MarvisWindesburg

MarvisWindesburg

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While alive, one needed not sleep too long; after death, you'll sleep forever. As someone who's been through life, I'll tell you a truth: less sleep means living more.

2024-06-09 Beigetreten Global
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MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
16 days ago
Replied to Daoist5WZMoh

Thank you for your feedback! I totally understand why a weak-to-strong progression is so popular—it's a great way to build tension and growth in a story. However, for this novel, I wanted to take a slightly different approach. The MC is already omnipotent, but the focus is on how he uses his power to explore different worlds and scenarios in a sandbox-like way. It’s less about power progression and more about experiencing and experimenting with new concepts and stories. As for the power systems, I don’t aim to make every system groundbreaking or completely unique, but I will do my best to execute them in a way that’s fun, engaging, and fits the story. I hope you’ll enjoy how things unfold as Kaiden dives into his first world and beyond!

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
18 days ago
Replied to Raul_Andres_Ortiz

Well, I'll probably redo this one as well. Since I joined WPC contest for this one, but the continuous revision had made my novel drop in the rankings. I likely have no chance to catch up to other authors in the contest so I planned to revise this again (Mostly the simulation content since I still have to admit that I reuse the previous simulation content in the previous version but merely used AI to trim down the words.). I'm still not satisfied with it so I'll redo it again with everything absolutely written by me and I'll publish it for the WSA 2025 contest. I apologize for the inconvenience caused by all this. if you are still interested in reading my novel, I'll make a chapter announcement when I republish this novel again and you can check it out. (And answering to your question, yes, you can remove the previous revisions since I won't update it anymore).

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
18 days ago
Replied to Michael_Prue

Yeah, I noticed that as well. I tried writing on my own and it's more straightforward and the plot would move with little to no filler words. Although my writing quality is mediocre compared to AI, it at least doesn't take that much words to convey a plot compared to AI who makes a 200 words paragraph into 400 words. AI is more useful if writing a traditional-style novel like those physical copy ones, but my writing style is more suited for web novels like this one.

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
22 days ago
Replied to Raul_Andres_Ortiz

I don't have word. My word somehow doesn't have any liscense so I can't use it. However, no need to worry since I have Scrivener. I use scrivener when I write and it would highlight words that weren't listed in its dictionary such as anime, etc. Even names would be included so I'd know incorrect words.

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
22 days ago
Replied to Raul_Andres_Ortiz

Yeah, I'll keep that in mind. Thanks!

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
1 months ago
Replied to Raul_Andres_Ortiz

Yes, the SS-rank Wise Sage talent is literally equivalent to a lord's SS-rank lord talent. It can also allow multi-casting (dual casting, triple casting, etc.). I'll elaborate more on this as well as the Supreme Plane's power levels, etc. later on.

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
1 months ago
Replied to EmberWyldes

Thank you! It's my first-time doing a lord trope novel so I want to see if I can execute it well. If you have any suggestions or mistakes you'd like to point out, feel free to comment since I try to improve from my mistakes as I write.

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
1 months ago
Replied to ZARXOM

I haven’t read any lord-building novels before, so I might unknowingly use common tropes, but the story is fully my creation, and I hope it brings something new to the genre. Limloo, for example, is a parody of Rimuru! I’m curious tho—what does this remind you of? I'd love to know if there's something I can improve or differentiate

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
2 months ago
Commented

this reeks of chat gpt. their previous conversations as well. maybe the translator used chat gpt for translation and edit.

The virtual chat room buzzed with a renewed sense of purpose as they collectively embarked on a journey to unravel the mysteries and challenges each of their worlds presented.

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Time Emperor Champion

Anime e quadrinhos · _Nia

MarvisWindesburg
MarvisWindesburg
2 months ago
Commented

Bruh, why not Shokuhou Misaki? Mikoto is overrated

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