Kurt_Ulmschneider

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2023-08-08 Beigetreten United States
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Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
1 months ago
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This is poorly written or translated. there are constant continuity errors even within the same chapter.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
1 months ago
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well written, decent plot development so far.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
1 months ago
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very fast-paced stary. almost too fast.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
1 months ago
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the timeline of the reincarnations is a little convoluted. in one, she is an adult, another she is a child. so how does she return to her 18 year old body prior to the apocalypse.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
1 months ago
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I like it so far. looking forward to where the author goes with it.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
2 months ago
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I am not a fan of this one. I do not expect the protagonist to be perfect, but competence would be nice.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
2 months ago
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Not sure what this is doing in a romance novel contest, but i enjoyed it.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
2 months ago
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It is not my personal cup of tea, but it is at least well written.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
2 months ago
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Skip the first chapter. It is poorly written and almost turned me off from the book. The second chapter on make a lot more sense as a narrative.

Kurt_Ulmschneider
Kurt_Ulmschneider
2 months ago
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I was surprised how much I enjoyed this book so far.