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altheoxum
altheoxum
3 hours ago
Replied to Jullie_Sorensen

This js so frustrating to me that noone proofread it. It makes Cane seem like he is not that articulate and ruins the characterization of him as smart & articulate.

"Give this to Elder Xarex. Ask him to confirm the contain and if he had more question, I will gladly answer them."

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
4 hours ago
Commented

47 year old mother does not effect the health of the child as much as the age of the father. Research shows this. So likely it is fhe fault of the father being old.

Which meant, people had a lot of anticipation and view on Abby ever since she was still inside her mother's womb, people talked so high about whether or not she would surpass her mother's power, but when their expectation didn't meet and as it turned out, Abby was nothing like the previous Serafim and she was born with sickly body, probably due to Elder Rose's old body, they started to look at her with judgment and disappointment. 

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
15 hours ago
Replied to _Yandra_

yes!!!

The babies in her arms. The baby in the coffin. The baby with purple lips. She was not breathing…

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

💛

Iris felt the same, she met with his every thrust and called his name between her cries, as they took pleasure from each other. This was a safe heaven and everything that they needed currently. 

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Replied to Osasobo_Vanessa

You are right. What kind of mother leaves a newborn preemie?If it was life or death for a living sibling or related to survival I’d get it. Its cruel what she did-she didn’t really care abour Rora rhat much.

Iris blamed herself for what she had done, for losing her baby, for not being there and helped in time, for not giving birth to much healthier babies, for being alive when her babies died, for receiving the kindness from people around her. 

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

She is a bad mother. She abandoned a preemie to go after a gravesite. So wrong.

"I am a bad mother… Cane I am sorry, I am a bad mother… I am sorry, I am sorry…" Iris was crying at this point, she tried to hit herself. "I am so stupid! I am stupid! I am a stupid mother!"

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

Ahe is right. he buried the babybwithout her which is wrong

"You keep me away from my babies. I hate you."

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

Why wasn’t he desperate to get his mate back after Lou talked to her?

Cane even let Lou to approach his mate. The alpha must be very desperate to get his mate back, until he let the merchant to talk with her. 

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

who were they tying up?

Currently, the two alphas were still laying naked, tying up at the carriage. Grace would come occasionally to keep them alive. They would be dragged to the Riverside pack or anywhere they could until Grace was no longer able to preserve their lives. 

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

The Alpha: Claiming His Enemy's Daughter

Fantasi · i_want_to_sleep

altheoxum
altheoxum
1 days ago
Commented

What kind of parent leaves a premature newborn to go do something that is not absolutely necessary for survival? Iris and Cane were not good parents to Rora. That is horrific that they wouldn’t arrange for at least one of the parents to carry around baby Rora. They need to be carried constantly, preferably by a parent. When that premature, why would Iris care so little about Rora that she would just leave her to go to a grave?

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