why is she so clueless, one time she also heard him addressing iron matron as miss little bear in the early chapter.
Valeria frowned in confusion at Lucavion's cryptic words. "Miss Little Bear?" she echoed, glancing at him with a puzzled look.
Shattered Innocence: Transmigrated Into a Novel as an Extra
Fantasy · Darkness_Enjoyer
you update chapters slow as a snail and now waste our time describing the mother of protagonists with half of the chapter.
really is the no 01 hero a kid who plays with demon while fighting can't she finish it early and done with it.
really do you really had to write about denail and waste half of the chapter
upload more chapters and leave the useless talks and quickly make him meet his family and stop his sister from becoming protagonists harem.
you are rushing the plot too much, it's only been one or two days after his transmigration and he is getting bombarded with everything without any rest and what happened to lilliana while he was wasting time talking to system can't she see how abnormal the situation is when he just stands there talking to system and then faints suddenly.
really it should be common sense to know what a gift pack means.
why don't you even describe how he goes to toilet to do his toilet work you're wasting our time by explaining his daily life like how many times he chews his food
then simply post all the contents you deem as one chapter and be done with it don't make readers just waste their coins and passes they have by dividing one chapter into small chapters and creating unnecessary drama.
I don't like how mc has all the power but still has his old frail body, at least he has to have a fit body but I respect how he kept his face without making it handsome.
Evil MC's NTR Harem
Fantasy · The_Procrastinator