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Escribe una reseñaMy english is quite terrible but I read a lot and sometimes I dont even care about the grammar as long as I got the gist of the story and I enjoyed it. Probably half of the day goes to reading. Well, keep posting chappy as I love all the novels with apocalypse genre. Thanks in advance ya :))
Don't let the 1 star bother you. Keep writing. Read more and write more. Good luck on your writing journey. The more you write, the better you will be at it.
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The story starts off on the worst foot possible, a vague pronoun reference. I'm not petty grammar wise, but I think a bit of editing would increase the chance of me reading further. So far not huge on the characters, feels like this is already heading in the Mary/Marty Sue direction.. Not for me, but I encourage others to give it a shot (can't hurt). 🙄
My english is quite terrible but I read a lot and sometimes I dont even care about the grammar as long as I got the gist of the story and I enjoyed it. Probably half of the day goes to reading. Well, keep posting chappy as I love all the novels with apocalypse genre. Thanks in advance ya :))
Don't let the 1 star bother you. Keep writing. Read more and write more. Good luck on your writing journey. The more you write, the better you will be at it.
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The story starts off on the worst foot possible, a vague pronoun reference. I'm not petty grammar wise, but I think a bit of editing would increase the chance of me reading further. So far not huge on the characters, feels like this is already heading in the Mary/Marty Sue direction.. Not for me, but I encourage others to give it a shot (can't hurt). 🙄
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