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2023-06-26 Beigetreten India
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1 years ago
Replied to DaoistvE9zEr

Thanks for the review. I am working on it. I also felt the same after reading for sometime. You should notice a change in this around chapter 46 or 47 onwards.

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1 years ago
Replied to Romance_guy

Yes, he is but he hasn't gotten time yet as he is being put through one situation after another. It will be soon.

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1 years ago
Replied to Shadow_0846

There will romance but no harem.

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1 years ago
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Author here writing a review for my own book. This is my first time writing a novel. So I am not sure how the readers feels from their perspective when they are reading. So please feel to put in a feedback when you feel the story is lagging. Also please add your suggestions so that I can improve my story. Thanks for your support.

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1 years ago
Replied to Raziel_456

Sorry if you felt it cringey. This is my first novel and not very experienced in this feild. Please give more feedback’s in the future. I will improve.

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1 years ago
Replied to Pitch_Black36

Thanks for the suggestions . Will create one soon.

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1 years ago
Replied to Romance_guy

Also just to make it clear the bloodline in my novel doesn’t mean the genetics. It’s kind of like special physiques you see in the wuxia novels. Different kind of bloodlines grant you different abilities.

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1 years ago
Replied to Romance_guy

Just by giving a drop of his bloodline does’nt make her his daughter. Besides this bloodline is the one that was provided to the MC by Bella’s master. But of course there will be close connection between the MC and this girl which will be revealed in the next few chapters. Thanks for the your support

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1 years ago
Replied to Romance_guy

In future he will come in contact with law of soul. As for reincarnation haven’t thought about it. But he will coming in contact with other laws due to his special physique which will be explained in the later chapters.

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1 years ago
Replied to Mint_Chocolate547

It.s using DNA.s to alter preexisting humans.

After years of tireless experimentation, their endeavors bore fruit – the birth of inhumans. Yet, even the most promising among their subjects were but a mere echo of Zero's boundless potential. These inhumans possessed superhuman attributes, boasting extraordinary strength and lightning-fast speed. However, their feats paled in comparison to the awe-inspiring prowess of Zero.

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