Sick, I liked the novels extra a lot so I’ll probably continue to like the rest of this book, good luck it’s basically 6 am for me so I’m gonna sleep now
Did u take inspiration from path of the extra?
I mean I don’t really like cultivation novels but there definitely is an audience for them, but I in the west these types of novels definitely tend to do better
It doesn’t matter that much anyway,this is still a good book
Also check out the book (the last banner— will blow your balls off the sack)
I’m Finnished my side quest, hope your book does well my friend
Splendid piece of literature😂
Bro this same guy commented on your other book too😭
Ok I am two twins 360 on a different account I just finished reading the 6 chapters that are out. After chapter one the story is really interesting, especially chapter 2, I think maby chapter 3 with the demon core(I may be wrong on the name) would probably be better to have after the chapters with the female lead, it’s just because I don’t know the power scaling in this story yet so two chapters in unison where bro goes up in whole tiers of strength feels a bit fast to me(only because it’s chapter 3) like if it was 50 chaps in it wouldn’t be out of place I recommend also to re do chapter one and make it shorter, it’s just my opinion that the story picks up in chapter two( I don’t really know why though) Grammer:—If your an English speaker and you want good grammar don’t worry your search is over- this low key has better grammer than 90 percent of novels on this app, and the dialog most of the time feels natural and is structured well. Perspective:— the books in first person perspective which I quite like, it fits well in this story to me anyway. It’s done well too like no flip flopping between perspectives. This book reminds me of the novels extra Overall very nice, just please don’t make the mc a pussy, like I understand character development and all but come on, bro complains about having fragile masculinity-like I don’t care homie do your set.😭
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In a world shattered by the rise of the Others—elves, orcs, dwarves, and vampires—humanity has fallen to the lowest rung of existence. Once-mighty empires are now scattered tribes, clinging to the ruins of their former glory. Without mana cores, humans are powerless against the overwhelming magic and strength of their conquerors. Hadrian is just a boy, born into a broken Greece where warriors fight with bronze shields against iron and sorcery. Captured on a blood-soaked battlefield, he is dragged into a life of slavery under the orcs, where survival is a daily struggle and escape is a distant dream. But Hadrian is different. Deep within him lies a secret—something that defies the natural order, something even the Others fear. He is one of the Marked, a child of prophecy, bearing the potential to change the fate of humanity. Yet, power comes at a cost, and the line between savior and destroyer is razor-thin. As alliances are forged and enemies multiply, Hadrian must navigate a world of blood, magic, and betrayal. Can he rise from the ashes of his people’s ruin, or will he be consumed by the darkness within? [the mc may act older than his actual age after like chapter 5, this has an actual reason-his memories from two body's merge, making his mental age older even if he doesn't realise it much] -join the discord[https://discord.gg/zhwebYYm]16 Chs 16 Sammlungen
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