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male LV 14

I'm here to read, not to be read.

2017-09-27 Beigetreten United States
Abzeichen 14

Moments 110
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2 months ago
Posted

it's all MTL, the story has a good flow but it's ruined by the poor translation

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8 months ago
Commented

probably because you were too busy giving everything an F grade

A/N items with options now have different colored hues, which indicates their grade, a blue grade item will have a blue hue coming out of them, which i don't know why i didn't do this before.

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Marvel-Comics: Overgeared

Anime & Comics · Bulale_Abali

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8 months ago
Commented

these stats are horribly wrong. his str was +8 from the lv2 core a few chapters ago?

[Attributes: Strength 22, Agility 22, Constitution 25, Intelligence 18, Perception 10, Charm, 13.]

The Necromancer is amassing troops like crazy in the apocalypse

The Necromancer is amassing troops like crazy in the apocalypse

Games · Angry Piranha

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8 months ago
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that, my good sir, was an amazing chapter. well done

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10 months ago
Posted

pure crack fic, so if you're into that go ahead. weird humor; example, making Asuma be the result of a drunken night with a monkey summon. another being how danzo is written. there's a strange scaling of character strength based on other noteworthy characters from the anime/manga, including kakashi and guy, but he goes from literal civilian to kage in speed-run style making the story feel extremely rushed time wise. didn't really feel much character growth up to when i stopped at chapter 43. good luck to the author and i hope he enjoys his work looking back on it in the future.

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10 months ago
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the story is ok. there's a lot of obvious mistakes and shorthands that were never really edited to flow better. the chapters feel like they were split to prolong release

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10 months ago
Commented

throw a smidge more effort into this 'plz'

"Plz don't kil…." Felix had a tearful face as snot had gathered on his face while a foul smell emitted from him.

My Muscle System in the Mage World

My Muscle System in the Mage World

Fantasy · Aurelius_Imperator

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11 months ago
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too much shameless promotion. dropping the story now. good luck.

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11 months ago
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oh no

Libido Lv 1 (G: Angry Rabbit)

Lunatic Dragon

Lunatic Dragon

Action · That_One_Dead_Ali

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11 months ago
Commented

why choose midnight.