ASAH1

ASAH1

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2023-03-03 Beigetreten Thailand
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ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Replied to modestbaddie

Energy recharged - this mean so much to me, thank you <3 :D

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

Great book with professional quality story line, very well describing the world and character, and still very reading friendly, easily 5 stars.

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

Nicely writing chapter, story flow so smooth, the describing of each scene was nicely done, the character designed was great, their conversation made the reader immersed into the story, will waiting for more chapters.

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

At the start of the novel everything seem setting with the extreme mode, the world, the story, especially the MC, it was nice that the story slowly low down the extremeness as more chapters updated, it gave the story more dynamic, and it was easy to read even with many censored words.

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ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

Professional grade writing, easily full 5 stars, every element was detailed describe and designed, the dynamic of the plot was great, even the system was well written to be reader friendly, could see this be a nice novel to develop in to manga or manhwa.

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ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Replied to doradoragon

Big thanks for the review, this novel still can consider as an innocent story if comparing to what a bout to come :D 🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️🌶️

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

With only 2 chapters but the story seem to be so much potential, with the unique plot and a unique job of the MC, but for now the world building was well written, I can said that this novel could be very dynamic story line with this well written of the world background.

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

Just didn't believe myself gave full 5 star to 1 chapter uploaded novel, but just can't help myself as the plot was really unique reborn as a snake! (or half snake?), and the world describing was nicely done, and the character designed and their interaction was very funny from the start. Can't wait for more chapters as already added to my collections.

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

With only 2 chapters but the story seem promising, the world and the character was written very well, the story flow very nicely and easy to read, thumb up for the action scene that was well written, made me want to follow to see what gonna happened in the next episode.

ASAH1
ASAH1
1 years ago
Posted

Interesting plot with nice character designed, the world background was well described, anyway to starting most paragraph with character name may disrupt the flow of the reading. Since now only 4 chapters was released the story seem to develop into more intense, so I will waiting for more update.