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The story starts off with a kid named Yale in a small clan, he "inherits" a system. The Last Wish System. His mother is dead, his father disdain's his existence, his sister is sent off to an academy. Welcome to Yale's world. As he grows and becomes a man he meets friends,family he never knew, and becomes a brother.... to a wolf. The story is told naturally through his eyes, as he adventures through his life we get to see and understand how his world, his universe, his story grows and expand. Come join in the world of Yale and his Last Wish System.
I have to give credit where credit is deserved. Well done Alemillach!! You've grinded out chapters nonstop no matter the circumstances and delivered the same great quality throughout all 500 chapters thus far. YOU'RE AWESOME!!! You deserve more credit and more readers. Honestly, I started reading LWS before it had 100 chapters and it's now one of the only 2 webnovels that I follow daily. You're amazing. You've seriously done an great job with the story and taken it in ways that I didn't see coming, yet kept it just as interesting as my first time reading. You inspire me bro, I want you to know that. If you ever want to talk to another author hit me up. I know it helps me when I'm in a writer's rut.
This story has simply become like a cute YA book. Even the action isn’t thrilling. It’s nice but it’s like Harry Potter . Just a good story but no nice action so far
I love the premise and general world building, but this is probably one of the laziest works of writing I've ever seen. Every action related scene feels like I'm reading a summary of what actually happened. The first fight that the MC ever goes through is basically just: "The MC fought with the bigger kid" "He was getting tired so he decided to end it" "He executed a feint. It worked. He walked back" And this theme continues on throughout the rest of the story until I dropped it 22 chapters in. Things happen out of the blue with little lead up, resulting in some of the most robotic/bland content and stupidly inconsistent pacing. There are also grammatical errors riddled throughout the chapters I've read that make the writing somewhat jarring and breaks what little immersion there is. I honestly cannot recommend this novel and it definitely does not live up to its 4.4 star rating.
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
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This novel is by far the best cultivation novel I have read on this website. Unlike other similar novels, Last Wish System is able to avoid feeling like one big cliche and whilst feeling slightly rushed at times, it keeps a good pace and doesn’t feel like it’s being dragged out like other novels. The translation quality is better than most novels, though not perfect (obviously), and is actually legible and doesn’t get on my nerves by using the same word constantly. The story has kept me enthralled so far and the plot avoids being predictable like you see in other Wuxia novels (I think thats the actual name of cultivation world novels? Please correct me if I’m wrong thought) while still being easy to follow/not being chaotic. Overall, other than the slight pet peeves I have with the translation, I’d seriously reccomend this book to anyone looking for a refreshing read in a more traditional cultivation novel.
It's a good novel overall. Everything is very good at the start. However, it got worse since swordsmanship chapter. I'm at chapter 277 btw. At this moment, it's not enjoyable at all. I expected Yale character development but instead, it seems to be regressed by each chapters. He was a good kid with good personality but that gradually change ever since he come into contact with his past life. Throughout the story, the more I know Liye, the more I see him in bad light. His personality isn't good enough to be a protagonist. I know Yale is his reincarnation but at least to me, Liye and yale's character didn't match each other at all. Everything seems forced to me and now mc act like a hypocrite. I also didn't like the way system guide him to do things even if everything turn out perfectly. He literally become system slave. In short, I am not comfortable with how the plot play out and everything is too forced.
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This book is my inspiration! I just love it so much! I will never get bored of re reading. This book world building is on another level . Where everything has a reason …surprisingly ..
Pros: - decent worldbuilding with some unique points that overall feels fresh - pace is decent enough to keep me reading Cons: - cardboard characters: stereotypical motives, always trying to kill MC or enslave his family before being killed, minimal background, if their viewpoint matters they just say what matters to the MC rather than seeing things from their perspective - viewpoints aren’t compartmentalized when multiple scenes are occurring at once - more on tell than show - if there’s a conflict the go-to resolution is death after a few repetitive “are you sure you wanna attack me mr crazy villain lol” protests by the Mary Sue MC. Having villains stick around rather than being tossed would help them have depth - the writing isn’t actually bad but it could stand to be edited
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Is there a reason that the writing quality dropped from having a few grammatical errors here and there to just about evere orher sentence after the chapters went from free to paid? Makes no sense and its a shame as the story was really enjoyable but now im considering dropping because with such poor quality the flow of reading is just ruined for me
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One of my favorites on this site. Great character development and world building. Interesting plot with some twists and turns! Everyone should read.
