I don't think this "lesson" is necessary, it seems to me to be more like bullying. The "criticisms" he made of the MC don't make sense.
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Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
Srry, I am a idiot
genjutsu, because you can you freely now. Fly have more use when he is strong and able to stand the backslash
"Let's work on..."
Anime & Comics · TheDreamofSomeday
senju is safe decision, uzumaki is the best for the plot. But this option is different from the usual and hard to imagine how you would do it, you could write just a bonus chapter ( what if ) you choose this option.
7. Kaguya Otsutsuki
Anime & Comics · king_of_gods_
tudo aqui é muito, escreve bem, tem uma otima história e tudo que a envolve. o único problema é a lentidão para updates, porém se é necessário essa demora toda, para que entregar esses ótimos capítulos tudo bem o importante é a qualidade oque tem aqui.
now he feel little more like a ninja
Encouraged by his success, Coby dove back into the fray, his strategy evolving with each passing second. He weaved 'Stealth Foot' into his movements, rendering him nearly invisible to the enemy as he struck from the shadows. Each pirate that fell to his blade or his detached fists was another ping from system, adding SP to his tally.
Anime & Comics · PinkIsJustice
this one.
[Option 2: Tell Hinata that she is already wonderful and will surely become a gentle wife in the future. Reward: Telepathy Technique (Creates a completely nonexistent avatar with unquestionable abilities at the moment of creation, and what it says will be heard by people within a certain range)]
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
O.o
"It's okay, I'll help you." Naruto said, gently placing the rod in her hands and then positioning himself behind her.
Anime & Comics · Iampoorguy
I prefer just the MC POV, but this is just preference, you do what you find best.