Hello, I'm Kiki, amateur writer. The novel I'm currently working on is my first, and I'd be glad to hear your opinions about it, whether they be critiques or praise.
In a world that’s about to collapse, four individuals with different goals are brought together to save humanity. They try to deal with their own problems, but they’re also forced to work together to fight against bigger danger.
Dune, a boy with striking white hair and eyes, possessing exceptional intelligence. He was born in a continent called Sanatria, place where power is everything, but he lacked it himself. Despite this he refused to be limited by his circumstances.
When Dune eventually gains power from the gods, he faces inner struggles about his purpose. Dune explores his newfound power, and amidst the chaos he’s trying to find his place and goals in a world where he is used by those who are more powerful than him.
But One thing that never changes is Dune's desire to live and break free from the restrictions surrounding him.
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UNMEI: The Path To Survival
Fantasy · G_Kik1