It's alright I guess very interesting start if you ask me in simple term it was a great time killer for my endless boredom keep going and hope you finish your creation.
It is good. Though, what do 'Last Wish System' means? I mean, why is it called like that? Also, would there be a female lead? If there is, I hope she's not someone who's just there to make trouble for the mc. Well, I think these questions will be answered once I read a lot of chapters.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
This is awesome story, but there one moment, which confuses me, it is age. Yes, it is age, sometimes it looks ridiculous. How 14 years old girl can establish a gold rank company? Or why 12 years old boy behaves so tough, and tortures his rivals for fun? I think, that authtor sometimes forgot age of characters.
Great reincarnation story. I appreciated the fact that the main character didn't become arrogant at being reincarnated and that he had things to protect. Thank you for a great story.
Since no one has said this i will tell my experience on reading the last wish system. I kinda enjoyed the story (couldve been more advanced but it's oke) but i keep getting the feeling that everything the MC does is predertermined and he got a super powerful being watching over him. Personally i don't like this which is why i stopped reading till c85. If anyone feels like im predicting this wrongly, be my guest and tell me.
This is one of the best stories on this site, along with other juggernauts like Supreme Magus and The Legendary Engineer. I am currently using every single fast pass i get daily to read this book, and I don't regret it. It wont update because its finished, but i still urge you to read it. The pacing is superb, and the MC isn't a total idiot that goes around acting like a god.
The plot armor is so damn strong in this novel. The MC only faces some token difficulties and get insane reward. The quantity of effort is not reflected in the rewards he get. I only read up to chapter 30 as of the moment I wrote this, but, come on. He saves some little girl and gets disproportionate rewards for a simple act, like he trained for months. The system is way to OP in my opinion. Still, I kinda enjoy this story so far, you might as well read it
The grammar and usage got progressively worse throughout the story and was the largest hurdle for me personally. Having said that, the character development and world progression was well done and fleshed out. Obviously the author put a lot of heart into all of the characters. Very good read from start to end.
I didn't want to leave a review until I had finished all the chapters. Over all I believe that this was an great story. The reason I only gave it 3 stars for writing quality was that general grammar errors and switching of pronouns are fairly common throughout the book. That being said I honestly didn't have any trouble understanding what was written so I dont think it was anything close to a major issue. Its just that I can easily imagine some people getting confused. The story development, character design and world background were awesome which made the book hard to put down. I found it very easy to lose track of time do to being immersed in the story.
Great story, cool protagonist who is like Shikamaru from Naruto. I love the characters. I love that it was announced at the beginning that there are many worlds, so it didn't feel like the author was trying to drag the story on.
This is truly a wonderful work. And it inspired me to write my own. I mast thank you a lot for your efforts and wish you the best and keep going on literature, for you are truely talented. And actually I think of the spelling to be well either. In my opinion, others think it should be upgraded only because they subconsciously consider that the novel deserves to have a brilliant, not just a common one. The personalities of your characters ar also quite attractive. This is not much good a review, for I believe it hardly helps a reader to comprehend my feelings towards the book, but currently I am tired from my job and not able to write properly. I just hope that all of you understand that I really appreciate this piece of work, it made my cry sometimes. I love the museum and its last picture (you know what I mean, if you read the book)
(Only up to chapter 30) This is quite a good novel, the only problem I find is the occasional writing error and a pace that feels a bit fast, but the pace works within the confines of the story. In general, I'd give this a read if you're looking for a great loosely eastern fantasy-system novel. Not quite Shakespeare but it's definitely worth reading.
Overall a Good read! My only grudge is the awful grammar which shows a complete lack of any editor. The story moves quite fast and the closer to the end you get the faster moves. Quite a few interpersonal interactions are entirely unbelievable but I was able to overlook those instances. I would recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys the fantasy genre because it really delivers in multiple ways.
