it's good, better than I expected at first
See this! I just gifted the story: Pizza
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yeah I will also drop this one, that girl is a bitch that betray mc for satisfying her family, now she doesn't deserve him
"I want to find someone. I don't know where she is or how to find her. But I know she's out there. And I need to get strong enough to search for her. So I will, and I will find her. No matter what it takes." Naturally, Christopher was talking about Joan.
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Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
please don't make this happen
'Getting back to Joan?' He thought absentmindedly.
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Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
please don't make her the waifu, she was cheating on mc with the excuse of her family, she doesn't deserve
'I guess, I was pretty lucky.' He thought, a small smile creasing his face as his breathing ceased, and his heart stopped.
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Fantasy · Bj_Omonobi_4986
It's good, sometimes author misplaced details and in first chapter everything was compiled into a paragraph, but later on it was easy to read with good spacing although story was good from the start, but author should slow his growth as at 15 years he's called best player of valencia, which seems bit too much unrealistic. but i like the story, hope author continues it 300+ chapters
"Hello Miss Miranda. I'm Miguel and its nice to meet you" Miguel said.
God Of football
Sports · Art233
the discord link is expired
God Of football
Sports · Art233