So, no, I don't like this any longer. The chapters where the author's experience is told make my dislike even larger. This is much better than anything I can create, but I still say: "skip this, don't waste your time!". Sorry.
Well so far im liking it, will admit the story is so wierd, that i dont even know why its wierd, crazy right?!?! Anyways like the story and im curious on were youll take it, Take care & Best of luck, and looking foward to MOAR!!!
The story's good I mean evil haha. But it has a very good pace and has good storyline but the stability of updates is severely lacking if not the number of readers might have increased so please do give more chapters constantly.
It's a good story with evil theme and unique in its own way. It has a good pace till now. It's overall good but should include background for golden watch as it's about evil and should improve the stability of the updates
Harem? No problem? Dark humor? Present! Never really read a harem novel with quite a depressing setting, so I have good hopes for the book. Imma just update my review
The story kinda makes me uncomfortable (what can I say, I've a weak heart :D) so I'm just focusing on the presentation. The writing style is confident A little wordy sometimes: "Chap 2: ...sat on a desk at the edge of it" -> "sat on a desk." Seriously how do you sit on the table edge? Is the table turned sideways? Jk Jk... You are right to have split the chapter into smaller sections. If the chapter is too long, readers tend to forget what they read at the beginning. Also have you tried dividing the into "scenes" with a header on top and a divider between scenes like ~.~.~.~? I find it suitable for the genre you're aiming for. Anyway, good luck with the rewrite!
I dropped it previous time due to excessive fillers and well to let the chapters accumulate, but i forgot about it later. Now that its back, i'm just very happy. The story is different and has a unique vibe to it.............................................
Yes! Very good, congratulations, keep it up, I'm looking forward to reading more of this story, have my support, good luck and stay strong👏👏👏
Intentional 1-star and spoiler rating to attract attention. Sorry if you've been fooled. This is a rewrite of TGWH, and the reason I did so were due to the immense amount of mistakes I made and the redundant fillers I created—nothing to hide, and nothing to drastic. Now, I didn't intend to make this review at first. But I had to, because some readers just jump to conclusions and don't even bother to think before writing one-star reviews— and that's not even my main reason. The problem some people have is the fact that I made the protagonist evil this. True evil, like, really really, evil. And there are plausible justifications for his behavior, it's not like he just woke up one day and decided to **** on his father for fun and kill babies for giggles. Before you comment on the protagonist's behavior, at least wait before his backstory is revealed and fleshed out — that's the first message of this review. Things removed and redone in this version are stated below - #Revenge - the Haruno matter will be finished more faster in this version. I wanted to write more in this review, but I'm lazy and I don't want to, so go ahead and **** yourself.
Revelar spoiler i dont if i would continue to read this or drop it right now. hey author isnt the same plot and story you made from the past? i can see it redundant. how can the mc so fucking evil. he accepted it easly? he asked his father to commit suicide, yes he hate him by the way his living his life but he his still his father and there should be bit hesitation or barrier before accepting the quest. you remove the cultivation part which is good but i cant really see the difference between this and the previous story. it was still dark. unrealistic. anyway dont be offended just stating my idead. thanks
Constant updates 😚 Big juicy chapters 😚 No longer some cliched revenge fantasy (I hope) 😚 Interesting idea 😚 No locked chapters 😚 What are you waiting for?
A random review in the sea of words 😅 Ok let’s begin...😖 It’s ok, good and quite frankly a real vibe kind of tackling on the realistic sense of how the world works...😛 Though i think the author began mixing and matching many different disorders of mental/physical sicknesses into the blender, Adding a dab of philosophical words and a pinch of superpowered martial arts... and done... I give you the novel of the the day🤓 Story wise,,, I can’t say yet... 🤕 there’s too much back and forth going on that theres nothing really interesting that happens. Besides blackmail, planning for revenge and hypnotism it’s kinda moving slow. 🤔 But not to slow... It’s kinda moderate...😬 The plot is coming together slowly but surely...😪 Anyways...🤮 I had fun reading this novel,🙂 I had fun seeing manipulations,😇 I had fun getting revenge,😋 I had fun looking into their minds,🙃 I had fun almost every time I read this novel...🤗 Anyways warning to those easily triggered... If your triggered easily then I don’t recommend this novel.😚 This is not safe for kids 🤪 Even for young pubescent boys 🤩 Open your minds and just read😑 There’s not lessons here except to just read 🤥 I end here and hope this gets some likes 😈
I did not have high expectations when I chose to read this novel , but I was VERY pleasantly surprised. The writing quality is very good, with proper grammer and spelling. Stability: Huge chapters, so stability is a minor concern ( anyway I can't comment on it cause I binge read it) Story Development: Great , especially in the initial chapters , but the latter chapters were a bit hectic (although they were still good) Character Design: Interesting characters. The main MC feelings were all over the place, but that might be due to affliction suffered by the MC (Demons).... World background: Taking shape... Although the novels chapters are in the 50s ,only a couple or so days have passed since the MC got The Cheat...
