I like a cliché story, especially if dragons are involved too! It seems to be different from the usual FL troops I used to read by now, and this is simply sweet.For now, I'm waiting for more chapters!
Guess you reached those chapters by now, so I won't explain.Though, if you want to know something, feel free to leave a comment or respond to my own review — alright that sounded sad :/
The general idea would be that Ma Liang— a 'powerful' thug, felt confident in his own experience against other thugs that used knifes etc, and thought he could probably beat the sh*¡ out of Lux, who is just a teenager and had a smaller build than him.
Suddenly, Ma Liang dashed forward, he risked it all, hoping that Bai Shen was a softie who wouldn't dare to use his sword against him.
Fantasy · WenLin
No problem my goddess :>
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Basically, White God* - imagine calling your best friend at school, "Hey, White God, come here man!" it's not really normal, right? But there is a reason...
He couldn't believe that someone would name their kid like that.
Fantasy · WenLin
Women* is the plural
'She looks to be scared, could it be the man I heard shouting before?' Thought Bai Shen as he calmly looked at the young woman.
Fantasy · WenLin
True :/ it's cubed. Thanks for noticing!
Territory: 10,000 m²
Fantasy · WenLin
Yes! And when I write it, I can't feel it that way, but when I go back and see it again, I'm ashamed :(*
Mhm, I can guess why. I also feel like I stretched the line too thin there.Thanks for the review!
Quite a good novel, especially compared to what I read on the site lately. The only problem is...Author-Sama should post more, or I'll throw a tantrum. Are you guys with me?(like the comm)
The First Princess of Averlyon
Fantasy · Aphrodiitewritess