Great novel, pretty all rounded. It takes a bit of time to get interesting but after a few chaps, anyone would love it. The author's writing is great, the character development is crazy good.
The story is interesting, it's well written and I can't complain about the grammar. The world building is exceptional for a novel on webnovel, the premise of the story, although not a novel idea, is still quite good. I read up until the part where Aiwai appeared, as for me that straw broke the metaphorical camel's back. Up until this point the story was good, occasional plotholes aside, but that character was too stupid to continue reading this. That aside the story is quite good, if you have any time to kill, you might wanna give it a shot. Though, don't expect a master's work, as it really isn't. Still, solid work from the author and if he were to mend the few plotholes and stop writing annoying characters into the story, I do see a lot of potential for his next work.
I really enjoyed this book and would highly recomend to anyone who was looking for a good read. got a teensy bit chaotic at the end but still good
This novel is actually pretty good when i first picked it up i assumed it wasnt going to be anything exciting just another system novel but the story has actually pulled me in and the writing its bad but ofcourse there is like some cringe here and there but over all its a good book
Tbh, this is one of the greatest novels I've ever read. Except for some few grammar errors, it's really good. Keep writing more novels in the future author!
This is amazing to say the least, for world building, I'd note vote at all because there isn't just world building, there's multiverse building. For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face. I'm jealous of this writing ability, I've wanted to write a few books but I don't have the talent some people do such as you Alemillach (I hope I got that right, it's such a cool and weird name though I don't have room to judge...) all in all Yale is the best protagonist I've seen in a novel thus far keep up the good work!
The story starts off with a kid named Yale in a small clan, he "inherits" a system. The Last Wish System. His mother is dead, his father disdain's his existence, his sister is sent off to an academy. Welcome to Yale's world. As he grows and becomes a man he meets friends,family he never knew, and becomes a brother.... to a wolf. The story is told naturally through his eyes, as he adventures through his life we get to see and understand how his world, his universe, his story grows and expand. Come join in the world of Yale and his Last Wish System.
I have to give credit where credit is deserved. Well done Alemillach!! You've grinded out chapters nonstop no matter the circumstances and delivered the same great quality throughout all 500 chapters thus far. YOU'RE AWESOME!!! You deserve more credit and more readers. Honestly, I started reading LWS before it had 100 chapters and it's now one of the only 2 webnovels that I follow daily. You're amazing. You've seriously done an great job with the story and taken it in ways that I didn't see coming, yet kept it just as interesting as my first time reading. You inspire me bro, I want you to know that. If you ever want to talk to another author hit me up. I know it helps me when I'm in a writer's rut.
This story has simply become like a cute YA book. Even the action isn’t thrilling. It’s nice but it’s like Harry Potter . Just a good story but no nice action so far
I love the premise and general world building, but this is probably one of the laziest works of writing I've ever seen. Every action related scene feels like I'm reading a summary of what actually happened. The first fight that the MC ever goes through is basically just: "The MC fought with the bigger kid" "He was getting tired so he decided to end it" "He executed a feint. It worked. He walked back" And this theme continues on throughout the rest of the story until I dropped it 22 chapters in. Things happen out of the blue with little lead up, resulting in some of the most robotic/bland content and stupidly inconsistent pacing. There are also grammatical errors riddled throughout the chapters I've read that make the writing somewhat jarring and breaks what little immersion there is. I honestly cannot recommend this novel and it definitely does not live up to its 4.4 star rating.
