Great chapter glad to see you back.
Just had a thought after rewatching guardians of the galaxy, if he can use the sound from bard magic he can basically do a magical version of Yondu’s arrow. All you would have to do is him having a dream or flash back of a blue skinned man wearing a red coat whistling with a red light dancing around him.
The chapter was good, I do hope though that Hunter and the emperor do not come up in person as much in future chapters. Because simply saying that Belos is observing him from afar would be more accurate to the show.
Great chapter, loved how you’re slowing establishing a solid foundation for this character. He is acknowledged as a native resident for that world by everyone.
Great chapter as usual, I’m starting to get a Venom symbiote vibe from this thing. Was that your intention?
I can see you are doing an amazing job with the rewrite, adding more context to the situations. Having a more detailed background for the characters, loved the whole make believe part with the two of them it feels exactly like what Luz would do in her early childhood. Keep up the good work, this fanfic is more organized than most others.
Didn’t really like the whole bully angle, most isekai protagonist go through that and while exciting to see them overcome an obstacle it is to overused. Overall a great chapter characters fleshed out with personality hope to see this story last a long time.
I kind of liked the previous story where it ended in a hug from baby Luz, you don’t really read or watch anything like that anymore. Something completely random and at the same time a turning point that can change the entire story.
Just gonna say it, this character has more of a realistic sense than the previous one.
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"You should've let me at him! I won't rest until all lawyers are burned to the ground!" Steve yelled like a broken man from the hallways.
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