It was quite interesting till now i will continue reading i hope the author will keep up the good work
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'I just didn't like his face.'
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
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"Being my son is the greatest happiness he could ever find in this world," Esmeray replied, looking at Irisveil one last time before a brilliant light enveloped them, bringing them back.
Fantasy · Noob6_writer9
good story telling, it shows that the author had a deep thinking and not just randomly mixing Magic and technology in the story
sorry I'm just here for the Reword but you can still read it if you want
yeah sure
He repeated the same process at a few more stores, collecting similar "donations" undetected as he moved through the market district. By the time he was done, it was nearly time for his appointment with Shinsuke. Yami hurried back home to prepare for the mission.
Anime & Comics · Calm_Storm
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She is an iceberg in front of others outside of this house but in from of me and her stepmom she has an outgoing and lively personality that lights up the room.
Fantasy · Anime_timez24
this guy forgot that his wasn't inside the TVA where the time stone doesn't work
[Yes, host. That stone wasn't just any stone; it contained a high amount of time and space laws. It must have activated when you used it as a paperweight before bed. The layer of restrictions came undone, and you were engulfed in a space and time storm that, for some reason, the storm didn't leave your room.] the system explained.
Fantasy · Anime_timez24
So far, each chapter has been very well-written and interesting, and I was particularly looking forward to reading Chapter 9 after reading Chapter 8. I was expecting good things based on what had been presented so far. However, I am disappointed by the turn of events in Chapter 9, which I find incomprehensible and illogical for three reasons: 1. For a blind orphan like him who has endured hell for 10 years, he should be the happiest and most eager to finally see the faces of his saviors, the only human beings who have accepted to love him and take care of him. 2. How will he find them if he doesn't even know what they look like? 3. Explain to me how the reincarnation of a transcendent being with thousands of years of life experience, combat experience, and the ability to endure years of torture without breaking can't resist a single impulse and can't even wait a single day? Even if it's said that he lost some years of memories, he would still have hundreds of years' worth of memories. How can it be that only in front of the door does he realize that he hasn't prepared anything for his journey and that he actually knows nothing about the tower in question! Honestly, I don't know why the author took this direction, and I hope there is a valid reason for his behavior in Chapter 9. To me, it would have made an intelligent and much more attaching caractère and make it different if he had done his research on the world and era he reincarnated into, prepared properly, and bid farewell to his parents who sacrificed so much in their work and life for him. This chapter is very frustrating, almost as if I had just read NTR!
not bad it was quite interesting till now and I will gladly take my time with the same good stuff . so keep up the good work author.
The Swordsmans Return with Mana
Fantasy · Moon_Granade