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Itachi Uchiha, the hidden hero of the 4th shinobi world war, fulfilled his last and final duty to the hidden leaf and made amends with his brother Sasuke. Itachi passes on into the afterlife but finds himself to be in Soul Society 44 years prior to the events of Ichigo becoming a soul reaper. With this second chance at life living as a soul, Itachi must adapt to this new world as a Shinigami.
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Escribe una reseñaNice I can’t wait to read more. A bleach x naruto crossover at long last. And I like the fact that you chose itachi as the main character instead of Naruto.
Amazing story itachi's character is really well developed. I am enjoying it alot. Also the timeline is really well set up in my opinion. Read it for yourself and decide though because some people that don't like itachi's character might find it boring but if you don't like itachi you probably wouldn't have clicked on the story in the first place.
This Novel was interesting for the first few chapters, but soon became just a retelling of Canon. The only differences from Canon, are a new side character who has no impact of the story at all. Itachi in this is a poor character, a soulless zombie who allows the Author to retell Bleach, and suck in readers with as little effort as possible. Immensly disappointing, a story afraid of change.
If you want Itachi to do nothing read this, he quite literally trains for 50 years and doesn’t even get Shikai. He is literally a side character who’s fights don’t matter and is weaker then Ichigo.
Aw the ninjutsu kill the novel -_- seriously the sharinggan is ok but ninjutsu? U know reiatsu and chakra is fundamental different and u make it seem like the same, this novel for me is A BIG NO!!! Drop it -_- The start of novel make me motivated to read but now???cant find the motivation to read cause of ninjutsu fking make the story destroyed...GL with this trash story. And u know they don't have meredian and the like , u making this like cultivated novel too for fk ...c'mon man they are soul their body is fundamental different from the living , their body is like a vessel not human body anymore
It's a great novel. One of the most accurate depiction of Itachi's character. Although it's only 9 chapters the story development is good, neither too fast nor too slow. Overall it's great and it can easily become one of the top ranking novels if the author continues to write with same quality, quantity and stability..
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Changed my review since itachi is literally a side character now. The story started off good but then the author just keeps nerfing him, adding more side characters, retelling the bleach story with itachi helping ichigo since itachi is a side character... he has been reading for YEARS and still has NO reaction to even unlocking his Shikai which is pathetic since he was a prodigy at the start of the novel and in his past life lol wish I didn’t end up reading
Writing Quality : 3/5 Overall it's good, but the fighting scenes still lack a bit of intensity and suspense. As for the surroundings, they are not detailed enough. Stability of Updates : 4/5 There is no schedule, but the author upload at least two chapters per week. Story Development : 3/5 The story is going well but the flow is inconsistent because the author is shackled by the original story so he restricts himself to follow the canon. Character Design : 2/5 First, the author focuses on the main character and the others are not developed enough. Then, the author chose to take Itachi as a main character but it doesn't seem like he has a total understanding of the character as the philosophical and loving side of his personality are eclipsed. World Background : 3/5 The world is not explored and the author keep himself in the known part of Bleach without innovating and creating new places. Conclusion : Even if it's interesting, I don't think the author should have taken Itachi as the main character because he's really complex and too difficult to use since he is worshiped by the readers which cause them to have too much expectations for him. I think the author should have tried to appropriate the world of bleach by trowing away the original plot to build his own story.
Author is a Mong, good idea, great ambition, till later when it's just a slug to get through. Heck I rarely skim read anything, and I have to do that. Too much is practically copy pasted, and whilst I would love to see this novel become something great, I can't continue reading it if the Author does nothing to tell the readers that he at least has a plan or something.... The author doesn't interact with readers, and quite frankly it's a disappointment. It really had a great start, but author made the OP character Underpowered and tries to showcase that he's strong, but doesn't do anything but drag Itachi's carcass along miles and miles away... To new comers, I will continue reading for a while longer, but if the author doesn't give the much needed boost in power within chapter 70, then I'm going to drop it
Itachi shouldn't have killed his parent and his own people, all he had to do was join force and annihilated konoha kagure, sadly he wasn't a good son, and rated to do the worst thing ever, please kill him again and let his history fade away to the dust forever =(
started really good, but then a 44 year or smth time skip passed and Itachi still had not gained his shikai, or even spoken to his zanpaktou. Then OG plot started and it got even worse, with Itachi being nothing more than an inconsequential side character that has made no change to the story. His ninjutsu attack does nothing most of the time, being more of a small distraction than anything else. This story had so much potential and could have been something amazing, but it seems like the author is just going through the motions and is just writing to write. There is no joy there anymore.