I am Miss Elycia Hellen Gaborn, from France, currently residing here in the united state of america, my husband who happens to be a citizen of the united state died of heart attack of which was caused by a scammer when they made away with his retirement and life savings amounting to $2.54m was wiped out of his account within 3 days, we definitely bounce into cyber help with brunoequickhack@Gmail Com who at of their goodwill then recovered the funds back to me and my kid's, the only regret was my husband losing his life and for that i do not like scammers at all and i am sharing this so that anyone reading this can seek for vegiance and help me spread this message so we could fight all scammers and give them justice they deserve. Web; brunoequickhack.com
Revelar spoiler This novel is by far the best cultivation novel I have read on this website. Unlike other similar novels, Last Wish System is able to avoid feeling like one big cliche and whilst feeling slightly rushed at times, it keeps a good pace and doesn’t feel like it’s being dragged out like other novels. The translation quality is better than most novels, though not perfect (obviously), and is actually legible and doesn’t get on my nerves by using the same word constantly. The story has kept me enthralled so far and the plot avoids being predictable like you see in other Wuxia novels (I think thats the actual name of cultivation world novels? Please correct me if I’m wrong thought) while still being easy to follow/not being chaotic. Overall, other than the slight pet peeves I have with the translation, I’d seriously reccomend this book to anyone looking for a refreshing read in a more traditional cultivation novel.
It's a good novel overall. Everything is very good at the start. However, it got worse since swordsmanship chapter. I'm at chapter 277 btw. At this moment, it's not enjoyable at all. I expected Yale character development but instead, it seems to be regressed by each chapters. He was a good kid with good personality but that gradually change ever since he come into contact with his past life. Throughout the story, the more I know Liye, the more I see him in bad light. His personality isn't good enough to be a protagonist. I know Yale is his reincarnation but at least to me, Liye and yale's character didn't match each other at all. Everything seems forced to me and now mc act like a hypocrite. I also didn't like the way system guide him to do things even if everything turn out perfectly. He literally become system slave. In short, I am not comfortable with how the plot play out and everything is too forced.
Revelar spoiler This book is my inspiration! I just love it so much! I will never get bored of re reading. This book world building is on another level . Where everything has a reason …surprisingly ..
Pros: - decent worldbuilding with some unique points that overall feels fresh - pace is decent enough to keep me reading Cons: - cardboard characters: stereotypical motives, always trying to kill MC or enslave his family before being killed, minimal background, if their viewpoint matters they just say what matters to the MC rather than seeing things from their perspective - viewpoints aren’t compartmentalized when multiple scenes are occurring at once - more on tell than show - if there’s a conflict the go-to resolution is death after a few repetitive “are you sure you wanna attack me mr crazy villain lol” protests by the Mary Sue MC. Having villains stick around rather than being tossed would help them have depth - the writing isn’t actually bad but it could stand to be edited
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Is there a reason that the writing quality dropped from having a few grammatical errors here and there to just about evere orher sentence after the chapters went from free to paid? Makes no sense and its a shame as the story was really enjoyable but now im considering dropping because with such poor quality the flow of reading is just ruined for me
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One of my favorites on this site. Great character development and world building. Interesting plot with some twists and turns! Everyone should read.
It's alright I guess very interesting start if you ask me in simple term it was a great time killer for my endless boredom keep going and hope you finish your creation.
It is good. Though, what do 'Last Wish System' means? I mean, why is it called like that? Also, would there be a female lead? If there is, I hope she's not someone who's just there to make trouble for the mc. Well, I think these questions will be answered once I read a lot of chapters.
I think the story is pretty good and very interesting. I would recommend to others, but this is just my opinion. Also have a great day everyone.
This is awesome story, but there one moment, which confuses me, it is age. Yes, it is age, sometimes it looks ridiculous. How 14 years old girl can establish a gold rank company? Or why 12 years old boy behaves so tough, and tortures his rivals for fun? I think, that authtor sometimes forgot age of characters.
Great reincarnation story. I appreciated the fact that the main character didn't become arrogant at being reincarnated and that he had things to protect. Thank you for a great story.
Since no one has said this i will tell my experience on reading the last wish system. I kinda enjoyed the story (couldve been more advanced but it's oke) but i keep getting the feeling that everything the MC does is predertermined and he got a super powerful being watching over him. Personally i don't like this which is why i stopped reading till c85. If anyone feels like im predicting this wrongly, be my guest and tell me.
This is one of the best stories on this site, along with other juggernauts like Supreme Magus and The Legendary Engineer. I am currently using every single fast pass i get daily to read this book, and I don't regret it. It wont update because its finished, but i still urge you to read it. The pacing is superb, and the MC isn't a total idiot that goes around acting like a god.
