Daoistneo

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2023-10-31 Beigetreten Global
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Daoistneo
Daoistneo
11 months ago
Posted

Thank you for good work. Mc is clever and doesnt meddle others job

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Daoistneo
Daoistneo
1 years ago
Replied to Daoistneo

Note: I could read until chapter 11

Daoistneo
Daoistneo
1 years ago
Posted

I think you should rewrite heroine's character.Because she doesn't care mc,impulsive,bitch for power.I am sure if there is ân oppurtunity , she would leave. Mc is emotional dumb and tool for heroine.The İdea is not bad but characters are making it unreadable

Daoistneo
Daoistneo
1 years ago
Commented

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Daoistneo
1 years ago
Commented

Thanks for chpter