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male LV 3Bananas on Pancakes - MASJ: https://open.spotify.com/playlist/1jIhW3uEtedo7vX4Rk0myn?si=cf79ae88b57e43ef
2023-10-29 Beigetreten United KingdomAbzeichen 3
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Nice catch, will change that now ❤️
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Thank you kindly, will correct it now ❤
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Nice catch, thank you kindly. I'll correct that now ❤
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This is a good guide, thank you ❤
As always, any feedback would be greatly appreciated, and thanks again for reading. ❤
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There wasn't really a certain amount of time really. I have like 4k songs on shuffle whenever I write and if 1 fits a certain mood, either through lyrics or instrumental, I'll put it into a separate playlist for potential titles. I also do the same if the name of the song fits a chapter, rather than the vibe of the song itself. This song just happened to appear in my shuffle a few weeks ago and I thought it fit El and Mara well, so wanted to include it in a chapter somewhere ❤
"Sometimes we fly~ Sometimes we fall~ Sometimes I feel like we're nothing at all~ Dream in the light~ Dance in the dark~ You fill the spaces inside of my heart~"
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My understanding of them is that Transmigrated can either be when someone is transported to another world without dying, or they die and their soul inhabits another body. Whereas Reincarnation is where someone dies and is born into a brand new body.
"Technically that would have been your parent's name, but I sort of changed its fate to create you for myself. That's enough off-topic stuff anyways, now to give you a name…Hmmm…"
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Thanks for the feedback ❤️ I'll make sure not to waffle too much over the smallest of details
As such, just before her boot impacted the Arc Reactor, I widened Mara's foot and thus increased the surface area. With a larger surface area, more metal was impacted and that slowed down the foot quicker, preventing my host's foot from penetrating all the way into the drone's torso.
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I've tried to cut down on some of the bigger blocks, but clearly I'm not hitting the mark. It's probably worth mentioning that I do everything on pc since the reading experience on the app might be what I'm missing. Would you be able to give an example of 1 of the blocks, please, so I can focus on it and understand how it's unnatural? From my point of view, them not interrupting each other is common courtesy since they're not arguing and just talking normally. I'm not against dialogue being interrupted, but from my own experiences, I feel like interruptions aren't really frequent in a casual conversation. I appreciate the feedback as always ❤️
ch 39 Chapter 39) – We Go Down Together
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Expert or not, it's good advice since it's from the readers' point of view, and the readering experience is one of the main things I should accommodate. Thanks again, and if you find anything else feels off, please let me know so I can improve on it ❤️
Still absolutely ravenous after the eventful day she had so far, Mara let go of her restraint and requested another helping of food, "Thanks Natalie! In that case can you order me a barbeque beef torta and a chicken quesadilla please? For some reason, all the gore made me hungry. Now that I say it out loud, that doesn't sound normal, right?"
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Something like this
The red head drove her all-black Mercedes E-class sedan to a stop halfway around the circular roundabout out the front of the main manor door. The roundabout functioned as a temporary parking point, allowing easy drop-off and pick-up for visitors or guests.
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The dress itself was form-fitting and covered her entire body. The sleeves went down to her wrists, covering her arms, and the skirt equally covered the entirety of her legs coming to rest at the top of my host's feet. To allow for easy movement, there was a slit down the side of the dress which started in the middle of Mara's thighs. The base of the dress was black silk, but that was only visible on her torso, shoulders and upper arms as the rest was covered in embroidery. Seed beads, tube beads, silver, nickel and iridescent smoky grey crystals, which were alien materials to Earth, as well as the details on the dress ensured that it was the hardest piece of clothing I had ever attempted to replicate with my form.
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Yeah, Symbiotes originated from All-Black the Necrosword, so that's why El felt weird. I haven't decided if they'll absorb All-Black, but it could make for a good showdown. Either way, it's far into the future, so I won't give a clear answer for now since I might use it in another way. Sorry it's not a yes or no, but I don't want to promise something and then change my mind further down the line
ch 38 Chapter 38) – Fake ID
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Good spot, I'll correct this once I finish work ❤️
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At the time she was hiding El, yeah
Turning around to face Tony again, she stops walking to reply, "Sure, got nothing better planned so got no reason to refuse. Name's Mara by the way, or if we're using our made-up names, you can call me Elysium, Iron Man."
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I see what you mean and completely agree. I was so focused on trying to make it clear who was speaking to whom I didn't think about how an actual conversation usually goes. Going forward, I'll try to follow this advice. Once I'm confident I've improved enough and get round to re-writing the initial chapters, I'll have a touch-up of all the other ones to try and help the flow of the conversations. Thank you, I genuinely appreciate it. This kind of constructive guidance is what I was after since I'm still relatively new to writing ❤️
Still absolutely ravenous after the eventful day she had so far, Mara let go of her restraint and requested another helping of food, "Thanks Natalie! In that case can you order me a barbeque beef torta and a chicken quesadilla please? For some reason, all the gore made me hungry. Now that I say it out loud, that doesn't sound normal, right?"
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Yeah, they could. El would have to bond with her or create a child so she could have her own Klyntar, but yeah, she could be healed ❤️
With Mara dropping that bombshell on the group, the remainder of the time waiting for Tony to return was spent with the other 3 asking her questions about either her abilities, what exactly she's done since she woke up as a clean slate and mentioning a multitude of things in the hopes of jogging her memory, like pop culture references or historical events.
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There isn't any futa currently. I may do it in the future after asking how the readers feel about it. The Symbiote gets involved using tendrils/tentacles or creating hands, but if that's still not your thing, I appreciate you checking out the novel in the first place ❤️
Another piece of unfortunate news is that I got a promotion, and it means that I need to travel internationally. How is that bad news? Well, I thought it would give me more time to write - like while I'm travelling – but turns out it takes up even more of my free time. So, while I adjust to it I'll have to go back to 2 chapters a week, instead of every 3 days, to be somewhat consistent.
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