Truth_searcher

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2023-12-07 Beigetreten Global
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4 months ago
Replied to TheLostSupreme

Maybe a fusion of ultron and scp 079

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4 months ago
Commented

Ultron? And which one? What if or another reality?

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4 months ago
Commented

Nice and good job, you're getting better.

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5 months ago
Commented

Well done, and go with number 1. Thank you for your hard work.

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6 months ago
Commented

Don't make a B*S* mix of anime or something, just keep going with dc itself. It's ruin your story. I have seen story like this before, and mixing ruin them.

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6 months ago
Commented

Be careful with aliens card,their physiology are different so when he absorbing them it's make his physiology different and it take a very long, so be careful about any physiology of any beings, even a gorilla is very hard to absorb.

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6 months ago
Commented

You're going so fast, make it slower and dc+viltrumite are something good. And it's #no_harem, right?

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6 months ago
Commented

first think and after that write, a sun glass don't have any screen or battery or any voice technology system or soany thing, you just want to write but you must think on what you want to write. and why all novels become like ( yeah I reborn at marvel, I don't have any trauma and yes I get this body's memory. and yes I have a system.) I do not hate your novel or something but I say you must think on what you right. and you have to use (,) in your sentences and also you have some grammar problem, and you cam see it in first sentences. I hope do a great work and be a good writer.

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6 months ago
Commented

God—angels—hands—endless—the creatures that show God's wraith and anger(eclipso—spector—(word,the gods first word)—the eye(some kind of eye that create when God open it's eyes)and other cosmic beings like Dr.manhatan and darkest night and that imp(mxp,or somethinglikethat))—(old gods,new gods,hell's prince(demons),and their child) and you can put your heros and villains between them under the things that relate to God.