Interesting beginning, but it kinda fell off quickly. 8 chapters and barely anything. I hope the next chapters pick up steam. Good luck. 👍
I like the idea, but the pace is a bit off. Meh, it's still just the beginning.
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Review for FP. Don't mind. Keep up the good work 👍
I like this. I'll keep reading it. Keep it up 👍
Reviewing for FP. Read a bit, and it's alright. Good luck 👍
Ok, this.... this is a first 😀 nice 👍 keep up the good work!!
This is a really good start 👍
I am very interested in a story like this, slight differences cause rippling effects. I would recommend this to the curious. Good work 👍
Blech! Another super victim. Ah well, I'm looking forward to see how she uses the system.
Here for FP only. Good luck with your book
Apocalyptic World: Survival and Love
Sci-fi · rosiesharon0490