I think I have been doing better in that department when writing the further chapters. And honestly he was just getting used to the magic world can’t go around acting all arrogant. And in regards to to another comment on his property, it is true that children wizards can’t receive lordship until they are adults. And I figure it would just be way to unrealistic if a 11 year old boy received everything. Another reason why I made andromeda the head of house black and gave him access to the library. Just fits better. Thank you for the enthusiasm on my FF, and look forward to your future comments
True, but he was technically next in line for the title if Greyson was never born
I’ll definitely look into it. Not trying to blow up the novel with crazy additions but it’s definitely something to look into, thanks
Thanks for the feed back I’ll bring some action to the next chapters
"After visiting gringotts and receiving the answer of his lineage. I'll go ahead and assist him with his school shopping. If you wouldn't mind covering my class tomorrow, it would be greatly appreciated." I asked, as he was the transfiguration professor before me after all.
New Life in the World of Magic
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Nah just trying to build an accord, trying to show she is trying to change to make friends like she did after the troll incident, she hasn’t broken the books are law ideology at all yet, she respects Mc way of magic because she seen it with her own eyes. The MC only person he talks to is Hermione and his owl Helga so I get it may look like he is obsessed with her, I just haven’t written in anyone he can get to know yet other than the trio. I’m also not going for the overpowered approach, I hate reading those kinds as it’s not at all realistic. I’m also really thinking on how to start the confrontation with Mc and Neville so feel free to add what you’d look forward to seeing in that accord. Thank you for your feedback, hope to see you next chapter
Yeah I would like to submit more but I’m trying to keep the page count and grammar as best quality as possible. I’m going to be trying to submit faster though in the future, thanks for reading
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"Four to a boat!" Hagrid called, and we quickly climbed into one. I ended up in a boat with Harry, Hermione, and another girl who seemed just as nervous as they were.
New Life in the World of Magic
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That’s a good one, under strong consideration
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original New Life in the World of Magic
Young man was killed in a mugging to find he is transmigrated into the body of a starved orphan child. with surprises never ending, an owl makes itself known holding a letter. “Dear Mr. Sayre, we are pleased to inform you…” (This is a Harry Potter Fanfiction, I do not own anything other than my OC. most if not all images will be AI generated.) as of right now 2 chalter will release every Saturday, thank you enjoy the FF18 Chs 420 Sammlungen
True it is one of the things I wish I had been more creative about. My thought process at the time was thinking most of the names other that a few had normal names so thought best to pick one normal
Thanks to the expert healing capabilities of Adonis and Voldemort seemingly unfazed by Bellatrix disappearing for 9 months, he was able to deliver a healthy baby boy born May 2nd 1980, and named Greyson Adonis Sayre.
New Life in the World of Magic
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