Aeon and Layla cover image
Thanks for the idea
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Horror · ZERO10A
As for your novel ReWorld: Days of Dungeons from Earth to Moon My Opinion: Chapter 1 is quite vague with many repetitions. Simplifying and clarifying your writing style will help new readers better understand your novel. Your story setup (adventure, power, skills) is interesting in my view. but the chapters require more patience and focus than most readers prefer. They generally enjoy smooth, thrilling, easy-to-understand and interesting chapters. However, your unique style will appeal to some, even if not to everyone. Ultimately, it’s your decision.
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Hi, thanks for reaching out! I’m currently quite busy, but I appreciate your interest. If you’d like to do a review and collection for my novel, that would be great. In return, I can skim through your novel and provide some quick feedback, but I won’t be able to do a full review.
Hello! Thank you for reaching out and for your kind words. I'm interested in learning new ways to improve my book's performance. So feel free to share your tips.
try read My other novel: Zombie Player and the Regressed Heroine: A Reality Awaits
I have rewritten everything new in more depth and better, so try reading it from the beginning and then tell me your opinion. Furthermore, indeed it was written hastily just as base prototype. Thanks for your comment and reading. I will wait for your next review.
Aeon playing Zombie VR game on Meta Quest 3 which was created with the help of Ai
Zombie Player & the Regressed Heroine: A Reality Awaits Septmber2024
Fantasy · ZERO10A