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Really glad you didn’t actually kill them off. Is he going to be recruiting in impel down too?

Great chapter! Still want to know all the enhancements he’s gained after awakening.

Why don’t you have him steal don chinjaos crews martial arts that produces incredible shockwave strikes?

Why doesn’t he go after the vampire fruit? His body would be greatly enhanced and the fruit allows him to stay at his peak. He could also go after shisui on thriller bark since it’s also a black blade.

Great chapter!

With regeneration can’t he push himself even harder now?

Tftc. Thunderbirds have three sets of wings though so you might want to change that. Also they control more than lightning. They actually control storms and everything that comes with them.

You should have him learn that power Bullet uses. Not his devil fruit but the aura thing he uses.

You know if you kill him in an airtight sea stone room filled with different fruits they should be able to capture his devil fruit. Just a thought

Just knowing that he has a love interest is enough for one piece. I mean I never understood how people their age couldn’t have some kind of love interest with all of those hormones lol

Ray should be shanks rival/frenemy!!!!! With each surpassing their former mentors (Roger/Garp)

Tftc. Are you planning to give him a devil fruit? Seems like he really needs it. I’d suggest a mythical zoan to give him a better physique which is his weakness now

Imagine you combine the burial technique with the shadow fruits abilities. That would be a really ridiculous undead army.

Really want to see Hancock all fangirling over ace lol. Can’t law remove their slave marks?

Good chapter. I really want to see where you take ronans character such as is he going to learn fishman karate?

Why doesn’t he kill some of worst of blackbeards future crew? I mean some are absolutely vile people that will cause all sorts of harm to regular people for fun. I know he wants Blackbeard to challenge him later but at what cost to others?

Definitely did better with the grammar this time around. Hope you keep going.

You have done a great job on translating this. Keep it up!!!

I’ve read the rough translation version on MTL and several other attempts here but this is by far the best one just from the first chapter alone. I really hope you keep this up since this story is just awesome but was so hard to read before.

Great chapter. But I’m wondering why isn’t he using lightning augmentation to enhance himself similarly to how the raikage does in Naruto. I mean him being a transmigrator he should have thought of using the technique by now. Also I’m wondering why his physical strength isn’t more monstrous considering his titan physiology along with the OP regeneration factor of ghidora.