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1 years ago

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THE labyrinth hallway ❤️🔥🔥🤝🤝🤝...

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BWOA_NOVELS

1 years ago

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Good chapter.... also noticed, you changed the name of the Story....🤔🤔.. hmmm, we'll discuss it later.

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1 years ago

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definitely sharing this chapter when i get the chance... this chapter is a W.

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BWOA_NOVELS

1 years ago

Replied to Qwin_lasvia

Sorry for the inconvenience.. we'll be releasing volume 2 by the end of the year.

Conflict: Outside the unknown (the dream keeper)

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BWOA_NOVELS

1 years ago

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GOOD, CAN'T WAIT FOR THE NEXT UPLOAD.. NOW... I NOTICED HOW YOU SAID A PERSON COILD SUMMON THE RULER OF THE UNDERWORLD TO GRANT HIM POWERS IN EXCHANGE FOR SOMETHING SPECIAL, THAT MEANS EVEN A MEMBER OF THE 13 CLANS COULD ALSO THAT, IN DOING SO, HE'LL GAIN VERY GREAT AMOUNT OF DANK POWERS........ SIMPLY MEANING THE RULER OF THE UNDERWORLD CAN'T BE PLACED ALONGSIDE THOSE OTHER 13 ENTITIES, HE'S EITHER > OR < HE IS ≠....🤔🤷🤷🤷🤷..

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BWOA_NOVELS

1 years ago

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Love the concept and all that.... Love how you placed the story flow, Great creativity.... Great chapter for a prologue × first chapter (very detailed) and can also be pictured well in the mind...... also that Elera👀👀, She believe she's gonna be Something big in the story👀👀,well because of your narration on her.... any ho, Big W chapter... so now.... Giving.. 5 ⭐ character design ( did a great job narrating every character's appearance in detail) 5 ⭐ world background (definitely a big W, just the few Locations you placed made it obvious though) 5 ⭐ story development (for now) 5 ⭐ Writing Quality (isn't that obvious) ?? ⭐ update stability(well i dunno, but amma give you a 3 star, since this is your first chapter.