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Fantasy · WebKnight
Hehehe, my son will be boundless, that darkness is the great void :3
At that moment, he saw darkness.
Fantasy · WebKnight
Overall, it's a slice of life. I'm a fan of fantasy and fights—these kinds of stories happen in real life, and they're a headache, lmao. But I have to admit, this first chapter was good. Introverts like me can relate...
bruh x 2
bruh !!!
That she was looking at xxx? I can't anymore, when did that happen!
The library was quiet, the few patrons scattered and absorbed in their own work. But someone had seen her, and worse, someone knew.
Fantasy · kennedydaphne900
The story is well-crafted and holds great promise for the future. Above all, your own enjoyment in writing should be your priority. It’s not always about money or recognition, but about the joy of sharing your work with others. If your readers appreciate your stories, that alone is a meaningful achievement. Many focus only on the present, but some of us think long-term. This isn’t a critique—just a reminder that preserving what we cherish today is key to shaping a better tomorrow.
Some paragraphs are too long, but overall the chapter is good.
Mr zombi
I was just another mindless corpse, stumbling through the tower, groaning at anything that moved. I had no thoughts, no memories. Just an instinct to hunt and eat. Then came the so-called heroes.
Fantasy · TheTrial
Bro who tell u that bullshit ? Axel sigh*
I Reawakened as an Inferno Hero
Fantasy · WebKnight