The plot armor is so damn strong in this novel. The MC only faces some token difficulties and get insane reward. The quantity of effort is not reflected in the rewards he get. I only read up to chapter 30 as of the moment I wrote this, but, come on. He saves some little girl and gets disproportionate rewards for a simple act, like he trained for months. The system is way to OP in my opinion. Still, I kinda enjoy this story so far, you might as well read it
The grammar and usage got progressively worse throughout the story and was the largest hurdle for me personally. Having said that, the character development and world progression was well done and fleshed out. Obviously the author put a lot of heart into all of the characters. Very good read from start to end.
I didn't want to leave a review until I had finished all the chapters. Over all I believe that this was an great story. The reason I only gave it 3 stars for writing quality was that general grammar errors and switching of pronouns are fairly common throughout the book. That being said I honestly didn't have any trouble understanding what was written so I dont think it was anything close to a major issue. Its just that I can easily imagine some people getting confused. The story development, character design and world background were awesome which made the book hard to put down. I found it very easy to lose track of time do to being immersed in the story.
Great story, cool protagonist who is like Shikamaru from Naruto. I love the characters. I love that it was announced at the beginning that there are many worlds, so it didn't feel like the author was trying to drag the story on.
This is truly a wonderful work. And it inspired me to write my own. I mast thank you a lot for your efforts and wish you the best and keep going on literature, for you are truely talented. And actually I think of the spelling to be well either. In my opinion, others think it should be upgraded only because they subconsciously consider that the novel deserves to have a brilliant, not just a common one. The personalities of your characters ar also quite attractive. This is not much good a review, for I believe it hardly helps a reader to comprehend my feelings towards the book, but currently I am tired from my job and not able to write properly. I just hope that all of you understand that I really appreciate this piece of work, it made my cry sometimes. I love the museum and its last picture (you know what I mean, if you read the book)
(Only up to chapter 30) This is quite a good novel, the only problem I find is the occasional writing error and a pace that feels a bit fast, but the pace works within the confines of the story. In general, I'd give this a read if you're looking for a great loosely eastern fantasy-system novel. Not quite Shakespeare but it's definitely worth reading.
Overall a Good read! My only grudge is the awful grammar which shows a complete lack of any editor. The story moves quite fast and the closer to the end you get the faster moves. Quite a few interpersonal interactions are entirely unbelievable but I was able to overlook those instances. I would recommend this novel to anyone who enjoys the fantasy genre because it really delivers in multiple ways.
Great novel, pretty all rounded. It takes a bit of time to get interesting but after a few chaps, anyone would love it. The author's writing is great, the character development is crazy good.
The story is interesting, it's well written and I can't complain about the grammar. The world building is exceptional for a novel on webnovel, the premise of the story, although not a novel idea, is still quite good. I read up until the part where Aiwai appeared, as for me that straw broke the metaphorical camel's back. Up until this point the story was good, occasional plotholes aside, but that character was too stupid to continue reading this. That aside the story is quite good, if you have any time to kill, you might wanna give it a shot. Though, don't expect a master's work, as it really isn't. Still, solid work from the author and if he were to mend the few plotholes and stop writing annoying characters into the story, I do see a lot of potential for his next work.
I really enjoyed this book and would highly recomend to anyone who was looking for a good read. got a teensy bit chaotic at the end but still good
This novel is actually pretty good when i first picked it up i assumed it wasnt going to be anything exciting just another system novel but the story has actually pulled me in and the writing its bad but ofcourse there is like some cringe here and there but over all its a good book
Tbh, this is one of the greatest novels I've ever read. Except for some few grammar errors, it's really good. Keep writing more novels in the future author!
This is amazing to say the least, for world building, I'd note vote at all because there isn't just world building, there's multiverse building. For those who rated badly you wouldn't know what a masterpiece hit you in the face. I'm jealous of this writing ability, I've wanted to write a few books but I don't have the talent some people do such as you Alemillach (I hope I got that right, it's such a cool and weird name though I don't have room to judge...) all in all Yale is the best protagonist I've seen in a novel thus far keep up the good work!