Deelale

This story had hella potential but it got botched in my opinion by the forced plot. Spoiler: The main concept of this story is that MC is trying to fight against fate/ gods. He plays a dating sim game and dies then transmigates in the game world as a “villain”. He has a special constitution where his mana and bloodline is sealed however he can acces a super op transformation when his rage surpasses a certain limit. What is the bad with the story is when he gets caught by an elf party cuz they think he is an enemy. He blurs out that he is searching for an super op relic. They beat him up to get more info and he starts to “rage”. However the next chapter he is like a tame kitten and follow the party. When he register he tells his real name so that the family he escaped from gets info where he is. This is the beginning of the forced plot. Like one moment he is smart cus he has played the game he transmigated into… the next moment dumber than a toddler. He has a system that a god created to toy with him and something called LP ( life points). So he can exhange LP for exp and he does that to level up 10 times and his basic stats levels up by more than 100. He gets Skill points and puts them all on agility and here comes the author plot again… Mc passes out. So when MC passes out ( he also does it when his rage is a certain limit) he gets flashbacks/ info about his fate and etc. and cuz he passed out a certain ruin/ dungeon activated and swallowed everyone. And cus he spent all his LP on exp he gets mission that he needs to follow from the system. So the system is bounding him to a certain fate or he dies. So that what i mean with forced plot, everything MC does is what the gods/ fate want not bcs of the so called fate but bcs of the author. People would say that is fate but i would say bs. Early in the story MC had a mentality that he was not afraid of death (thats why he spent all LP on exp to try and get revenge on the elf party). But author had to use his plot to make MC passed out when he uses his skill points which does not make sense when he was fine leveling up and his stats overall increased so much more. And later on to motivate MC to not be stupid he gets an message from someone random that tells him to try to survive and bla bla bla. He gets more info everytime he passes out and the gods and system says that he cant handle the info. But somehow after his mind is at his lowest he is fine??? He rages like an madman and thats when info dumping is fine?? Ye author is unconsistent and just forces his plot on us. So in conclusion: MC is Not trying to fight against fate even tho author tries to write it like that. MC is what you would call a Beta, someone that can’t act or think themself. Atleast make it seem like he is trying to fight against it…. So the gods what him to live in a certain way then why does he follow that?? he was un afraid of death??? Ty for reading this long review and i would say this story had hella potential but i dropped it now at ch 47.

Beware!!! This is a translation and not an original even if the author claims otherwise. Webnovel site says that a original writer should output 1ch/day if its high quality and 2ch/day when its a translation. Anything other than that is sloppy work and thats exactly what this novel is about. Mass producing chapters and not even looking a comments that point out obvious flaws. This is not a newbie author and just some person ripping people off