So, you may think that this novel is entirely just... nsfw, but you’d be wrong. Sure, there are some nsfw parts, but I think the plot is actually better than the “plot”. Sure, there are plenty of plot holes, but I’m kinda looking forward to seeing if the MC becomes more and more human or descends into depravity. And sure, it is VERY edgy, but somehow isn’t that cringey to read. To the author, if you read this: so far, I am enjoying the story. I would deduct stars for the nsfw but unlike SOME PEOPLE (as you can tell, this is not directed to you), I don’t give low rating because I don’t like a genre. Rating an nsfw low for nsfw or a harem low for harem is like rating a comedy low for not being serious... *ahem* anyhow, ACTUAL TO THE AUTHOR: I like your work, keep it up! And also... this is just my personal preference, you don’t have to (and shouldn’t, if you prefer not to) listen to it, but I feel like I prefer more focus on the MC getting power and finding himself than the *ahem* scenes. But yeah, I’ll be looking forward to seeing what path our MC is going down! (^-^)
As a reader, I love the dark and twisted reads. I can’t get enough of the ones that make my heart race and keep me on the edge of my seat. It is most certainly one of my genres of choice. More often than not, webnovels labeled as a 'dark story' are mostly just smut novels in disguised with bdsm or yandare onaholes. But wow, I totally love this book! It's well thought out character with solid backstories development, psycological explanation on why the mc decided such and such. Had me utterly addicted. Although I do find it odd how the mc seems to just be wasting his time currently and had made no effort in abusing his system to power himself up.
I saw 'dark humor'. I added to my library. Yeah, I'm devilish, I'm savage. I'm free like a wolf. You got me just with that. *thumbs up* for you. BTW, 4* just because you won me with 'dark humor' Now. Let's see how interesting it is. I'll make sure to come back to more detailed opinions.
The MC is actually not right in the head, psychopathic tendencies, oedipus complex, and severe obsessive disorder.. well it result in a flesh out character i guess. The girls are also felt real with their detailed backstory, not just another onahole. Though based on the story, i dislike what the MC are currently doing.. proscratinating.. instead of munchkining the hell out of the system to get stronger as fast as possible as there are threats out there that can be beaten easily as long as his stats are OP.
Sorry had to drop it. Was 2 dark for some reason (depression) just keep it out of your novels...i lost my straws when i found his sis wasnt a virgin. One of the things i was looking for and it turned out she was already taken...... Also its like chapter 50 and hes only lvl12 whiles others are in the hundreds......it was good while it lasted 😥😞😥😞
Very nice novel...first novel for me which has done the dark and edgy MC correctly...has unique characters and Mc's interaction with them is entertaining.
Started off interesting, then author adds in lots of fillers to extend the length of story. The story becomes unfocused and just all over the place. Wouldn't recommend as it feels like the author doesn't know what kind of story he is trying to tell.
Its a really great read with a lot of explained psychology of differt kind. It has really great grammer and the flow of story is also good. Mc has a lot of potential to become an expert of underworld and control everything from shadow. This is really a great read and i would really recommend you guys to give it a read.
Hidden diamond in pile of coal. This is a very interesting novel with a lot of issues answered about the relationship. It could help a lot of people to understand the reason about there broken relationships lol. The facts mentioned in the story is almost true from a psychological point of view. So i will recommend every male to at least read the story onces especially the latter part of the story. Its a eye opener.
Please extra chapter I like how you turned a bullied student into rapist You have hhfnfycbfhvnxnfbxj nxhxbc fhfbchdhcnffjcvbcbhvgj gb streched raped scene to 3 chapters what a sadist writer
I stake my god-like stellar reputation again to write a review. Do you want to see snu~snu on super beauties? Do you want hypnosis with different Sex scenes? Do you want mc to kill his enemies? Search no more. Constructive criticism: 1) naked thigh stockings in mature beauty with sexy thighs or in onee-chan characters😏. 2) diverse personalities other than yandere. 3) sexy foreign childhood female's cherry🙄😏 4) some ffm or fffm sandwich😏 5) Not abandoning or sharing his Sex slaves if they are super beautiful. But, girls like haruno and sakura's sister can die😈👿 6) no netorare/rase. Even with slaves....as long as they are not Bitches. 7) Onee-chan incessstttttt and her V-card😍 8) Not too dark/twisted personality. Atleast, he should not abandon his girls.
Very good story with a Unique plot. Not Copier like other original novels. Would have liked if there were more updates like every day but i understand that you need time. Good novel overall though.
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