cant be helped, first time bro.
thanks for the review. but i would like to clear some misunderstanding. first of all i am writing in modern english so obviously i am not going to use dialogues from medieval era, i intend to portray the feeling only so kept it simple. regarding disrespect u have zero knowledge my friend. –―the plots are historically based be it the placement of king at rear tent or shooting at eye or disregarding king's opinion as the real power lies in someone's hand. i can agree that the way i depicted might need more polishing but it has been considered in the realm of possibility. if the troops are diverted, kidnapping or killing is possible.. also there are any versions of indian history where royals were abducted or secretly assassinated from their main camp if u need then i can list out below as i chose my story from them mixing out.
well we learn from mistakes. some find it ok some find it hilarious but what i learn is to keep it as it is because life itself not perfect and we all have our own moments ..i believe my last scene might be off but in the realm of possibility , that's why i didnt made any amends.
it should work, u can dm me too. https://discord.gg/c5FbM4Vv
in battles of medieval era, the generals were considered the moral of the battle. their presence was manditory and people wouldn't recognise face but the ceremonial customs they use to wear. everything changed after the breech loading guns appeared and we know how trench warfare came up but before that ceremonial armors/uniforms were a necessity of that era.
Privately, Aditya relished the opportunity to don a shirt and pants after a prolonged period, finding comfort and familiarity in the attire. For the attire of generals, he opted for elegance, replacing the white straps with resplendent golden ones that resembled power and authority. To infuse a touch of tradition, he added a regal red cape, seamlessly blending modernity with the dress code used by current traditional generals.
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ah i see.
As Aditya slowly regained consciousness, he found out his right hand bandaged and little sprain in his ankle. His gaze fell upon Amira, tears streaming down her cheeks as she hovered over him with palpable concern. In that moment, a rush of memories flooded his mind, memories of another girl with tears in her eyes – Riya. The resemblance was uncanny, and Aditya couldn't help but find Amira's distress endearing.
History · Jeet_1993
That's right. all my readers are not Indians. To not confuse them with mainstream European setting I had to do that "sugh" effort. let me know more precise in para if u find anything odd. thx.
Apologies for the distaste. at that time I was new and experimenting sensory feelings as added descriptions. Since I got mixed feedback I don't think I can make any such changes unless you point out in paragraph. Thx for feedback :)
generally it was 9.30 pm IST but now it got jeopardized. I am getting married. Declared it on later chapters.
updates will be on tuesday, thurday and saturday from nowadays.
Empire Ascension: The Rise of the Fated One
History · Jeet_1993