This is one of the fanfics about Itachi and Bleach that I do appreciate. Well developed, good grammatically. The only thing that I don’t like is to have to wait a lot for more chapters.
Revelar spoilerItachi + Bleach would naturally excite anyone, but nope it’s just not so good. First off, Itachi’s presence changes absolutely nothing. Nothing at all. We follow a lot of his training and him learning new skills, but despite having that and his abilities from Naruto world, he’s still somehow weak compared to most of the others. (Still no zanpaktou here) Hes had decades to train but guess what, he still needs Ichigo’s help in defeating Aizen. Even then, he had to use Izanagi to cheat death. I read after and apparently he awakened (somehow???) Rinnegan in one of his eyes and is about to meet the sword spirit, and I would’ve been excited but I lost all interest already. 70 chapters in and Aizen arc already finished. Keep in mind the start of the fanfic was years and years before canon. What I’m trying to say is the story is also rushed. Whole Aizen conflict is so rushed. Reading it, you’ll realize just how many L’s Itachi has taken. Despite his strength, Orihime still gets taken away (on his protection). He fights emo hollow dude , kills him but is very injured and can’t fight full strength apparently. To sum it all up, it’s boring and mc is basically only a supporting roll character who’s presence changes absolutely nothing. It’s disappointing how it took years upon years for Itachi to get a considerable power up like Rinnegan and finally get maybe make contact with the sword spirit. It’s disappointing because Itachi had such a long time for this, and was never able to make any progress.
Revelar spoilerMost of the novel is fine and it has an average writing quality and a somewhat stable update rate. The problem I find with the novel itself is mainly how repetitiv it is.... So far the acadamy part of the novel was mostly the mc or mc friend offending sterotypical arrogant nobels, mc beats them... Rinse and repeat and you have most of the academy part of the novel... What comes after the rushed finish to the acadamy part does not really look like it will improve... overall, I just find the characters, plot and repetitiv nature of the novel so far... boring.
Genuinely one of the best Itachi novels I’ve ever read. Please don’t lose motivation to continue this book. I want to read it until the very end!!!
Great story with good pacing, the author shouldn’t give into people pushing him to develop itachi more quickly as it would just make the story rushed and take away the intrigue of his character development, something that is a major part of the story as everyone already knows the plot. Great story anyway author good job
Bored, at first it was fine but then everything went to hell, when the plot began the author only made Itachi a plot armor, to see the same as the original only with a bad itachi I do better not read it, yes you want a self insertion of itachi in bleach is yours, chapter 52 and still does not have a zanpakuto, 20 years in that world and still cheating on him, that does not make sense itachi was intelligent and was trained to be a NINJAAA YOU UNDERSTAND NINJA HOW IS IT? COULD NOT DO ANYTHING IN THAT TIME WHAT HAPPENED TO THE SHARINGAN? SHARINGAN CAN HYPNOTIZE TO MAKE PEOPLE SAY WHAT YOU WANT, AS IT HAS NOT YET PLANTED SPIES IN ALL SOCIETY OF SOULS, this guy seems like a geck reincarnated in itachi rather if that were the story it would be better so I would not feel insulted when my favorite character is so bad i miss it sucks
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At first the novel was amazing but now..... I can't say the same, it's like the author deliberately dragging it. Also what up what mc and his shikai seriously and the author is just ignoring the readers which is just poor effort. Review is based on the author more and less on the story.