It's a good book and oh, I think you still owe us, readers that 12 CHS ๐๐๐
Okay believe me guys, this book has got me hooked. let me guide y'all ๐ซด 1. Writing is in first person POV and the author relays the character's every feeling and expression which I'd rate a 100% 2. The Development of the story is just too good and keeps you wanting more. In these six chapters my expectations has never been cut short instead, the book keep soaring over my expectations. that's a 100% too. 3. The character design is just awesonme. I dunno you might think the character, Freddy is a tough guy and can be convinced, another can think he's a loser and can be convinced. i think he's a total douche bag ๐ who only wants to obsess over his fantasies and I'm convinced because the author portrays it so... that's a 100%. 4. updating stability is what I'd rate an 80% why because it's a chapter per day these six days and it's not satisfying. Author do better! so you can get a 100% at this too... 2 CHS per day will do ๐ 5. The world background is just perfect.. the real world where he's deemed a failure at first and the game world where he's a Master! and also the TITAN System World where he simulates avatars. lastly the name is just perfect for the book... Well-done Author
well, i love the sound of thtat
<We're hitting SandOffs Cafe tomorrow at 5 pm to battle it out in TITAN against some other team! How epic is that?>
Games ยท Blackkie
the one with the supersonic hearing ๐๐๐๐
She was none other than Maisie, my neighbor with the 'supersonic' hearing. "What the heck are you doing here?!" I demanded, utterly arrogant in my confused state.
Games ยท Blackkie
I was left there, hovering over the ogre's field while in the sky, going "What the f*** just happened?!"
Games ยท Blackkie
Lifeline: 1 /4]
Games ยท Blackkie
Really? it's now the system is giving such info? this system is not intelligent at all
[Hint: Actions affect your points, and frequent actions will increase the avatar's speed, etc.]
Games ยท Blackkie
How about breaking this paragraph into two... it's bogus
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Fantasy ยท Kanashi2hanashi
what a long read
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