It would be nice if you separated the dialogue with the internal and external speech. As of now it's pretty confusing as to which is which.
In the background, the man with the golden stripes calmly observed the scene before him. He was neither tense nor excited about the appearance of the sovereign dragon; in fact, he was less than enthusiastic about fighting or confronting such a legendary creature. If it weren't for the preparations made before this battle, he would now be weighing every step he took before facing this dragon. Hmph, you foolish dragon, to think that you can easily kill the generals of the outer kingdom without any consequences. You believe your power is immense, but to be honest with you, without your master, you are nothing. "Now, go to the other world in silence." After saying that, the man raised his hand towards the sky, and a golden light appeared from above, illuminating the entire night sky. The light formed into a golden pillar and struck the body of the dragon, crashing into the ground with the immense pressure of this light pillar. Sira tried to resist with all her strength, but her skin began to crumble, and her power started to wane. After a short while, she stopped moving, the golden pillar vanished, and the night sky returned to what it was. All that remains of a sovereign monster like the dragon Sira is just a lifeless body devoid of spirit, lying on the ground.
A journey of fire and blood
Fantasy · Bonecat
They were out peeing if I remember correctly.
They were lucky that Xuanyuan and the others got there in time. If they had gotten there a few minutes later, then who knows what could have happened to them.
Reverend Insanity: White Shadow Demonic Venerable
Anime & Comics · Bruhdamante
Thanks for the chapter🙏! Dude I swear this actually deserves to be an actual ren zu passage😭🙏 like author are you sure you aren't GZR's alt account?? Cuz man you are cooking🔥🔥
Thx for the chapter!
Noo! The treacherous cliffhanger gu!
To each their own ig🤷
He's smoking life brotha🙏... Life. And probably some beers and a binge of watch Netflix 🤣
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Peter, thankful that he was forced to study Virology in Kamar-Taj, offered a simple response. "Just someone trying to help. Now, how about we go and see my new patient?"
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
Movies · AlienWarlord
Bruh the girl literally said earlier that if he died who would cure his wife.
Peter, thankful that he was forced to study Virology in Kamar-Taj, offered a simple response. "Just someone trying to help. Now, how about we go and see my new patient?"
I'm Spider-Man (MCU)
Movies · AlienWarlord
Good work! You gotta work on your paragraphing tho it's too clumped up and hectic. I suggest separating your paragraphs so it's easier on the eyes.
A journey of fire and blood
Fantasy · Bonecat