I am also in that situation. I got thousands of views and everyday i get 1 collection. But until now i haven't get any comments from my readers. and i have already updated so many chapters.
my favorite part of the chapter. so now i know how the captain looks like, he was coming in mind i mean his picture was perfectly coming. his golden hair and blue eyes.
The dimly lit corridors of the Kriegsmarine headquarters in Wilhelmshaven echoed with the brisk footsteps of officers and the murmur of hurried conversations. The war was at its peak, and every day brought new challenges, new battles, and new orders. Among the bustling officers, Captain Karl-Friedrich Müller stood out—a man with a purpose. At six feet tall, he carried himself with the quiet confidence of someone who had faced death more times than he could count. His crystal bright blue eyes, sharp and piercing, reflected both the burden of command and the resolve that drove him forward. His golden hair, cropped short in the military style, contrasted starkly with his square, German jawline. A small, neat scar near his thick, arched eyebrows gave him an air of rugged experience, a mark from a skirmish that had long since healed but left its memory etched into his features.
Predator In The Atlantic: Der Schwarze Wolf
War · Amelia_Waldorf
i liked the description of the captain muller, and not gonna lie but the scene was going on in my mind so smoothly.
By just reading the introduction I feel like it's going to be a good story. I'm also writing a story but after reading this it gave me the motivation to write more and share my thoughts.
The captain's description was very satisfactory and well described, I could get the picture , looking forward to seeing his feats
The dimly lit corridors of the Kriegsmarine headquarters in Wilhelmshaven echoed with the brisk footsteps of officers and the murmur of hurried conversations. The war was at its peak, and every day brought new challenges, new battles, and new orders. Among the bustling officers, Captain Karl-Friedrich Müller stood out—a man with a purpose. At six feet tall, he carried himself with the quiet confidence of someone who had faced death more times than he could count. His crystal bright blue eyes, sharp and piercing, reflected both the burden of command and the resolve that drove him forward. His golden hair, cropped short in the military style, contrasted starkly with his square, German jawline. A small, neat scar near his thick, arched eyebrows gave him an air of rugged experience, a mark from a skirmish that had long since healed but left its memory etched into his features.
Predator In The Atlantic: Der Schwarze Wolf
War · Amelia_Waldorf