i loved the ending
well designed world full of vividly described characters strong start for a story very promising plot waiting for more well done[img=recommend]
having another chance to live your life with full awareness of your past experience, is an ultimate superpower and an insignificant ability.
well played Mr Horus
Horus arrived Infront of him and hunched over, acting as if he has been running for a while and said with panic visible in his voice "My lord, the enemy has launched a secondary attack, and they're quickly closing in on our supply tents! The commander sent us here to ask for reinforcements before it's too late!"
Tyrant of the Ruined Sun
Fantasy · AkA