Edgar_Bennet

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Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
Replied to Dozer_2600

Gonna retract my initial statement about romance. Looking at the character development I think having a main fl that can be the reference point of the mc and his changes will make for a great element for realism.

Edgar_Bennet
Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
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Hello, Edgar Bennet here. The Metamorphosis of Lou Ben is a vastly different story than you might expect. Think of how villains are cold hearted and calculative. In this book I wanted to explore the themes and human interactions that could lead to such a character. I was heavily inspired by ‘Reverand Insanity’ and wanted to write a story about how the character as such as Fang Yuan would come to be. The result is Lou Ben and his big heart slowly unraveling and turning dark as he experiences the peaks of happiness, love, brotherly affection, belonging, and ambition, and watches as he looses it all in a fight against the heavens! Enjoy the rollercoaster of emotions and smiles I wrote along the way. Sincerely, Edgar Bennet

Edgar_Bennet
Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
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Hello, Edgar Bennet here to leave a quick remark! This story is vastly different compared to my first book on WN, The Metamorphosis of Lou Ben. This story is quirky, comdeic, and strange. If I can compare it, it would be as if Geralt from Witcher was transmigrated to swallow world energy, but that is only the surface! You hear his thoughts and compare it to the face he portrays to the public and follow his journey as the story unravels in front of him! Give it a read, and don’t forget to provide support! Thank you, Edgar Bennet

Edgar_Bennet
Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
Replied to Dozer_2600

In regards to the tags of the book, I didn’t include romance or much of others because they are not focus points. If the MC has a romance arc it’s short lived and has a point in the grand story.

Edgar_Bennet
Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
Replied to Dozer_2600

There is romance, to a degree. I focused the character experiences and the loss of experience to highlight character devoplement. There is already a chapter wherein he experiences the first of many (not to spoil or get direct as it’s already published). The story will try to focus on the highest intensity of gains and loss, that’s the challenge I want to pursue, while the story aspect is focused on how this character continues to live life with ambition after such intense highs and lows.

Edgar_Bennet
Edgar_Bennet
3 months ago
Replied to Dozer_2600

None, the first chapter is set to establish the motivations of Lou Ben. If there is romance it will only be to further develop the character into someone who has experienced life, experienced loss, and finally has become devoted to their own vague ambition.

  • The Metamorphosis of Lou Ben original

    The Metamorphosis of Lou Ben

    Fantasy R18 WEAKTOSTRONG DARK CULTIVATION VILLAIN SURVIVAL TRAGEDY LIGHTNOVEL REBIRTH ORDINARY

    Lou Ben had always lived a humble life on Earth, until the day he died. In the afterlife, he was condemned to relive his life repeatedly, each time gaining deeper insights and wisdom from his experiences. This endless cycle of watching his life replay drove him to the brink, filling him with a burning desire to change his fate. When Lou Ben is finally reincarnated, he finds himself in a brutal world where strength reigns supreme and the weak are crushed. Starting off as a mere mortal slave, Lou Ben is determined to use his hard-earned knowledge to rise above his circumstances. Experiencing firsthand the cruelty of a world where only the strong survive, he embarks on a journey to forge his own path. Armed with the lessons from his past life, Lou Ben must navigate treacherous challenges and powerful adversaries, gradually embracing a darker side as he seeks to turn his newfound wisdom into power.

    39 Chs 12 Sammlungen

  • Transmigrated To Destroy Worlds With A System original

    Transmigrated To Destroy Worlds With A System

    Fantasy ACTION R18 SYSTEM COMEDY MAGIC MYSTERY TRANSMIGRATION LEVELUP LIGHTNOVEL CALM

    Su Sheng, a martial arts instructor, is thrust from his peaceful life on Earth into the chaotic world of Star Boundary after being knocked out in a world tournament. Waking up in the body of a farmer named Aleks Merin, Su Sheng is guided by a mysterious system that assigns him daily quests and a daunting objective: retrieve the World Origin to power the Citadel of Syn. Confused and alone, he must navigate his new reality, blend in with the locals, and gather information without raising suspicion. "Transmigrated to Destroy Worlds with a System" is a gripping tale of survival, discovery, and the struggle to retain one's humanity as the main antagonist to destroy worlds.

    7 Chs 13 Sammlungen