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please go into the original story and include more commentary in the chapters for the matches and include system interference too as the novel name itself is one. and also if you write some chapters regarding how the system is granted to the mc its nice as no novel brought up the idea of who gave the system

more chapters please and don't make it a harem.

woah didn't expect after a love story a tragic end awaited him 🥲

karn that too in apocalypse sounds good idea interesting too 🤔

writing for the first half of chapters is not that up to the mark needs improvement but storyline is 🤩

good going keep it up don't make it a harem please

Damn there are only 6 chapters but Damn again writing own talents seems completely overpowered looking forward for the journey