Great story, has a really interesting concept. but needs work on the writings structure, it is a bit all over the place at times and can make it annoying to read. (constantly switching the prospective, different fonts and and inconsistent structure of the paragraphs) Overall enjoyable to read and can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work.
Webnovel
Great story, has a really interesting concept. but needs work on the writings structure, it is a bit all over the place at times and can make it annoying to read. (constantly switching the prospective, different fonts and and inconsistent structure of the paragraphs) Overall enjoyable to read and can't wait for more chapters, keep up the good work.
Hight School DxD: The Beast of Chaos
Anime & Comics · Shin_1462